Due to the development and rapid expansion of

supermarkets in some countries, many small, local

business are unable to compeatcompete. Some
people think that the closure of local business will
bring about the death of local communities. To what
extend do you agree or disagree?
Many chains supermarkets are being built all around the world, every city has at
least one big supermarket. There are many advantages and disadvantages of
shopping in a supermarket, but in my view all of them cant be collate
summarized with thein one and only disadvantage the rapid expansion of
supermarkets endagendger ofs the death of the local communities of dying out..

First of allly, every person would prefer to go in the shop and find everything he
needs in one place. That means that no there would be unnecessary to visit for
instanceing 3 or 4 shops to find the certain kind of milk you like or the hard to
find kind of tea. This is something likeThus, we could facilitate the fulfillment of
the shopping list by purchasing every item included in it at just one place. .

Secondly, the main reason some people to go to the supermarkets is that there
they get special promotions. They could get a club card, which decreases the
prices of certain products, they could get three in the price of two or just catch
the promotion of the day.

The big disadvantage, which defeats all that these privileges is that this these big
chains of stores, like Li d l d or Carrefour, they provoke the closure of local
businesses. All that will lead to the unemployment of many people. Some of
theose small shops have more quality products with more quality than those in
the supermarkets, some of them are even organic. As a result of that more and
more people will eat food with a lot of GMO in it and subsequently their health of
them all willould be unsafedeteriorated.

In my opinion the big supermarket chains should notnt open more of than one
store in a town, that way to enable people who do notnt have time will be able
to shop faster , and those who do have time could to buy organic and healthy
food fromfood from the stores of local business .business.

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