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English II
12-7-17
Many people believe that there should be gun control laws to reduce violence in the
United States, other people believe that there should not be any gun control laws because of our
rights. First, gun control laws are needed to protect women from stalkers and domestic abusers.
Second, there needs to be more gun control laws because they will reduce death by guns. Lastly,
with more gun control laws, suicides will become less. Gun control laws should be around in
order to protect women, lower the number of deaths and lower the amount of suicides by gun.
To begin, gun control laws need to be stricter in order to protect women from stalkers and
domestic abusers. During domestic disputes, women are in more danger when guns are involved.
With gun control laws that restrict convicted stalkers and domestic abusers from owning guns,
women will be more protected. In the article “Evaluating Gun Policy: Effects on Crime and
Violence” by Jens Ludwig and Philip J. Cook, it states, “Vigdor and Mercy find that laws that
prevent those who are subject to a restraining order from owning or purchasing a handgun reduce
rates of homicides of intimate partners.” Thanks to the laws that restrict abusers from obtaining
guns, women are more safe and are less at risk of getting injured. Those who have a restraining
order should not a own a gun because they obviously have something wrong with them, and they
are unstable. Therefore, gun control laws are needed to restrict domestic abusers and stalkers
the death by guns. Between 1999 and 2013 there have been 464,033 total gun deaths. Gun
control laws will lower this number and not allow just anybody to own a gun, especially since
the leading death by homicide is by gun. In the article “After Texas Shooting, FBI Reviews Gun
Background Check System, But Gun Control Group Say Senate Bill Still Needed” by Josh Saul,
it states, “The FBI and the Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco, Firearms and Explosives (ATF) will
review whether the military and other federal agencies are properly reporting information to the
national gun background check database after the Texas shooting earlier this month, the Justice
Department announced Wednesday.” Due to mass shootings and many deaths occurring because
of guns the FBI is making sure that background checks and the correct information is reported
for when guns are being sold. Those that have a bad history should not be sold a gun because
they can do something such as shooting up a school or a concert. Therefore, gun control laws are
Lastly, with more gun control laws, suicides that happen by a gun will lower. Between
1999 and 2013 there were 270,237 suicides by gun in the United States. When the gun ownership
numbers went down the suicide rates decreased as well. With gun control laws, guns would not
be sold or available to unstable people who may want to commit suicide. In the article
“Evaluating Gun Policy: Effects on Crime and Violence” by Jens Ludwig and Philip J. Cook, it
states, “He argues that if access to guns causes some people to attempt suicide who otherwise
would have used other means, or perhaps would not have attempted suicide at all, one would
expect local gun prevalence to be positively related with gun suicide rates and have a negative
(or at least null) relationship with non gun suicides.” Suicide rates are high due to guns being
purchased by those who want to attempt suicide. If guns were not accessible to everyone, they
would not be used as a method of suicide, or the person would not have even thought about
suicide at all, but since guns are available to them, the risk of them having suicidal thoughts
increases. Therefore, with more gun control laws the the firearm suicides will lower in numbers.
Some people believe that gun control laws do not need to be stricter because background
checks and microstamping are invasions of privacy to the person buying the guns. Many people
do not want their privacy to be invaded, even by the Government. So having background checks
done are making people upset about having their pasts being known. Many believe they should
be able to exercise their right of owning a firearm without being subjected to Government
surveillance. This reason is illogical because it is the Government's job to choose what is right
for their country. So if that means looking into the past of someone to see if they are eligible to
own a gun, then the Government will do a background search on you. In the article “FACT
SHEET: New Executive Actions to Reduce Gun Violence and Make Our Communities Safer”
from the Office of the Press Secretary, it states, “ATF is finalizing a rule to require background
checks for people trying to buy some of the most dangerous weapons and other items through a
trust, corporation, or other legal entity.” Background checks are now required to make sure a
person is not a threat to society with a dangerous weapon. This is to ensure that the community is
safe, which is what the Government wants. Therefore people being upset about their privacy
being invaded is illogical because the background checks are needed to ensure the safety of
everyone.
In conclusion, gun controls is an important issue with everything that has been going on
in the United States lately, with all the mass shootings. Gun violence should be addressed by gun
control laws to reduce the deaths caused by guns in our country. A strategy to solve this issue
will be to strengthen gun control laws and to make sure background information of the person
buying the guns are updated and make the person eligible to own a firearm, and to ensure they
are not a threat to our nation. Once again because of women needing to be protected from
stalkers and domestic abusers, the number of deaths by gun needing to be lowered, and the
suicide by gun needing to be lowered as well, gun control laws need to be around and stricter.
Gun control laws should be around in order to protect women, lower the number of deaths and
Annotated Bibliography
“Evaluating Gun Policy: Effects on Crime and Violence” by Jens Ludwig and Philip J. Cook,
2003: <“http://home.uchicago.edu/ludwigj/papers/Brookings_Pragmatic_Gun_Chapter1.pdf”>
This source is talking about gun control and what should happen with guns. It is telling
both sides of whether there should or should not be gun control. This source relates to my topic
because I am going to be writing about Gun Control and how we should have gun control where
we live. It gives me information that I can use to support my position in my argumentative essay.
In the text it states, “The goal of gun control is thus to increase the effective price of guns to that
segment of the market that is at highest risk for misuse, while doing little to the price facing most
other people.” I plan to use this piece of evidence to show that gun control is a good thing that
we need and what the goal of it is, and what how we plant to introduce it.
“Going National With Concealed Guns.” by The Editorial Board, Dec 5, 2017.
<”https://www.nytimes.com/2017/12/05/opinion/concealed-gun-laws-national.html?rref=collecti
on%2Ftimestopic%2FGun%20Control&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics®ion=st
ream&module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=3&pgtype=collection“>
This source talks about how their needs to be strong gun safety, but the Government
thought it a good idea to make broaden the concealed gun law. It also mentions the number of
deaths that occur by people who own a concealed weapon licence. This source relates to my
topic because it gives reasons why there should be more gun control and gun safety in the world.
It gives me data and links to other sources that have to do with gun control/safety. In the article it
states, “It’s hard to believe that congressional Republicans would react to the nation’s latest mass
shootings by advancing a measure that would allow travelers to more easily carry hidden, loaded
handguns across state lines.” I plan to use this piece of evidence to show how bad it might be to
keep this new law in allowing concealed gun to be more easy to carry.
<”https://www.nytimes.com/interactive/2015/10/07/us/gun-control-explained.html”>
This article talks about gun control, what it does and what it requires people to do. It talks
about those who are not allowed to own a gun, or concealed weapon, it also mentions the
loopholes there are that the type of people who shouldn’t get the guns can get the guns. This
article supports my argument because it discusses how not everyone should be allowed a gun,
and gun control is what's making that happen in a way. “Gun control” is a broad term that covers
any sort of restriction on what kinds of firearms can be sold and bought, who can possess or sell
them, where and how they can be stored or carried, what duties a seller has to vet a buyer, and
what obligations both the buyer and the seller have to report transactions to the government.”
This quote will help me explain gun control and what it does, why it is useful.
“The Pentagon’s Indifference to Gun Safety” by The Editorial Board, Nov. 29, 2017
<”https://www.nytimes.com/2017/11/29/opinion/guns-pentagon-kelley.html?rref=collection%2F
timestopic%2FGun%20Control&action=click&contentCollection=timestopics®ion=stream&
module=stream_unit&version=latest&contentPlacement=7&pgtype=collection”>
This article discusses why guns should be kept away from those who are dangerous and
will use the gun for dangerous things. This supports my argument because it just shows that gun
control is strongly needed so mass shootings don't happen from dangerous people because they
can obtain a gun. “It would also reward states that improve reporting, and would provide more
federal funding toward those efforts.” This quote will help me to show what is being done to
“After Texas Shooting, FBI Reviews Gun Background Check System, But Gun Control Group
Say Senate Bill Still Needed” by Josh Saul, Nov 23, 2017
<”http://www.newsweek.com/gun-control-background-check-texas-church-shooting-fbi-review-
721060”>
This article talks about how the FBI is going to make sure reports are being made to the
background check system and they are correct to prevent guns being put into dangerous peoples
hands. This will help support my argument because with a stronger gun control system we can
prevent guns getting placed into the wrong hands. “The FBI and the Bureau of Alcohol,
Tobacco, Firearms and Explosives (ATF) will review whether the military and other federal
agencies are properly reporting information to the national gun background check database after
the Texas shooting earlier this month, the Justice Department announced Wednesday.” This
quote will help me because it explains what is being done to make gun control stronger to avoid
“FACT SHEET: New Executive Actions to Reduce Gun Violence and Make our Communities
<”https://obamawhitehouse.archives.gov/the-press-office/2016/01/04/fact-sheet-new-executive-a
ctions-reduce-gun-violence-and-make-our”>
This article talks about what is being done to lower gun violence. This is from the
government, so this is there rules that they want to put up towards reducing gun violence. This
article will help me support my argument because it is listing rules that need to be done for gun
control and such. “The President and Vice President are committed to using every tool at the
Administration’s disposal to reduce gun violence.” I will use this piece of evidence to show that
two higher up people of our country are wanting to make sure that anything that could be done