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BANISHING SHALL FROM


BUSINESS CONTRACTS:
Throwing the baby out with the bathwater

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n Australia, bastion of clearer, plain- On the other hand, a U.S. reference work,
language drafting, its now the orthodox Bryan A. Garner, Garners Dictionary of Legal
view among commentators that contracts Usage 95354 (3d ed. 2011), endorses using
should be purged of shall. For example, the will to replace shall, although the rationale
best-known Australian text on drafting, Peter offered is perplexing1.
Butts Modern Legal Drafting 262 (3d ed. 2013), So those who wish to banish shall dont agree
says that shall is attended with so many on what to use instead. That suggests that the
problems that the need for banishment is issue is more subtle than it appears. In fact,
beyond argument. both alternatives are problematic.
But as explained below, the justification for Using must instead of shall results in must
getting rid of shall falls short. Dispensing being used to express an obligation, whether
with shall entirely in business contracts its imposed on the subject of a sentence (the
comes at a cost youre throwing the baby company must reimburse the consultant for all
out with the bathwater. In the context of a authorised expenses) or otherwise (the closing
rigorous framework for using verbs to express must take place at Acmes offices). Furthermore,
the categories of contract language, using must also features in language of obligation
Kenneth A. Adams shall to impose an obligation on the subject used to express a condition (to exercise the
Kenneth is a speaker and consultant on of a sentence, and for no other purpose, option, Acme must timely submit the option
contract drafting and author of A Manual of offers advantages. notice), so also using must to state obligations
Style for Contract Drafting (ABA 3d ed. 2013). results in must being used to convey two very
In February 2015 he will present his Drafting Overuse of Shall different meanings.
Clearer Contracts seminar in Australia under In traditional contract language, shall is used
the auspices of Melbourne Law School. For more Similarly, using will instead of shall results
information, visit the Melbourne Law School
to excess it can seem as if drafters worry in will being used not only to impose
website: www.law.unimelb.edu.au. that if a provision doesnt use shall, it wont be obligations but also to express future time.
enforceable. Drafters use shall in all sorts of (This agreement will terminate if the Market Price
different contexts to express obligations, to falls below A$10).
express conditions, and to refer to the future
Using one verb structure to express multiple
(as in shall have the right to).
meanings is what afflicts traditional use of
Yet shall doesnt feature much in everyday shall, and it makes both must and will less than
English. Its use is mostly limited to stock ideal as candidates to replace shall.
phrases (we shall overcome) and to questions
in the first person that seek direction or Missing the Broader Problem
suggest politely (shall we dance?). The old rules The focus on shall has drawn attention away
regarding the ostensible distinction between from the broader problem, namely the chaotic
shall and will are preposterous and are now verb structures on display in traditional
ignored by everyone except sticklers, mostly contract drafting. Banishing shall would
in England. address a symptom of that chaos, but not the
Those who seek to banish shall from contracts cause drafters being oblivious to nuances of
have in mind that if you eliminate shall, verb structures.
drafters will use other verb structures, ones Review of a random assortment of publicly
less prone to misuse and more consistent with available Australian contracts that dont use
everyday English. shall suggests that dispensing with shall
hardly guarantees rigorous verb use even
Alternatives to Shall in the absence of shall, contracts tend to
As for alternatives to shall, another Australian shuffle haphazardly between different verb
text, Michle A. Asprey, Plain Language for structures to express obligations. A contract
Lawyers 209 (3d ed. 2010), says, There is no might alternate between agrees to, will, and
doubt that must is an appropriate alternative must to impose obligations on the subject of
for the imperative shall. And Modern a sentence. Plenty of other problems are on
Legal Drafting, says that when drafters are display, including use of many different ways
looking for something more idiomatic and to express discretion.
unambiguous than shall, the usual choice Eliminating shall is a simple fix, and its
is must. proponents get to congratulate themselves

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on their modernity. But its flawed, as the repaid), which at best is wordy but can also Australian practitioners have gone further
proposed replacements themselves give create confusion. than others in purging shall from
rise to multiple meanings, and the broader Warnings that using shall can lead to litigation their contracts.
problem remains unaddressed. are overblown. Courts in all common-law But that doesnt mean that the trend against
jurisdictions have long acknowledged shall is irreversible. For one thing, review of
Using Shall to Mean Has a Duty To
that shall serves to express obligations. For a random assortment of Australian contracts
To address the broader problem, I have purposes of business contracts, as opposed to suggests that plenty of Australian legal
provided a comprehensive framework in my statutes, I havent encountered an instance of departments and law firms still use shall
book A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting, someone arguing, even unsuccessfully, that in contracts.
that is referred to as the categories of contract instead of expressing an obligation, a particular Furthermore, although Modern Legal Drafting
language. A given provision in a contract will shall is directory (or discretionary) and means notes that most experts in legal drafting
fall into one of the categories language of may or should. And when contract parties fight recommend eliminating shall, one shouldnt
obligation, discretion, prohibition, policy, over a given shall, usually its over confusion feel intimidated. Good drafting practices arent
and others. between obligations and conditions. Getting subject to a vote drafters are free to do what
In that context, shall has a useful role to play. rid of shall wouldnt eliminate that as a source makes most sense. Its perhaps relevant that
I recommend a disciplined use of shall of potential confusion. of the three commentators cited in Modern
using shall only to impose an obligation on a Im no dinosaur my writings show that Legal Drafting, two dont have a background
contract party that is the subject of a sentence Ive long been a critic of traditional contract in contract drafting. Unless you work regularly
(Acme shall purchase the shares). An initial usages. I recommend disciplined use of shall with contracts, youre unlikely to appreciate
diagnostic test for that use of shall is whether in business contracts not because Im a slave that the prose of contracts is much more
the provision would still make sense if you to inertia but because it offers the best way for limited and stylised than the prose of litigation
were to replace shall with has [or have] a duty drafters to gain control over verb structures. writing its analogous to software code and
to. If it doesnt, you should use something so different considerations apply.
My recommendation is limited to business
other than shall. (Even if a given shall passes contracts. For example, I wouldnt use shall in For those law departments that have decided
the has a duty test, you should also check consumer documents. That doesnt undercut to do without shall, it might be awkward
whether the provision in question should my recommendation different considerations to rehabilitate it. But they should know that
instead be expressed as a condition.) apply to different kinds of writing. their simple gesture toward plain-language
Using shall in this manner frees up must and drafting comes at a significant cost muddied
will for use in other categories of contract Rehabilitating Shall verb structures.
language. And using shall solely to impose Its too pessimistic to say that disciplined use
an obligation on the subject of a sentence of shall is beyond the reach of most lawyers.
would encourage drafters to think twice The test for disciplined use of shall use it to
before imposing the obligation on someone mean only has a duty to is simple.
Footnotes
else. Imposing the obligation on someone In Australia, the bigger question is whether
1 See Kenneth A. Adams, A Manual of Style for Contract
other than the subject routinely results in its realistic to expect individuals and Drafting 3.6768 (3d ed. 2013).
among other problems drafters using the organisations to reconsider their across-
passive voice (The Deposit shall promptly be the-board repudiation of shall, given that

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