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Writing Paragraph
Created by Ima N. Kusmayanti
S1 Computational Science
School of Computing
Telkom University
2014
Pre-Writing Process
Think about an
umbrella topic
Create a really
specific topic
Choosing
Topic
Make an
outline
Related facts
Related incidents
Related reasons
Related examples
Choosing a Topic
Whats your
umbrella
topic?
Choosing Your
Topic
Whats your
topic?
Choosing
Umbrella Topic
Choosing a Topic
Phone
Features of
my i-Phone 4
My Phone
My iPhone 4
Single calling
and multicalling
Sending text
messages
Features of
my i-Phone 4
Browsing the
Internet
Taking pictures
Features of
my i-Phone 4
For example, I can send text messages to my friend or forward the text to my groups.
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1st Draft
People around the world own different kinds of cellphones that fit their bills
and their needs. My choice is iPhone 4 and there are many activities that I
can do using my phone. for example I can send text messages to my friend or
forwrd the text
to my groups. The second features is single-calling and
multi-calling. I can call my mother and my father at the same time, and then,
we would have a familyconversation. The third feature was sending pictures. I
can take a picture and send it to whoever I want. I even can post it in my
social network. Browsing the Internet is the fourth feature. When you find a
wi-fi spot,you can surf the Internet for free.You can check your email nd read
e-book. All in all, my iPhone 4 makes my life easier.
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1st Draft
People around the world own different kinds of cellphones that fit their
bills and their needs. My choice is iPhone 4 and there are many activities that
I can do using my phone. for example I can send text messages to my friend
or forwrd the text to my groups. The second features is single-calling and
multi-calling. I can call my mother and my father at the same time, and then,
we would have a familyconversation. The third feature was sending pictures.
I can take a picture and send it to whoever I want. I even can post it in my
social network. Browsing the Internet is the fourth feature. When you find a
wi-fi spot,you can surf the Internet for free.You can check your email nd read
e-book. All in all, my iPhone 4 makes my life easier.
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Revise your
paragraph.
Check citation
Check mechanics
2nd Draft
People around the world own different kinds of cell phones that fit their bills and their
needs. The best choice iPhone 4 due to several excellent features. For example, the
text messaging allows users to send a message and forward it to any groups available
in the phone using other apps, such as LINE, WhatsApp or BBM. The second feature is
single-calling and multi-calling. Users can call more than two people at the same time.
For instance, they would call their parents, and then, they would have a family
conversation. The third feature is sending pictures. Users are able to take a picture and
send it to whoever they wish. They even can post it in their social network. The fourth
feature is browsing the Internet. When users find a wi-fi spot, they can surf the
Internet for free. They can check your email and read e-book. All in all, iPhone 4 makes
life easier.
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2nd Draft
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