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An observation or
question I
received
Leonardo DiCaprio
Might Be A Human
Puppy may be one of
the weirdest articles one
can come across
proving that articles do
not have to be formal
all the time. Buzzfeed is
one source that is
known for its
miscellaneous and
random topics.
Awesome! Solid
thesis. To make it
top-notch, consider
specifying which
conventions and
moves you'll be
using to back up
this claim.
The rhetorical
features that are
present across the
sources demonstrate
the techniques that
authors often use to
be persuasive
Having a more
specific topic
sentence increases
the quality of the
structure and makes
it clearer for readers
to understand what is
going on in the essay.
OK, description is
good, but what
about evaluation?
Can you tie this
back to your
argument -- back to
the "so whaT?"
Tying my sentence
back in with the
thesis ensures that the
essay stays on track
and isnt deviating
from the focus.
Not specific
enough. I'm
wondering: what's
coming up in this
para?
Backing up my claim
with further
explanation clarifies
any confusion or
questions the reader
may have.
The concrete
evidence is not as
important when
wanting to examine
the larger conceptual
picture.
to create laughter
amongst the
audience. The
informal keywords
such as idiot or
wtf (Lee) set the
So how/why,
exactly, does this
stuff make for a
more 'outstanding"
(you said that in
your thesis) piece?
casual tone
Is it just because
more readers will
access it? Or is
there anything else
deeper on the line?
because of
predetermined societal
expectations that
discourage the use of
negative language.