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“Apocalyptic dystopian fiction at its best. Angler’s sharp wit and dexterity with political themes are matched only by the thrilling suspense on every page.” —Lis Wiehl, New York Times bestselling author and FOX News correspondent

 

Everyone gets the Mark. It gives all the benefits of citizenship. Yet if getting the Mark is such a good thing, then why does it feel so wrong? 

Set in a future North America that is struggling to recover after famine and global war, Swipe follows the lives of three kids caught in the middle of a conflict they didn’t even know existed. United under a charismatic leader, every citizen of the American Union is required to get the Mark on their 13th birthday in order to gain the benefits of citizenship.  

The Mark is a tattoo that must be swiped by special scanners for everything from employment to transportation to shopping. It’s almost Logan Langly’s 13th birthday and he knows he should be excited about getting the Mark, but he hasn’t been able to shake the feeling he’s being watched. Not since his sister went to get her Mark five years ago . . . and never came back. 

When Logan and his friends discover the truth behind the Mark, will they ever be able to go back to being normal teenagers? Find out in the first book of this exciting series that is Left Behind meets Matched for middle-grade readers.

LanguageEnglish
PublisherThomas Nelson
Release dateApr 30, 2012
ISBN9781400320547

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  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    After reading the synopsis of this book, I was so excited to get into. Finally a book that I know will give me goosebumps as well as the truth of the Lord. First off, the plot is really good. I really loved the setting of the world that Logan is in. he is faced with lots of questions that he gets no answers too. He is searching for answer but his time is running out. The plot build up is sort of slow but quickly picks up the pace with much action by the markless. The world building of the fallen world with the ruin that are left to stand are great! I loved how easily the reader is able to let their imagination run away with them.Logan meets other characters that help him along way. Though I am glad they help him I am disappointed in one thing. The truth. God's Word. I was hoping that by the end of the book Logan would learn the real reason by the mark and not just because he is questioning if it is wrong or right. Know what I mean? Iwanted Logan to stand and be courageous!! Instead in the end, the reader is left with many questions and Logan on the run.Swipe is a great start of an awesome series. It has so much that can be build on, that the possibilities are endless. Never a dull moment, Swipe is great!
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    There are a lot of dystopian elements going on in here. Like a lot. Corrupt government. Check. Revised history. Check. Creepy ways to track all citizens. Check. Mysterious deaths. Check. Religion replaced with patriotism (The Inclusion). Check. Evil adults! Check, although that's not so much dystopian as MG/YA, but whatevs. So yeah, lots of things. They do all seem to nest pretty well and believably, which is good. Sometimes authors try to make too many things happen in their books, and it ends up feeling like a forced, cluttered mess, but not so Swipe.

    Swipe is getting added to the list of books that tells me to stop being all judgey judge about books based on the publisher. Like Halflings, Swipe is published by Thomas Nelson, a Christian publisher. I have nothing against Christians, but I cannot deal with inspirational fiction at all, like when every chapter starts with a Bible verse and everyone's always praying and praising the lord (Hallelujah!) every other paragraph. However, these books are reminders to me that just because a novel is published under the Christian fiction umbrella, it really doesn't have to mean that it's pushing a religious message all up in your face.

    Oddly, Swipe reminded me of The Immortal Rules, despite being for completely different age groups, and mostly different dystopians. What they share, though, is the mark. In Kagawa's I believe that the registered are branded or tattooed or something, which earns them a right to food from the vampire government. In Swipe, there's a similar system. People can choose not to be marked at the age of 13, but that means you're not getting anything. Son, you're on your own. Basically, the government is saying that unless you let us track you, you'll have to become a criminal to survive, so you're damned if you do and damned if you don't. Nice.

    The only thing that really didn't jive with me was the Dust. I have trouble seeing how the government could have trouble stopping that movement. I mean, they know where a lot of them are, and it's not like the people would really care. It just seems like, so far as resistance movements go, the Dust was pretty lame, and should have been easily nipped in the bud. Perhaps, though, this will receive explication later on.

    Much of the story reads like a dystopian mystery. Erin and Logan take on the role of teenage sleuths to figure out who is watching Logan, and what Erin's dad is doing in Spokie. Swipe reads somewhere between middle grade and young adult, perhaps ideally aimed at folks in their young teens. However, I found it to be a solid, fun dystopian read, and will be checking out book two, Sneak, for sure.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    This is a great apocalyptic dystopian novel. I really enjoyed it. I'm a big dystopian lover, so even though this was middle grade, it really caught my interest. Though the book is fiction based, it was easy for me to imagine that many of the things in the book could actually happen in the future - The Mark, war, famine, global union, technological advancement with governmental control. I really liked the main character, Logan Langley. Even though he seemed really paranoid in the beginning, which he ended up having good reason for, he displayed outstanding morals, character, and courage in the book. I liked Erin also, she was smart and funny, and even though she and Logan had different ideas about how things should be, they were still able to be good friends. I hope in the next book we get to learn a little bit more about the other characters also. The characters did seem mature for 12 and 13, but if you consider the era they lived in and the way society operated at that time, I would expect that age group to be more mature than today's typical 13 year old. Sometimes I think we don't give those in that age group enough credit. I believe they are a lot smarter than we realize.Swipe was filled with suspense, action, intrigue, and mystery. There was no foul language or sex, and I feel that this is an outstanding middle grade novel. I have two nephews that are 12 and 14, and I can't wait for them to read it. I think that even though Swipe is a really enjoyable work of fiction, that it has the potential to also cause many to stop and think about how things could possibly be in the future, and also challenge you to think about what kind of person you would be under those circumstances. Evan Angler has done a great job writing this novel and I am looking forward to the next book in the series, Sneak, which will come out in the fall.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Swipe is the first book in the Swipe Series by author Evan Angler. Swipe tells about Logan, a 12 year old boy who is paranoid that someone is watching him . . . unfortunately he's right - he IS being watched.I enjoyed this book immensely. It reminded me a little of the "Left Behind" series, but was different enough to capture and keep my interest on it's own. A well-written, intriguing adventure set in a time after civilization has been at war again, and everyone has been offered a "Mark" which allows them to get jobs at only 13 years old, buy whatever they want, whenever they want, and basically have as much "freedom" as those in charge allow. This story is scary in its realistic ideas, captivating as the reader feels the fear and distrust of a young boy who knows someone is watching him, and the devastating reality that everything he thinks to be true, is in fact lies.I highly recommend this book for readers age 11 and up. I'm looking forward to reading the second book in the series: Sneak, which is due to come out in September of 2012!
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    What if what everyone is telling you to believe was a lie? This is what happens to Logan Langly. He was almost 13. 13 is when you go and get your Mark. This is an important time in a person's life. Getting the Mark means you can buy things, get a job, become a responsible person in society... Logan isn't as excited as he should be. Years before when his sister, Lily, went to get her Mark, she never returned home. She flunked.Ever since then, Logan has had the feeling that he has been watched. He has to make sure his house is secure by checking everything over before he will be able to sleep. His parents think he is paranoid. Maybe he is, maybe there isn't anyone after him. Then there is the new girl at school, Erin. Erin comes from Beacon. Her father works for DOME or the Department of Marked Emergencies. They had her dad transferred here to help with some of the Markless in the area. Erin isn't too thrilled about this because her mother is still in Beacon and she wants her family intact. Her mission is to find a way to get her and her dad back to Beacon to be with her mother. What will happen to Logan and how is Erin involved? Is Logan really being watched, and if so, who is the one who is watching him? When I first read the synopsis of this book, it sounded like a good read, and it was. I will admit that I had a little trouble getting into the book because it gives you a lot of history at the beginning. It didn't really start to pick up until the latter half. Once I got intrigued by it, I couldn't put this book down. This book keeps you interested with all the action, secrets, and romance. In Swipe, there are multiple point of views, but you never feel as though you are getting whiplash from switching from person to person. I loved how Erin and Logan interacted and how they both felt differently about the Markless. I can easily see how this series could become a reality and that is what makes it a good read. I recommend this series to anyone who likes dystopian books.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    This book begins a middle grade dystopian trilogy. Logan Langly is the main character. He is approaching his thirteenth birthday when he will be eligible to get the Mark which makes him a citizen. With it, he can get a job, buy things, vote. But ever since his older sister Lily went for her mark and disappeared, Logan has felt like he is being watched and followed. His parents think he is paranoid.Erin Arbitor is a new student at Spokie Middle. She and her father have relocated to Spokie because her dad is doing "government work" for DOME which is the police arm of the new world government. Erin wants to be back home in Beacon with both of her parents. Her mother stayed behind for her job. Erin is an excellent computer hacker.Logan and Erin meet at school where he tries to convince her that he is being followed. Erin, having read her father's secret work files, thinks it would be a great idea to catch the criminal who is following Logan because it will get her and her father back to Beacon sooner.The two of them investigate and learn that what the government is telling its citizens is not necessarily the truth. Lots of threads are left hanging in this first episode of the Swipe trilogy making the next two books necessary.While the book is generally enjoyable, I found the slang used for the Markless didn't make much sense. Using miser, tightwad, cheapskate, and other money related terms as pejoratives was really distracting for me because I kept wondering how things related to money. I also felt that the adults in the story were more-or-less cardboard characters. I also know that, while middle grade kids think, they are adults, these characters were mature well beyond their age and pretty unrealistic.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I think this cover is so epic. I love when covers manage to capture an important part of this story and maintain the mystery to draw people in. Anyone who says don't judge a book by it's cover has never seen an amazing cover for a book yet. This is by far one of my favorite book covers.Swipe tells the story of a future America, once ravaged by war and separated based on differing ideals now united by one thing -- the Mark. The perspectives of the story shows the opposing views of a world that is as unfamiliar as it is familiar to the reader. Logan is afraid of the world ever since his big sister died while getting her Mark and with the day of his pledge coming up, he can't seem to think about anything else. Everyone tells him that he is being ridiculous -- that his fears are irrational and formed without sufficient evidence. Little do they know how right he really is. Erin is, well, proud to be a Mark bearing member of society and doesn't see any reason for Logan to fear. She is determined that everyone should see the benefits of being a member of this utopian society but where there is perfection on the surface, greater flaws simmer just beneath. These characters are about to realize just how big of a flaw is being hidden.Logan is an endearing character from the beginning with his almost paralyzing fear of everything. In many ways, he reminds me of a young child but that sort of behavior presents itself for a long time after the trauma occurs. It didn't take seeing his sister taken to prove to him that there is a reason he should fear his community and his government. He grows a lot throughout the course of the story, maturing beyond his fear of everything partly because of his crush and mostly because of what the situations demand. I can relate very well with the way he struggles with what is considered right and what is considered wrong by his society. I feel like I do that a lot with different things so it was nice to see it portrayed in a character. One thing I admired about him is how cautious he is about everything. He doesn't take anyone at their word, instead he allows his own reasoning and his own opinions to make up his own mind. So many characters are so trusting, blindly following other people, and believing that everyone deserves that amount of trust. That is what causes betrayal. Erin kind of maintains the role of a main character without being the complete center of the whole story. I had a different experience with her than I did with Logan because while his character was endearing, hers was off putting. She is extremely selfish, in the sense that she looks at everything to see what she has to gain from it. To a certain extent I think it is a defense mechanism of hers because she is pulled from her home, her life, and her mother. If I were in her position, yeah, that would be all I would think about. Especially if I could find a way back to her. This feeds into her need to appear stronger than she actually is. No one expects or anticipates that she should be strong after being up rooted but she is stubborn and that causes a lot of struggle for her throughout the story. Her biggest growth in the story is when she shows weakness and strength by betraying the society she has placed so much faith in. It showed me that despite her selfishness, a great part of her was actually selfless. I just didn't get to see it much.The Dust are the perceived bad guys for the bulk of the novel. I learned a lot about their lifestyle and about what this utopian society did to those who remained Markless. What was unique about it was that these people were more than what the society believed them to be. They had an unflinching faith in their cause that I think Logan probably should've been jealous of. How can they be so certain that their cause was right when he couldn't even decide if getting the Mark was the right idea? The best part of these "bad guys" was the fact that you really got to see into their lives through the alternating perspectives of the stories. Of course, their side of the story was few but it was nice to see who was behind the ominous group. Logan's sister became a sort of icon throughout the story, at least for me. I grew attached to a character that never really showed up in the story other than being mentioned. Her story as a girl who was essentially perfect in her family's eyes suddenly wasn't good enough in her society's. It made me question what I deemed perfect and beautiful compared to what really was. Who decides whether something is perfect? Society or us?I miss the days when getting a hug from a guy was pass out worthy. Oh, the joys of being young, right? I love simplicity in relationships and the build up to them if any occur. I hate relationships that just happen or suddenly appear. Not cool, not cool at all. The relationship ( I use the term loosely) between Erin and Logan flip flops between, well, awkward acquaintances, friends, friends pretending to be in a relationship, to a full out crush. Of course, the saying is a crush is meant to be crushed. I think we will see more occurrences of this duo throughout the series but that is just my assumption. There was a couple other little side relationships or hints toward crushes that potentially might bloom in the future. I can't wait to see what happens. Friendship played a huge role in the film both behind what created the Dust and what Logan depends on throughout the story. I learned a lot about the importance of friendship as well as how easily it is taken for granted. I liked this story. It was a great dystopian with a beautifully created society and culture that I think will develop into something extremely captivating as the series progresses. Check it out!
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    The world that Evan Angler builds in Swipe is, well...creepy. As stated in the synopsis, at the age of thirteen all citizens are required to get "marked" by the government. The mark is essentially Big Brother's human bar code. Without a mark, you are not eligible to earn money, spend money or have any societal benefits. Those who choose to remain markless end up squating in the slums, scrounging or committing crimes just to eat.I loved the premise of this world, though admittedly the idea freaks me right the hell out. I can imagine a world where the government has a complete 'nanny state' control on it's citizens and I can see them spinning it as a good idea. Perhaps the fact that I can imagine it, is what freaks me out about it. Angler does a great job at taking the imagination to the next level.Logan is a great character. He is so paranoid and scared and written with such care that you really can't help but feel for him. I practically tiptoed around in the dark with him. The other main character, Erin, left me wanting. I couldn't really connect with her. She's a tough girl, brave, confident but not empathetic. That was hard for me to like. She just wasn't very endearing most of the time. But a few of the other characters made up for what I was lacking in her.All in all the story is a good one. My only real fault with this story is that, for a middle grade book, it lacked in action and humor. There is a bit of both, mind you. I'm just not sure there is enough of either to really hold most younger audiences attention.Swipe ends on quite a cliff hanger and I am anxious to read book #2, Sneak which is due out in September. I think it promises much more action, to which I am looking forward to.My Rating 3.5/5 Stars
  • Rating: 1 out of 5 stars
    1/5
    FINALLY! I think I started this book about 3 or 4 months ago and I’m just now finishing it. Reading this book was like pulling teeth for me. I had to force myself to read it little by little.I always feel bad when writing a completely bad review of something, especially when I was taught that if you don’t have anything nice to say don’t say anything at all. However, I agreed to review this book and give my honest opinion, so that’s what I’m going to do.Usually, one of my favorite things about reading Dystopian is learning about this new world that the author has created. I was very disappointed in how we learned about this future world. The only way we learn about it is through Logan’s studying for his Pledge exam, or just random passages about how things were before. This seemed like a very dry way of presenting the information, almost like reading a history textbook for another world.The character development just wasn’t there. I didn’t feel like I really knew Logan, Erin, Dane, Hailey, or any of the other characters. The main character could have been beaten over the head and about to die and I had no problem putting the book down right then. No part of me cared what happened next.I was going to say how boring I thought the story was, but it really wasn’t that nothing was happening because it was- CONSTANTLY. I think the reason it came across as boring was that there was too much of it (I didn’t think that was possible) and it was all very anti-climatic and just kept happening. Problem arose… problem solved…. arose…. solved, and even the things that didn’t get resolved right away were very predictable, which took away the excitement.The ending was pretty dramatic, definitely trying to hook you for the next book in the series. Unfortunately, I didn’t take the bait and will not be continuing on with the next book.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I loved this book. I am purchasing it for my school bookshelves. I think this will appeal to people of all ages. As an adult I can see our society headed this way. I can only imagine the fear Logan felt when his sister didn’t return from her trip to get the Mark. I was concerned in the beginning of the book that he was just being paranoid that he was being watched and followed.Erin’s move to Spokie made me wonder why her mother did not come with them. Her father can stop a question from anyone; just by telling them he works for the government. Any government that is this secretive and deceptive can’t be that great. This book did have something unique that stuck with me. In the beginning of the book Evan’s house was describe. Most of the houses are vertical. This means there is one room per floor. I thought this would seem very strange as a living situation. You couldn’t just walk across the hall to your sister’s room. You would need to go up or down a floor to see them.This book has enough suspense to hopefully hold the reader until the second book comes out in September. It is called Sneak, and will hopefully answer many questions that are left unanswered. I am grateful to Thomas Nelson’s BookSneeze program for allowing me to read and review this book. It is one I will promote to my students next year.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I began reading the second novel in this series first, which was a mistake. It kept me confused about the meaning of several tools they use. So, I picked up Swipe, and totally entered this dystopian world of the future of evolved technologies and one world vision. After the “Total War” everybody is thankful just to be allowed to live, and doesn’t examine the requirements of the leaders. Each person must swear their allegiance and then they receive a tattoo like marking on their arm that allows them to function in society. When Logan’s sister dies when she goes in to make her pledge, Logan’s family begins to fall apart, and Logan believes that he is being watched. I definitely think that this series should be a hit with middle school and older students. The writing is tense enough that you will check over your shoulder to make sure you are not being watched. The book is clean, but the sense of ‘big evil government’ permeates the story. A must read for dystopian lovers, as well as those who enjoy a good mystery.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    In the future, all individuals are eligible to become citizens at the age of thirteen. All they have to do is take the pledge and get the mark, a nano-tattoo on their wrists. The mark allows them to purchase items, take buses, vote and enjoy all rights of full citizenship. As Logan nears his thirteenth birthday he becomes increasingly paranoid, believing he is being followed and watched.I highly enjoyed this book. It was a quick read and the plot moved at a great pace. The characters seemed to be normal teenagers yet did not come across as stereotypical. Overall, this book was very well written. I believe any middle-schooler or teenager would enjoy Swipe.

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Swipe - Evan Angler

SWIPE

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© 2011 Evan Angler

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Library of Congress Cataloging-in-Publication Data

Angler, Evan.

  Swipe / by Evan Angler.

    p. cm.

  Summary: In a world where everyone must be Marked in order to gain citizenship and participate in society, a group of youngsters who questions the system struggles to identify the true enemy—while pursuing a group of Markless teenagers.

  ISBN 978-1-4003-1836-0 (pbk.)

  [1. Science fiction.] I. Title.

  PZ7.A5855Sw 2011

  [Fic]—dc23

          2011026611

Printed in the United States of America

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For my family,

who makes it possible

CONTENTS

PROLOGUE

THE FRIENDS IN THE DUST

ONE

LOGAN LANGLY, BOY WHO CRIED WOLF

TWO

ERIN ARBITOR AND THE GOVERNMENT WORK

THREE

FIRST DAY, NEW FACE

FOUR

THE INVITATION

FIVE

SPY VS. SPY

SIX

REGROUP

SEVEN

DUST ON THE LAM

EIGHT

LOGAN’S MANY FRIENDS

NINE

DANE HAROLD’S QUIET ENCORE

TEN

STREET CLEANING

ELEVEN

THE MEETING OF THE MINDS

TWELVE

PLEDGE

ABOUT THE AUTHOR

PROLOGUE

THE FRIENDS

IN THE DUST

THE MOON WAS THE COLOR OF BLOOD, AND THE clouds moving past were pale like bone. Blake sat atop the slide in the starlit playground and noticed this, waiting.

Two of his friends ran and yelled below him, chasing one another around the wooden castle, jumping and doing flips off the swing set until one fell on his face and cried, New game! while his nose streamed moon-hued rivulets and the other said, I’ve won, I’ve won, I’ve won. Farther off, a girl and boy sat on the ends of a teeter-totter, balanced, motionless, suspended, and ready.

It was fast approaching midnight, but not one of these teenagers worried about curfew or bedtime or accountability. Not one of them thought of families calling them home or of parents grounding them for bad behavior. They were alone. And the Dust played by its own rules.

In his way, Blake looked forward to these playground nights, grim as they inevitably became. This one had been a long time coming, and the flustered butterflies of anticipation taunted and amused him.

He squinted to see. At the edge of the park, a small girl had appeared, groggy and in pajamas, walking as if still in her own nightmare.

It was her.

She had come.

All at once, the five kids on the playground went still and silent. All five watched as the girl ambled through the grass and shadows, still holding a tattered half of their invitation in her hand.

Blake slid down the slide and balanced on the wooden lip at the edge of the cedar chips.

Meg, he said.

She nodded. Under her left eye was a green and brown bruise stretching from ear to nose, and it shone painfully in the twilight. But the rest of her was sturdy and thick, and coarse blond bangs framed a square face that was brave and defiant and anything but fragile.

The Dust encircled her slowly while Meg stood and stared them down one by one. But she trembled slightly, and it was too warm a night for that. Blake saw this and frowned.

There’s nothing to be afraid of, he said.

But when Meg turned to run, the kids behind her proved Blake very wrong.

Her struggle was brief. But there was nothing gentle about the way the Dust blindfolded Meg, and tied her hands, and dragged her clumsily into the shadowed woods beneath the quiet cover of night.

ONE

LOGAN LANGLY, BOY

WHO CRIED WOLF

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THE LAST THING LOGAN WOULD WANT YOU TO know about him was that he was afraid of the dark.

But Logan was afraid of the dark, and if you ever asked him about it, ever brought it up to his face and maybe teased him a little even, he’d stop you right where you stood and tell you it was for a very good reason.

It was because Logan Paul Langly was being watched.

He didn’t know who, and he didn’t know how. But every night, when Dad pulled up the covers, turned out the light, and shut the door behind him after demanding sweet dreams and tight sleep, Logan Paul Langly found himself on the wrong end of a spyglass.

So when Logan awoke with a start—even in the comfort of his own bed, even in the warmth of the late-summer evening that was anything but dark and stormy, the weekend before his first day of eighth grade—it was with well-worn urgency that he sat up, rubbed the sleep from his eyes, and scanned the room for signs of intrusion.

Tonight, there was only one. His window rested an inch above its seal, and a breeze dried the nightmare sweat from his forehead.

Logan couldn’t remember if he’d left it open, but if you’d asked him in that moment, he would have told you he had not.

Had his father? Had his father walked to the window during their conversation that night? Maybe for some cool air in the midst of their heated discussion? Logan replayed the scene in his head.

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He had been focused on his breathing, controlled and steady to keep himself calm. He had pulled the covers back but was standing a few feet away from the bed, just in case someone was under it, waiting for an ankle.

I’m too old for this, he thought, and he shook his head with just a little bit of shame.

Whatcha doin’, bud? Mr. Langly said in the doorway behind him, and Logan jumped as if the words were a spider falling down his back. Imagination got hold again?

Logan nodded but didn’t turn around. Instead he crawled into bed and pulled the covers high up over himself, curling up and facing the wall. He could feel his father sit beside him, hunched over and looking at his hands, folded and resting on his lap.

You know, Mr. Langly said, I think school’s gonna be awesome this year. I think school’s gonna be its best yet. You’ve got that government class ninth period—I know you’re gonna love learning about all that stuff, and you’ve got gym and art and technology and—

Dad, Logan said, and his dad stopped abruptly. I’m not worried about classes. The two were quiet for a minute. Mr. Langly wondered if he should take the opportunity to ask what Logan was worried about, and Logan wondered if he should say. But Dad pretty much knew the answer.

The Mark, right?

Logan stiffened at the sound of the word. Finally he said, We’re all turning thirteen this year. Everyone’s getting it. It’s just a matter of time.

Logan knew that if he was going to talk about this with anyone, it had to be Dad.

You did not talk about the Mark with Mom.

Look, Mr. Langly said. This year . . . is going to be . . . it’s going to be great. But he frowned and sat still for several breaths, and Logan believed him less with each one.

. . . three.

. . . four.

. . . five.

I remember when I got the Mark, Mr. Langly said, finally. "Just after you were born, when the program began. They give you a spoonful of nanosleep, so it doesn’t hurt. You just go in, answer some questions . . . sit back, and before you know it, you’re Marked and on your way. It’s nothing. Honestly.

"And then it’s great! It’s like playing your first hover-dodge game, or getting your first tablet, or going off to school, or . . . I mean, you’re free! With the Mark, you’re free. You can get a job, you can shop for things . . . if you want more juice, you can just go out and get a carton yourself. You won’t even have to wait for Mom or me to come home—"

Logan rolled over and pulled the covers away from his head to look his father in the eyes. "Juice?"

Or something. His dad smiled. "Why? What would you get?"

Logan refused to think about it, refused to allow himself even the slightest excitement over the Mark, so he and his dad had a little unspoken staring contest instead. They did this from time to time, just reach a moment of disagreement when Logan would stare, and Mr. Langly was a good sport, so he’d always stare back.

You can’t pretend it didn’t happen, Logan said. You can’t pretend it didn’t kill her.

And Logan’s dad sighed.

That pretty much ended the staring contest that night.

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In all of it, Logan couldn’t remember his dad opening the window, couldn’t remember the draft coming in and animating the blinds’ soft rat-a-tat against the pane, as they did so ominously now.

So who had done it? Who had touched the window, and when? There had to be a reasonable explanation, but Logan couldn’t think of one.

Why could he never think of one?

For years, it had been this way, off and on. He’d walk home from school on the familiar sidewalks of his town, looking over his shoulder the whole way. He’d finish homework on his lap with his back to a wall, his desk beside him empty and gathering dust, so as always to keep an eye on the room he was in. He’d brush his teeth at night transfixed by the door behind him in the mirror, his eyes trained on the knob that at any time could betray him, could turn or jump or jiggle. A quiet moment was one spent listening for footsteps, for leaves rustling in the fall or snow crunching in the winter. Time alone was time spent watching the movement in the shadows.

Being underage, Logan couldn’t see a doctor without a Marked guardian, so at his moments of highest desperation, when his parents had had enough and didn’t know what else to do, his dad would take him—drag him—to the Center. Logan would sit in the examination room, prodded and scared, while Mr. Langly said to the doctor things like We don’t know what’s wrong with him . . . and Ever since his sister . . . just exactly as if Logan wasn’t there, wasn’t sitting right there and crying silently as the doctor shone lights at him and shook his head coolly and clicked his tongue, saying words like traumatized, paranoid, delusional.

Over time, Logan learned to carry his fear. He learned to swallow it, deny it, live with it. His accounts of faces in windows and footprints on floors, of sounds at night and doors opening and closing on their own, of being followed or tracked or who-knows-what-else, had all been brushed off so many times by his parents and teachers and adults of any kind that sometimes Logan wondered what was real and what was imaginary.

But his sister had died. That happened. And ever since, Logan was about one floorboard creak away from certainty that someone, somewhere, was out to get him too.

3

His parents didn’t know it, but Logan kept a flashlight hidden under his pillow. The switch to the ceiling light was all the way across the room, and he would have had to get up out of bed to turn it on. That was unacceptable. So Logan sat, now, back to the wall, covered in blankets up to his neck, and his hand braced the flashlight against his cheek to steady the beam of light as he swept it around each corner of the room.

There was nothing immediately out of the ordinary, except for the opened window. No mud on the floor, no stuff out of place . . .

He turned the flashlight around, pointing the unlit end of it away from him, and flipped a switch along its handle. The main light turned off, and out of its other end, the violet haze of a black light began to glow.

Black lights were useful. They revealed lint, smudges, blood, traces not seen by the unaided eye . . . and most importantly to Logan, they showed nanodust. There wasn’t a Marked person around who didn’t leave a cloud of it behind.

Tonight, though, like every night, Logan saw nothing—just the single small trail left by his father, an empty room with an unpleasant draft, and a window slightly ajar.

Time to check the rest of the house.

Logan tiptoed to the corner of his room and called for the elevator, which arrived promptly and took him to ground level.

Like many private residences in the town of Spokie, Logan’s house had just one room to a floor, with an elevator connecting them and an open-air spiraling staircase outside in case of emergency, or for use during the nice summer months. Each room had panoramic windows and doors in two of the corners—one to the elevator and one to the outside staircase. The height of these houses varied widely and could reach higher than twenty floors, but Logan’s had only eleven. This was good. More would have taken longer. Because every night, without fail, after his parents had tucked him into bed and gone to sleep themselves, it was Logan’s job—self-appointed— to look thoroughly through each floor, bottom to top, flashlight in hand for signs of even the slightest suspicious thing.

Paranoid? To Logan, it was practical. These were simply the habits any boy might develop if he were certain that someone was out to get him.

The first floor was the foyer, lined with pictures of the family and hangers for coats and not much else. Nothing unusual this evening, so Logan double checked the front door’s dead bolt and moved on.

The second floor was the kitchen. Knives were all in place. That was a good sign.

The third floor was the dining room, only ever used for holidays and entertaining guests, and tonight it was as empty as expected.

Fourth floor was the bathroom, but no one lurked in the shower tonight. Floor five was the living room, cluttered but hardly suggesting a break-in. Six was Mr. Langly’s office, and the holograms of his latest architectural projects glowed untouched. Seven was Logan’s bedroom, which he skipped for now.

Eight was a rec room that no one ever used. It had been Logan’s room up until five years ago—right there was where his bed used to be—but he’d moved down a floor when his sister passed away. Because she had lived on the ninth, and because every night while she was alive she’d tap a rhythm for Logan to hear through the floorboards. Shave-and-a-haircut, it went, and Logan would throw both shoes up at his ceiling. Tap-tap, they went. Two-bits. That was how they always said good night. When Lily died, it didn’t take more than one tapless night for Logan to know that he couldn’t live under that ceiling anymore.

Lily’s room, nine, was a floor frozen in time like a museum of her last days, like one big held breath. It was Logan’s least favorite to visit. A chill ran through him each time he did, and his eyes watered and made it hard for him to see, but still he never skipped it—nine was the perfect place for an intruder to hide. Tonight, though, like each night, there was no one there, or at least no one Logan could find, and he wasted no time stepping back into the elevator, knocking a soft tap-tap against the wall as he did.

Ten was his parents’ bedroom, which Logan didn’t need to check, so he moved straight to Mrs. Langly’s study on eleven, filled to the brim with screens and meteorology tablets and satellite dishes, though no spies or burglars or murderers. It was beginning to look as if Logan would wake to see another day.

On the roof was the Langlys’ yard. It was too small to play football up there, but it had a nice view. The grass shook gently in the evening wind, and having now checked each floor, Logan relaxed and allowed himself the drowsiness leading so pleasantly to sleep. He took the elevator down to his room on seven and crawled back under the covers, relieved to have made it through another night.

Except!

There! On his desk! The picture he kept . . . had it moved?

In its frame was the last snapshot taken of Logan and his sister, on the eve of her death, smiling over presents with the blur of family celebration behind them. Logan always kept this picture positioned so he could see it from his bed. Now it rested ever so slightly pointed away, his view of it not quite straight on, the desk space in front of it just slightly wet with water that should have been in the glass beside it.

Who had been there? Who had snuck in through the window? Who had tipped the glass and knocked the picture askew?

No one.

No one, Logan told himself. You’re being insane.

. . . Right?

And Logan’s heart snapped in his chest—so hard that it hurt—when across the room, the door to the outside stairway clicked quietly shut.

TWO

ERIN ARBITOR AND THE

GOVERNMENT WORK

1

ERIN ARBITOR WAS AWARE OF HER FATHER’S voice beside her, but she couldn’t have told you what he was saying. His chatter filled their magnetrain compartment like a bored conductor’s while her mind wandered further and further away, past the blur of unfamiliar tracks, past cities and towns, over mountains and across rivers, all the way back to Beacon City, her city, half a continent away and nothing like the humdrum destination she rode to now.

Spokie, she thought. It would never be home.

—don’t know why we couldn’t have caught an earlier train, Mr. Arbitor was saying. Soon as we get in we’ll have to register you for school; then I need to get straight to the office and set up while you unpack at the apartment.

Fine, Dad, Erin said. She held her pet iguana up to the window so it could see an oily and polluted Lake Erie off in the distance.

It’s just a lot to do in one afternoon—

I know, Dad.

—and you and I are both gonna need to hit the ground running tomorrow. Mr. Arbitor shook his head. Not even there yet and we’re already behind. Kept saying we should have left on Friday . . .

Erin rested Iggy on her lap and emerged reluctantly from her daydream, caustic and angry. If only there could have been some way for us to stay with Mom in Beacon instead of uprooting our lives for no good reason. She shook her head, feigning sympathy. "Then you wouldn’t be suffering such a terrible inconvenience."

It was your mother’s decision not to come with us, Mr. Arbitor said forcefully. He ignored Erin’s tone. She knows how important this job is. And not just to me—to the Union.

Erin sighed, caught square in the middle of a standoff between two strong-headed, working parents.

Just two months ago, Mr. Arbitor had surprised his family with the announcement that he had received a promotion at work, and that they would be moving to Spokie to accommodate it. Erin’s mom, a top economic software analyst on Barrier Street in Beacon City, had told him precisely what he could do with that idea. Of course, Mr. Arbitor was certain it was only a matter of time before his wife gave in and found a way to keep the family together, but so far, she had not, and Erin was left with no choice but to get used to a new town a thousand miles away while her dad played a game of spousal career chicken and her mom continued enjoying life in the Big City back east.

Well—anything for the Union, Erin said sarcastically, and her father rolled his eyes.

I mean it, he said. I took this job with good reason. You’ll feel better about it once your mother’s out here with us.

"She’s not coming out here with us, Dad! She’s waiting for you to come to your senses and tell DOME you can’t just uproot your family

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