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Your storyboard will be graded out of 16. Your storyboard will be assessed on the following:
1) Writing will be graded on spelling, grammar, and punctuation. This includes correct
spelling, correct use of capitals, correct use of full stops and commas, and correct
demonstration of direct and indirect speech. (Grade 1/2)
Some grammatical errors Kayla but overall you have written thoughtfully and accurately.
2) Your narratives will be graded on a clear demonstration of a beginning, middle, and
end. The narratives will be graded on how clearly locations and events are
represented. (Grade 3/ 3)
This is a fabulous story Kayla, with a clear beginning, middle and end. Your story uses
characters well, such as including a protagonist and a minor character. You have used
descriptive language really well, including words such as amazing, lovely and enchanted.
3) Your narratives will also be graded on how strongly your protagonist (main character)
is developed. Your protagonist will be graded on how well their personality and
physical characteristics are detailed. (Grade 1/3)
Although your story had two clear characters, your story relied on the audience already being
familiar with who Baby Bugs and Daffy are. Try to provide more detail as to who your
characters are. Refer to your character profile activities as a guide.
4) Your storyboards will be graded on how clearly your narrative has a purpose, and how
clearly your protagonist has a purpose. (Grade 3/3)
Well done Kayla, your story and protagonist had a clear purpose. Your story had suspense,
and it was clear how brave Baby Bugs was reacting so quickly, and putting the safety of
others before himself.
5) Storyboards will be graded on your sketches. Sketches should be accurate in scale,
should be neat, and should be clear to the viewer what is being displayed. Each frame
should clearly link with one another. (Grade 2/3)
Fantastic effort using one point perspective so accurately, your drawings of a train and train
track are incredibly accurately. Its lovely to see you applying earlier lessons in these
drawings. It is a shame you were running out of time, and the last few sketches have been
rushed.
6) Storyboards will also be graded on presentation. Storyboards should be legible,
should be neat, and should be properly cared for. (Grade out of 2/2)
Great job here Kayla, your storyboard is clear, and easy for the viewer to follow. Work on
your time management to maintain your standard of work is consistent from beginning to
end.
Overall grade: 12/16
3) Your narratives will also be graded on how strongly your protagonist (main character)
is developed. Your protagonist will be graded on how well their personality and
physical characteristics are detailed. (Grade /3)
4) Your storyboards will be graded on how clearly your narrative has a purpose, and how
clearly your protagonist has a purpose. (Grade /3)