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Word Meanings Matter: Cultivating English Vocabulary Knowledge in Fifth-Grade SpanishSpeaking Language Minority Learners
Author(s): JEANNETTE MANCILLA-MARTINEZ
Source: TESOL Quarterly, Vol. 44, No. 4 (December 2010), pp. 669-699
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minority
outcomes.
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=
49) in a
samples of fifth graders (N
urban
low-income
Latino,
predominantly
and
vocabulary
English
Pre-
school.
and
posttest
students
group
were
generally
at
better
their
determining
of
the
20-week
intervention,
even
though
writing
instruction
was
not
and
productively
use
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newly
taught
words
is discussed.
are approximately
98 million ethnic minority group members
of
in the United
the
33%
States, with
There (or
country's population)
the
and
fastest
Latinos
comprising
largest
growing segment of this
the past 30 years the
Census
Over
Bureau,
(U.S.
2005).
population
number of school-age children who spoke a language other than English
at home, known as language minority
learners, nearly tripled
(LM)
to 10.6 million; U.S. Department
of Education,
National
(3.8 million
Statistics, NCES,
2007a), with Spanish being the
statistics
have clear and immediate
These
language.
as the number
children
for
of Latino
U.S.
is
schools,
implications
to
to
decades
in
the
continue
increase
(Harwood,
coming
expected
Carlson, Asencio, & Miller, 2002). Of concern is that this
Leyendecker,
LM learners accounts
of Spanish-speaking
rapidly growing population
TESOL
QUARTERLY
2010
669
for a disproportionate
of struggling comprehenders
percentage
(August
& Shanahan,
2006; NCES,
2007b). Given that Latino families continue
to be overrepresented
8c Paez,
(Suarez-Orozco
poor
among America's
a
status
and
is
well-known
risk
associated
that
low-income
factor
2002)
outcomes
with poor academic
(Hart 8c Risley, 1995), a considerable
Latino
of Spanish-speaking
students is doubly at-risk for
proportion
school failure. It is beyond
the scope of this article to attempt to
status on
the effect of LM status from low socioeconomic
disentangle
student academic outcomes, but it is clear that these variables tend to be
to successful academic
obstacles
confounded,
creating compounding
outcomes for the growing population
of low-income LM students. Many
factors are associated
with LM
students'
reading
comprehension
of
continue to emerge
difficulties, but low levels
vocabulary knowledge
as key impediments
to successful comprehension
(Garcia, 1991; Nagy,
of Health
and Human
1997; Stahl 8c Nagy, 2006; U.S. Department
Institutes of Health, National
Institute of Child Health
Services, National
and Human Development,
the
NICHD,
2000; Verhoeven,
1990). Despite
10-11 years) LM
students'
literacy outcomes.
LITERATURE REVIEW
the poor academic outcomes of many LM learners at
Notwithstanding
all grade levels, reading research has tended to focus on the reading
of young monolingual
development
English
speakers
(e.g., NICHD,
2000; Snow, Burns, & Griffin, 1998), and that which has been conducted
with LM learners has similarly focused on young children (for a review,
see Lesaux,
research
and
Koda,
2006). Thus
Siegel, & Shanahan,
practice
on word
skills. However,
reading
comprehension
converging
learners tend to develop relatively strong word reading skills, but often
without the necessary
skills to support comprehension
(e.g.,
language
8c
Hoover
& Gough,
Verhoeven,
2003;
1990; Hutchinson,
Droop
Smith, & Connors,
2003; Proctor, Carlo, August, & Snow,
Whiteley,
2005;
670
Proctor, August,
Carlo,
&
Snow,
2006; Verhoeven,
1990, 2000).
TESOL QUARTERLY
Thus
distinction
between
word
and knowledge
of the
reading
of
the
in
words
read
is
under
meanings
being
especially
important
LM
It
learners'
is
estimated
that
students
standing
literacy development.
at least 95% of the
need to know (not simply recognize and/or decode)
in text for successful comprehension
words they encounter
(Calder?n
et al., 2005; Lipson & Wixson,
2003). Estimates of words learned during
a typical school year range from 1,000 (Goulden, Nation, & Read, 1990)
to 3,000 (Nagy & Herman,
1987); although clearly most of these words
are learned
instruction has also been
incidentally, explicit vocabulary
to contribute
to word
found
2003).
learning
(e.g., Biemiller,
the early vocabulary knowledge
that many
Considering
disadvantage
LM learners face, a sole reliance on incidental vocabulary
learning for
this group of learners is both impractical and negligent. However,
only
on LM
five vocabulary
intervention
studies have focused
learners
et al., 2005; Carlo et al., 2004; Perez, 1981; Ramirez,
1986;
(Calder?n
1990), and only one (Carlo et al., 2004) has targeted
Vaughn-Shavuo,
students.
upper-elementary
and they dictated their own sentences using the target words.
meanings,
In contrast, the other group
received instruction
(the control group)
focused
on
individual
sentence
contexts
(i.e.,
the
sentences
containing
671
an
transition from a Spanish
reading program. However,
English
additional goal of the intervention was on building English vocabulary.
Thus, in the 90-min lessons, vocabulary was a major focus, as 30 min were
to oral
activities
around
devoted
revolving
grade-level
language
on
children's
literature. Their results revealed modest
positive effects
most
and
Carlo
and
students' English
recently,
vocabulary.
Finally,
a 15-week vocabulary
intervention with
conducted
(2004)
colleagues
LM
learners.
found
that, while the
fifth-grade Spanish-speaking
They
a
was
to
3045-min
intervention
of
their
greater on
day
impact
on
were
there
than
vocabulary
reading
comprehension,
significant
in both domains.
improvements
role in evaluating
students' academic
increasingly prominent
a
after
the
limitation
in the field is that
primary grades,
key
performance
none of the vocabulary
to date have
intervention studies conducted
plays
examined
writing
outcomes.
knowledge
to postulate
It seems reasonable
that vocabulary
instruction might
result in improved writing outcomes, but there is a surprisingly limited
research base on the effect of vocabulary
instruction on students'
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(Duin 8c
writing, even amongst native-English-speaking
populations
even
8c
is
to
Graham
It
thus
difficult
draw
Perin, 2007).
Graves, 1987;
tentative conclusions
about
the impact of vocabulary
instruction on
students' writing and particularly difficult to ascertain the nature of this
LM learners. To my knowledge,
for Spanish-speaking
only
relationship
four studies have directly investigated
of
the writing development
LM
learners
&
Prater, 1994; Davis, Carlisle,
(Bermudez
Spanish-speaking
& Beeman,
& Snow, 1989).
1999; Ferris & Politzer,
1981; Lanauze
none
of
these
studies
examined
the
However,
relationship
potential
between vocabulary and writing development.
Students need vocabulary
to write, but the only evidence available on the role of vocabulary
in
comes
second
from
language
writing
English-as-a-foreign-language
context of LM learners differs
(EFL) college students. The educational
in substantive ways from that of older EFL students, greatly limiting the
that can be drawn from EFL work to the LM learner
generalizations
EFL
studies with college
school-age
population.
Notwithstanding,
students indeed find that a key determinant
in nonnative
English
speakers' overall writing quality is vocabulary
(e.g., Leki & Carson, 1994;
lack of empirical
research
Raimes,
1985; Walters & Wolf,
1996). The
investigating this potential relationship amongst the large and growing
of school-age LM learners is a major limitation in the literacy
population
research field.
Because
receptive vocabulary knowledge
generally precedes produc
tive vocabulary knowledge
1996; Nation,
1990;
(Laufer, 1998; Meara,
that students, and
Pearson, Hiebert, & Kamil, 2007), it can be expected
to actively
in particular LM learners, will require ample opportunities
use newly
are
in
oral
able to use
taught vocabulary
language before they
the new words in their writing. To date, very few studies have examined
students' use of newly taught vocabulary
in writing (Bravo 8c Tilson,
Lee
&
2006; Lee,
2003;
Muncie,
2006). As part of a larger study
an
the
effects
of
examining
integrated science-literacy curriculum, Bravo
and Tilson
second- and third-grade students' use of
(2006) analyzed
in writing, finding that students spontaneously
used
vocabulary
use
in
science
words
their
The
authors
that
suggest
newly taught
writing.
in writing represents growth in science
of newly taught vocabulary
knowledge and also indicates that students have productive control over
an analysis of whether
science vocabulary. However,
students' overall
science
673
=
65 students, and Lee and Muncie
48)
(2006) investigated learners' (N
use of target vocabulary and how their target vocabulary use influenced
their lexical frequency profile (see Laufer 8c Nation,
1995, for details).
not
Like Bravo and Tilson
Lee
did
(2006),
(2003)
investigate the effects
in reading instruction on students' overall
of vocabulary encountered
considered
the relationship
between
writing quality. Lee and Muncie
use
in
encountered
and
learners'
of
the
vocabulary
reading
vocabulary
in writing,
in writing quality, finding
that
improvements
including
teacher elicitation, explicit explanation,
discussion and negotiation, and
to target vocabulary
increase students' productive vocabulary
exposure
use in
like
the
other two studies, student income levels
writing. However,
were not reported, effectively limiting our understanding
of whether
can be expected
to be replicated
these findings
with low-income
populations.
research-based
be attended
Components
to.
vocabulary
of Effective
instruction
Vocabulary
components
and
strategies
must
Instruction
based
integral part of the puzzle. The goal of explicit instruction is for students
to learn the meanings
of words across various contexts to ultimately
Researchers
agree that the specific
improve their literacy outcomes.
to aid students'
words to be taught should be guided by their potential
text
of
and
that
words
students are
and/or
concepts
understanding
to
encounter
should
be
likely
relatively frequently
targeted (e.g., Beck,
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up with monolingual
English speakers. Further, the target vocabulary for
instruction should be presented
in meaningful,
engaging contexts that
are not only relevant to students' interests
(e.g., Carlo et al., 2004) but
serve
to bolster their overall background
that also
knowledge. Finally, an
area that is seldom attended
to is ensuring that students are provided
to actively use newly taught vocabulary, both orally
with opportunities
a major form of evaluation
and in writing. Writing becomes
after the
on average, over one-quarter
for
all
of
students
and,
primary grades
Latino
in writing may
PRESENT STUDY
Given that LM students tend to have both less breadth and less depth
of vocabulary knowledge and knowing that vocabulary is strongly related
to students' overall school success, LM students with limited vocabularies
are very disadvantaged
academically. The vocabulary program piloted in
on effective vocabulary
this study draws from the research
base
instruction and rests on the premise
that vocabulary
instruction can
to
be
10-11
improve fifth-grade (ages
years) LM
expected
reasonably
an
outcomes.
is
learners'
Fifth
school
year to
literacy
optimal
grade
more
enter
the
before
students
intervene,
academically
demanding
middle
school grades when
rapidly fall
struggling comprehenders
in all content areas. The study addressed
the following
further behind
research questions:
the 20-week vocabulary intervention, do the treatment or
(1) Following
contrast group students gain knowledge
of
of a greater number
targeted words?
(2) In the treatment group's weekly student essays, what is the extent of
use
word
target vocabulary
intervention? Specifically, do
over
the course
use the
students
of
the
20-week
target vocabulary
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METHOD
Research
Context
data
Northeastern
to improve
for
this
United
Design
Participants
a matched-control
pilot study employed
quasiexperimental
a
As
the
of a vocabulary
effects
design.
pilot study exploring
preliminary
intervention, piloting of the intervention was limited to one grade level
in the same predominantly
Latino,
low-income, urban K-8
(fifth grade)
to carefully monitor
school in the Northeast
the implementation
of the
intervention. There were only three fifth-grade classrooms in this school;
This
contained
One
contrast
All
classroom
classroom
group.
53 students
classrooms participated,
but
treatment
two
from the
students from the contrast
and
classroom transferred to other schools during the intervention; thus the
final sample for statistical analyses consisted of 24 students from the
treatment and 25 from the contrast classroom. Except for the number of
two students
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Overview
and
Implementation
a SERP collaborative
Word
Generation
(WG), developed
through
effort under the leadership of Dr. Catherine
Snow, is a research-based
to build students' academic
intervention designed
20-week vocabulary
vocabulary across the content areas. Academic
vocabulary refers towords
in textbooks and on tests (e.g., infer
that students are likely to encounter
and element), but not in spoken language. Without explicit instruction on
these types of words, students, and especially LM learners, are likely to
The goal ofWG is to increase
experience difficulty with comprehension.
students' academic vocabulary, in an effort to improve literacy outcomes.
are
The
(1) building
following components
emphasized:
vocabulary
knowledge
through repeated exposure to frequently occurring academic
in various
words
contexts,
(2) cultivating general word and world
TABLE 1
Characteristics
Background
of Treatment
Treatment
Gender
Female
Male
Race
Latino
Black
White
Asian
and Contrast
(n
24)
Group
Contrast
Students
{n
(N
49)
p value
25)
17
14
11
1.16
0.28
23
21
1
3
0
5.07
0.17
22
3
1.00
0.32
9
16
5.97
0.01
0
0
1
First language
23
Spanish
1
English/other
Formerly limited English
Yes 17
proficient
No 7
1
to classrooms
and thus the greater
Students at the Mystic School are randomly assigned
number of limited-English-proficient
students in the treatment group compared with the
contrast group happened
by chance.
677
as a support
List (Coxhead, 2000), which was originally developed
for instruction to college-level nonnative English speakers and does not
include words that are in the most frequent 2,000 words of English. The
main criteria in selecting the 100 target words were that they be high
A for the
and cross-disciplinary
(see Appendix
utility, high-functional,
full list of WG words). The cross-content focus on a small number of
words each week aims to enable students to understand
the variety of
to words in
ways in which words are related, and the multiple exposures
Word
different contexts
WG,
including
access
for more
to the Teacher's
detailed
Guide
information
and
sample
about
weekly
lesson).
of every WG
lesson to build students'
component
is
classroom
talk.
Aside
from
vocabulary
improving students'
of
the
classroom
discussion
and talk
vocabulary knowledge,
promotion
of students' reasoning and their
also aims to support the development
ability to express their reasoning. Thus the following are key features of
theWG intervention: revoicing by the teacher (i.e., repeating a student's
utterance with the purpose
of checking back with them for clearer
or
statement
of
their
student repetition
(i.e.,
interpretation
position),
or
another student's position in
having other students repeat
paraphrase
order to check on their interpretation of the statement), asking students
Another
central
academic
to debate
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WG
the introduction
open-ended
essay-writing activity.
On Monday,
the teacher began the weekly WG
the controversial
topic of the week. For example,
lesson by introducing
the teacher would tell
the class that they would be discussing
their thoughts on whether rap
on
a
music has
kids, and she would explicitly tell her
negative
impact
in bold
students that they would be learning five words, which appeared
type in the passage. Before reading the weekly passage with the class,
the teacher showed the five weekly target words on large index cards to
this
the class, one at a time, asking if they knew what the words meant;
was a way for the teacher to gauge her students' knowledge
of the five
target words. Most of the time, the students were asked to complete a
word chart for homework, during which they were asked to do one or
more of the following: provide the part of speech and meanings
of the
inflectional forms of the words,
words, provide
identify prefixes and
and
suffixes, and list any related words. On Tuesday, Wednesday,
the teacher selected from an array of math,
science, and
Thursday,
social studies related activities. For math, there was typically a problem
at least two of the five target words were
of the day, in which
a word
that resembled
the type of word
into
problem
incorporated
on
state
tests.
encounter
standardized
students would
likely
problem
on
was
not
of the day
The
inclusion of the math problem
teaching
the focus was on exposing
students to the
math skills per se. Rather,
in a math context to the extent possible. The
weekly target vocabulary
in which many
science activities tended to consist of cloze paragraphs,
to be filled in to complete
the sentences
of the five target words needed
a
most
social
studies
the
with
science
typical
dealing
topic. Finally,
was
the
students
class
debate.
the
whole
debate,
activity
During
weekly
were asked to take a stance on the controversial
topic they had been
WORD MEANINGS MATTER
679
an
to present
their view to the group holding
were
to
time
students
allowed
rebut
permitted,
opposing
the opposing
argument.
Finally, on Friday, students were
group's
a
to
"take
stand"
required
by writing a short persuasive essay about the
controversial topic they had been discussing. Students were encouraged
to use the five weekly target WG words, as well as previously
learned
was
not
in
their
this
essays. However,
target words,
required. On
to
students
tended
finish
their
essay in
average,
persuasive
writing
learning
about and
view. When
10 min.
Importantly, the teacher did not provide any writing
instruction related to theWG intervention or give students feedback on
the weekly essays they produced.
a
The treatment group teacher completed
weekly feedback form to
on
of the intervention (see Appendix
the implementation
B). She
report
the form each of the 20 weeks. Her responses indicated that
completed
about
as expected and that the contrast teacher was continuing with the
or some other instruc
regular instruction and not implementing WG
WG
tional program
targeting academic
specifically. The direct
language
revealed
the teacher imple
classroom
observations
that, on average,
with the teacher
mented WG for about 20 min a day. In accordance
on
the
the
direct
observations
confirmed
that the
reports
weekly form,
even
the
intervention was being implemented
faithfully,
during
periods
of district-mandated
testing.
Measures
in the treatment and contrast groups were administered
Students
in
the
fall of 2006 and posttests in the spring of 2007. Pretest
pretests
measures
included researcher-developed
and standardized
(for match
tests
and
administered
of
group
individually
ing purposes)
language
word reading, reading comprehension,
and writing.
comprehension,
tests only. All
Posttest measures
included
the researcher-developed
measures were administered
during the school day.
Researcher-Developed
Measures
a
comprised of
randomly selected sample of 30 of the 100 target WG
words. Following
standard format, students silently read a phrase or
short sentence in which the target word was printed in bold type, and
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three
sections:
overall
cohesion/structure,
Interrater agreement was
D).
(see Appendix
language
Coefficient
of Concordance),
and raters were blind to
were
in
which
the
week)
essays
Analyses
produced.
information on WG
target word use, as well
provided
writing quality.
Standardized
Vocabulary,
were assessed
ideas,
and
.81
the
of
as
academic
(Kendall's
time (i.e.,
the essays
on overall
Measures
listening comprehension,
the Group Reading
using
Evaluation (GRADE)
and reading
Assessment
comprehension
and Diagnostic
is an untimed
3
There
was
pretest:
appears
one exception
to this set of 30 randomly selected WG
target words for the
on the self-check and not on the multiple-choice
reluctant appears
test; culture
on the multiple-choice
test and not on the self-check. This was corrected for the
posttest.
681
is printed in bold
from a list of
of
the
word
meaning
measures
subtest
Comprehension
RESULTS
1: Following
Research
the 20-week vocabulary
intervention,
question
do the treatment or contrast group students gain knowledge of a greater
number of targeted words?
Analytic Approach
on all
groups were compared
to the
and
standardized)
(researcher-developed
prior
on
of
the
intervention.
the
Next,
posttest performance
beginning
measures was examined
Bonferoni
researcher-developed
by conducting
?-tests on the gain scores (change from pretest to
posttest). Finally,
First,
measures
the
standardized
treatment
effect
using differences
deviation.
682
sizes
inmean
and
contrast
d; Cohen,
divided
performance
(Cohen's
TESOL QUARTERLY
Pretest
Performance
Performance
researcher-developed
Word
Generation
Test
Multiple-Choice
targetWG
TABLE 2
Fall Pretest
=
49)
Scores
Treatment
(n
WG
self-checkb
Mean
SD
Mean
self-
Mean
testa
multiple-choice
WG
real words
WG
nonsense
checkc
words
GRADE
vocabulary
GRADE
listening
hensiond
hensione
comprecompre-
word reading
ency composite
GRADE
comprehension
TOWRE
flu-
compositef
SD
SD
24)
19.71
4.16
2.97
0.37
1.28
0.32
and Contrast
Contrast
=
(w 25)
Group
Bonferroni
Rvalues
19.96
4.63
0.06
1.00
2.97
1.00
0.00
1.44
0.46
0.36
0.55
0.55
Mean
15.08
13.84
1.00
0.28
Mean
13.50
13.36
1.00
0.07
Mean
SD
56.06
48.50
9.39
0.040.86
8.23
Mean
28.67
26.32
1.000.25
SD
SD
SD
4.35
1.77
8.83
4.63
Students
(N
Effect
size
2.18
9.91
= 4
= 30. bMaximum
= 4. 'Maximum
SD = standard deviation.
aMaximum
(a high
as
nonsense
not
is
it
indicates
students
words well
that
desirable,
average
reported
knowing
f
= 39.
= 35. '"Maximum = 17. Maximum
to use them). dMaximum
enough
Note.
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TABLE 3
Spring Posttest
Contrast Group
and Gain
Students
Scores on Researcher-Developed
=
(n
49)
Spring
Treatment
(n
WG multiple
choice testa
WG real words
Mean
SD
Mean
SD
Mean
self-Checkb
WG nonsense
words
24)
scores
Contrast
{n
Treatment
25)
21.12
4.22
3.41
0.29
0.47
1.77
0.60
(n
Contrast
24)
(n
5.58
0.003
0.27
0.55
3.72
0.67
0.35
Bonferroni
25)
1.16
3.40
0.44
0.44
0.33
and
scores
Gain
25.29
3.14
3.64
1.29
0.30
SD
self-checkc
Measures
Rvalues
Effect
size
0.0005
1.24
0.1200
0.58
0.0400
0.80
Word
Generation
Vocabulary
Self-Check
except
for
two
nonsense
words
reported
as
known
well
enough
to
use by one student in the treatment group, none of the students in the
treatment group reported knowing the nonsense words well enough
to
use them. However,
each of the 10 nonsense words were consistently
reported as known well enough to use them by students in the contrast
group.
Research
question 2: In the treatment group's weekly student essays,
is the extent of target vocabulary word use over the course of the
20-week intervention? Specifically, do students use the target vocabulary
to words
words cumulatively or is their use confined
taught in the
current week?
is there any change
in the quality
Further,
(e.g.,
over time?
coherence
and academic
of
the
use)
essays
language
what
Analytic Approach
All
available
of
essays were
transcribed
format
in the codes
of
the child
data
(CHAT)
transcripts
language
&
1995; MacWhinney
Snow,
1985,
system (MacWhinney,
exchange
and
the computerized
1990),
(CLAN)
program
language
analysis
2000) was used for analysis. The focus of analysis was
(MacWhinney,
analysis
684
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Writing Quality
The
students'
final
area
of
overall
involved
improved over
investigation
whether
of the 20
that
indicate
examining
the course
writing quality
Individual Growth Modeling
results
intervention.
of the intervention
the average writing quality score at the beginning
was 4.53 (SD = 1.05; scale of 0-9 points), with an average growth of
to an average
.04 points per week
(see Table
4). This corresponds
over the
1
of
full
.71
points
(nearly
point)
writing quality growth
week
SAS PROC
MIXED
class of mixed
of covariance
685
TABLE 4
Individual
Results
Growth Modeling
Fixed effects
Initial status
Weeks
Weeks
1-20
1-10
Weeks
11-20
Variance
Level
Level
(N
24)
Model
4.5308***
0.0353***
4.5931***
0.0291
0.0406*
components
Growth
0.6988***
1.0636***
Wi thin-person
Between-person
Deviance
AIC
BIC
(?2
0.6988***
1.0633***
1,393.40
1,401.40
1,406.20
LL)
1,393.30
1,403.30
1,409.20
1= overall average writing quality growth across the 20-week vocabulary intervention;
Note. Model
= Akaike
1-10 versus weeks
Model
10-20. AIC
2 = writing quality growth across weeks
< 0.001.
information criterion; BIC = Bayesian
information criterion; LL = lower limit.
reach significance, but .04 points per week during the last 10 weeks of
the intervention was statistically significant. These
differential results,
as
are
subtle,
substantively important,
though
they suggest that the
effects on students' writing would
have gone undetected
had
the
vocabulary
intervention
over
the course
length,
686
of
the
the correlation
intervention.
between
for essay
Indeed,
controlling
use
word
and
target
writing quality
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5.5
Average
11-20 Growth
Weeks
Weeks
1-10 Growth
=
(<tf
= .71
points over the 20-weeks
growth
= not
significant
significant
ID
Vocabulary
.67)
15
Intervention Weeks
- Weeks 1-10Growth
?Weeks
10-20Growth I
1. Comparison
of individual growth modeling
results for students' writing quality
FIGURE
1-10 (not statistically significant) and their writing quality growth across
growth across weeks
=
weeks
10-20 (statistically significant;
24).
=
.42, p <
.05), suggesting that the observed
significant (r
use
and writing quality was not an
between
word
target
relationship
artifact of essay length.
remained
DISCUSSION
This 20-week pilot vocabulary
intervention aimed
to evaluate
which
upper-elementary
predominantly
literacy outcomes would improve as a result
Results underscore
the promise of theWG
learners. There are multiple
implications
the extent to
LM
students'
Spanish-speaking
of explicit vocabulary instruction.
vocabulary intervention for LM
and discussion points?practical
and theoretical?to
address when interpreting the results of this pilot study.
was
for only 15-20 min a day, and yet the treatment
WG
implemented
of whom were formerly identified as limited
students, more
group
a
substantially larger number of
English proficient, gained knowledge of
LM
words
than the contrast group. Finding
that upper-elementary
of words intended for college
learners were able to learn the meanings
level nonnative English speakers is noteworthy. Further, at posttest, the
treatment group reported knowing
of fewer nonsense
the meanings
words than the contrast group. This difference in performance
suggests
that the treatment
group
had
a heightened
awareness
of their word
687
study was
words
would
newly taught
current
in
The
students'
results
of
the
appear
writing.
study begin to
shed light on this relationship
LM
in the United
learners
amongst
some
occurs
transfer
with
that
States,
analyses
revealing
relatively
use of newly taught words in writing suggests that the
quickly. In fact,
are at least partially
in students'
words
lexicons.
it was
Further,
to
find
that
students
used
from
words
target
previous
encouraging
weeks in their essays. Not surprisingly, a greater number of past target
words were
used
vocabulary,
this
LM
learners effectively limits our
amongst
relationship
school-age
of
whether
increased
results in
understanding
vocabulary knowledge
to write results in better
better writing quality, whether opportunities
there is a reciprocal
the
vocabulary, or whether
relationship. Though
current study does not provide any definitive answers about the nature
of these relationships,
results of this study do
that the
suggest
of vocabulary
combination
instruction (including other aspects of the
such as the weekly debates
that fostered
increased
intervention,
and having
students write on a weekly basis
use)
language
likely
to
students'
overall writing quality gains.
contributes
Importantly,
during the course of the 20-week intervention, feedback on the essays
was not provided
by the teacher, and the teacher did not provide
or
instruction focused on persuasive
argumentative
writing. Further,
the writing quality gains cannot be attributed to increased essay length,
as students did not
produce
longer essays over time. A possibility to be
further explored,
then, is that students' writing quality
improved
688
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a store
because
they were practicing and because
they had accumulated
of new words that could make
their writing more precise and effective.
in students' writing quality were smaller
improvements
Importantly,
the
of
the
the need for
first
10
weeks
intervention, underscoring
during
sustained vocabulary
instruction combined with ample opportunities
for students to write. A clear implication
from this study is thus that
to detect improvements
in
sustained vocabulary
instruction is needed
students' writing.
Implications
for Research
measures
were
In this pilot
study, only researcher-developed
measures
at posttest, because
administered
effects on standardized
were not
(1986) noted more than two
expected. As Stahl and Fairbanks
decades
ago, a relatively high number of explicitly taught words must
in standardized measures
for them to be sensitive to the
be present
effects of vocabulary
instruction; only 2 of the 30 words on the GRADE
test were target WG words. Regarding
standardized
reading
vocabulary
WG
students to a wide range of
outcomes,
comprehension
exposed
topics, from global warming to the death penalty, and therefore helped
broaden
results. An
of
implication
can
be effective for LM
instruction
of weak
this research
is that
instruction
instruction. Further, the effects of vocabulary
vocabulary
should be evaluated more robustly (e.g., examining effects on writing).
of LM learners who enter school with low
For the growing population
689
levels of vocabulary,
school day.
Limitations
and
vocabulary
Future
instruction must
be
a part
of their
Research
CONCLUSION
Because
is cumulative, greater
instructional
vocabulary
knowledge
to vocabulary is needed
in
and
well
starting
continuing
beyond
the primary grades. This point must be underscored
for LM learners, who
tend to have fewer English
and thus more
limited
language models
attention
690
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ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
like to thank Catherine
E. Snow, Nonie
K. Lesaux,
and Terrence
Tivnan
for
on this
comments
was made
their helpful
This
by the
manuscript.
study
possible
the Carnegie
Education
Research
funded
(SERP),
Strategic
Partnership
by
the William
and
Flora
Hewlett
and
The
Foundation,
Corporation,
Spencer
I would
Foundation.
THE AUTHOR
in Literacy,
Mancilla-Mart?nez
is an Assistant
Professor
Jeannette
Language,
at the Universityof
at
Culture
Illinois
Her primary
research
interest
Chicago.
of at-risk populations,
students
and
language
literacy development
including
and
students.
learners,
minority
struggle with reading,
language
immigrant
and
is the
who
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Appendix A
100Word Generation
1
Week
1. Analyze
2. Factor
3. Function
4. Interpret
5. Structure
Week
Week
6. Context
7. Indicate
8. Variable
9. Create
10. Benefit
Week
21. Considerable
22. Contribute
26. Rely
27. React
23. Demonstrate
24. Sufficient
28. Alternative
25. Valid
29. Justify
30. Proportion
3
Week
11. Complexity
12. Culture
13. Element
14. Resourceful
19. Potential
20. Transfer
15. Tradition
6
Week
31. Access
32. Civil
33. Despite
34. Integrate
35. Promote
Week
36. Attribute
37. Cycle
38. Hypothesis
39. Project
40. Statistics
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9
Week
41. Compounds
42. Conflict
43. Fundamental
44. Substitution
45. Alter
46.
47.
48.
49.
50.
13
Week
61. Advocate
66. Phenomenon
71. Abandon
Contrary
Reverse
Release
67. Priority
68. Transmission
69. Intervention
Prohibited
70. Suspended
72.
73.
74.
75.
62.
63.
64.
65.
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Modified
Monitor
10
Adjustment
Transition
Exposure
14
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81. Decades
18
86. Bulk
87. Accommodate
88. Unethical
89. Route
90. Confine
82. Violation
83. Temporary
84. Unified
85. Incompatible
11
Week
51. Acknowledge
52. Incidence
53. Incorporate
54. Initiatives
55. Transport
Week
Week
56.
57.
58.
59.
60.
15
Migration
Presumed
Reveal
Week
16
76. Accumulation
77. Contradict
78. Exhibit
Biased
Contemporary
Dramatic
79. Inevitable
80. Manipulate
Exploit
Week
91. Collapse
92. Conceive
93. Incline
12
Diversity
Enhance
19
Week
20
96. Convince
97 Enormous
98. Integrity
99. Persistent
100. Reluctant
94. Intrinsically
95. Nonetheless
Appendix
Word Generation Weekly Teacher
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questionnaire
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Word
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this week?
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of Materials
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from teachers/coach/administrator
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own
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preparation
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this week.
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level
actions/interest
(or lack of support) from others
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preparation
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curriculum
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696
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materiah
this week.
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resources
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content was hard to prepare
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7. I will make
Yes_No_
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changes to how
I do WG
next week.
briefly:_
8. Any comments?
Appendix
of Headings
Nonsense Words
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Appendix D
Word Generation Weekly Writing Rubric
Score
Ideas
0
Did not succeed
in articulating
ideas
coherent
1
a couExpressed
or
pie of ideas
claims, not an
argument
0
Lack of organiza
tional pattern;
more
like a non
related
list
0
is con
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strained by lack
of vocabulary
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2
(or
Expressed
an argu
attempted)
ment, but only some
or insufficient evi
argument,
Cohesion/Structure
Overall, writing is
organizaand com
tion; can deciorganized
municates
ideas
piler ideas, but
with relative ease
usually with
effort
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Language
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bulary
a well
dence
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grade-level
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developed
elaborates
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and effective in commu
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voca-
several aca
to
demie words
express
ideas
TOTAL SCORE
Word
choices
are varied
and purposeful
the piece
throughout
_/9
TESOL QUARTERLY
Appendix
Example
of a Word
Generation
Essay
Correction
Original
Student Text
I believe Their chould Not be sticter dress codes because most of the student in school Now
that they have to weire their uniform and they do weare
them but some of the student belive
their chould be strick dress code and I think itsNot fair for kids to wear their uniform every
wear their uniform on special days and or
single day and I think its ok if the student don't
dose are the days that the kids don't like to wear their unifor so I belive their
fridays because
chould Not be strick dress code because
it's Not fair for the student to be wearing
the same
on
so that what I
thing every single day for school and spechily of friadays and
special days
believe that their chould Not be strict dress codes and I think the kids keep modtify of what they
wear or what they don't wear And I think is time to trastion of the uniform.
Corrected
Text
I believe their should not be stricter dress codes because most of the student in school now
that they have to wear their uniform. They do wear them but some of the student believe their
should be strict dress code. I think it's not fair for kids to wear their uniform every single day. I
think it's ok if the student don't wear their uniform on special days and/or Fridays because
those are the days that the kids don't like to wear their uniform. I believe their should not be
strict dress code because
it's not fair for the student to be wearing
the same thing every single
that their
day for school and especially on Fridays and on special days. That what I believe
should not be strict dress codes and I think the kids keep modify of what they wear or what they
don't wear and I think is time to transition of the uniform.
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