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Text from my
initial WP
submission:
An observation
or question I
received from
De Piero or a
classmate:
The change(s) I
made to what I
initially wrote: (ie,
the change[s] I
made to column 1)
I need a specific,
driving thesis
statement, Bernice.
What, exactly, are
you going to be
arguing here?
It gives a clear
argument for my
readers to follow and
gives my work a claim
to relate back to.
favorite news
broadcasting channel,
hockey club,
whatever.
Social networks
audiences are generally
affiliated with
emojis are
commonly used for
showing a current
Ahhhhh! Attack of
the 2-pageparagraph!
It helped to create a
logical progression
of my argument and
structure my main
ideas in a way that
keeps my readers
attention.
A genre is a repeated
rhetorical situation
whose content is
determined by us, the
people (Dirk, 20).
It makes my argument
more convincing.
designed to appeal
to a younger
audience
This is supposed to
make my claims, in
supporting my
argument, more
convincing.
WP 2 Revision Matrix
Text from my
initial WP
submission:
An observation or
question I received
from De Piero or a
classmate:
The change(s) I
made to what I
initially wrote:
(ie, the change[s] I
made to column 1)
How this
change impacts
my paper:
However, just
because the argument
was presented with
moves and rhetoric
does not mean that
each move and
rhetorical device was
effective in aiding
the authors
argument and
convincing the
readers.
I created a paragraph to
analyze and compare
each authors point of
view regarding dance
It changed the
structure of my paper.
OK, so this is an
organizational/structure:
what's the progression of your
argument?
..the conventions of
this genre consist of:
personal opinion
throughout the
article..
I added in textual
evidence from her post
of her opinion.
This makes my
argument more
effective by showing
and comparing the
differences of her
genre from the other
scholarly article
authors.