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Rose Bay Secondary College A Learning And Responding

Matrix (ALARM) RESPONSE / NOTE TAKING SCAFFOLD Subject:


RBSC acknowledges M.Woods (2009) as the creator of ALARM

Question/Content:

EVALUATE /
IDENTIFY / DESCRIBE / EXPLAIN / CRITICALLY
ANALYSE ASSESS /
OUTLINE DEFINE DISCUSS ANALYSE
JUSTIFY
WHAT? WHAT? WHY? HOW? SHOW RELATIONSHIPS MAKE A JUDGEMENT
WHAT is it? WHAT is it? WHAT is it? WHAT is it? WHAT is it? WHAT is it?
WHAT does it do? WHAT does it do? WHAT does it do? WHAT does it do? WHAT does it do?
WHY does it do it? WHY does it do it? WHY does it do it? WHY does it do it?
HOW does it do it? HOW does it do it? HOW does it do it?
WHAT does it LEAD TO? WHAT does it LEAD TO?
HOW WELL does it do it?
In spite of all my fears, I Anadiplosis is used when When the author uses The author uses the The author uses The authors use of
can see it all so clear the author says In spite anadiplosis in the lyric, technique anadiplosis to anadiplosis to show the various techniques in this
I see it all so clear of all my fears I/ can see it they try to convey the convey the improvement personal transformation text successfully displays
all so clear/ I see it all so improvement made as a created by the personal being undertaken. It does the positive personal
clear. The use of cause of this personal transformation. When the this by conveying that the transformation
anadiplosis in this lyric transformation. The use of author uses this transformation has been undertaken by the author.
solidifies the fact that the anadiplosis conveys to the technique, they convey undertaken willingly, as The author also show that
writers personal reader that although the that the known rewards the rewards for this they are knowledgeable
transformation is one for author may have certain that await at the end of transformation can be about this transformation
the better, but the fears which could hold the transformations are seen clearly. and its rewards.
rewards are only received them back, the rewards at worth what the author
at the end of the the end are known, and may have (had) to go
transformation. very worth the pain that through. By repeating the
may be involved in this word clear at the end of
transformation each line, the author
shows us that the rewards
can be seen by the author
clearly.

I know I'll wither so peel In this text, the author Chremamorphism is used The author uses When the author uses The authors use of
away the bark uses Chremamorphism to show that the author is chremamorphism to chremamorphism, it various techniques in this
when saying I know Ill like a tree, sturdy and convey that the assists to show the text successfully displays
wither so/peel away the strong, yet vulnerable to transformation being transformation occurring the positive personal
bark change beneath the bark. undertaken is one that the to the authors personality. transformation
When the author uses this author has initiated It does this by showing undertaken by the author.
technique, she shows that themself, by peeling off that the author has taken The author also show that
she knows that if she does the bark before they away layers of the they are knowledgeable
not change, she will wither. The author also precious personality (the about this transformation
wither and die. tells the reader that they bark) in order to hold the and its rewards.
are like a tree, as they are withering that is occurring
sturdy and strong but are to the author.
vulnerable under the
bark
'Cause nothing grows Imagery is used in the text The author uses imagery The imagery used by the When the author uses The use of imagery does
when it is dark when the author says to show that the author shows that the imagery it helps to convey not successfully convey
Cause nothing transformation cannot transformation being the personality the personal
grows/when it is dark grow without something undertaken cannot occur transformation the author transformation, as it
being displayed, as without something being is going through. It does requires a much deeper
nothing grows/when it is exposed to the light. The this through showing a view of the lyrics than
dark. The imagery creates imagery creates an image picture of something would be normally
a picture of a wilting and of something wilting or unable to change without required to understand
dying plant that cannot dying that cannot become seeing the light, which is that meaning.
grow without being something more without the transformation being
exposed to the light. sunlight, or without undertaken
assistance, which
insinuates that there must
be some other force
driving this
transformation.

Conceptualise Topic: (What did we learn; what is the essential idea?)


We learned how often transformations occur, and how wide the variety of various transformations are.

Appreciate Topic: (How is this topic important for life; why should we learn about it?)
This topic is important as students, especially high school students are going through personality changes all the time.

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