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Per. 4
In our society we often take for granted the freedoms we have and in the face of fear or
tragedy we question whether our freedoms cause more harm than good. This is expressed in
the view of American essayist and social critic H.L. Mencken that wrote, “The average man does
not want to be free, He simply wants to be safe.” This outlook is seen occasionally in
contemporary society but the dangers of sacrificing freedoms are widely known and the benefits
Many freedoms are the cause of dangers and fear but the cost to our quality of life would
be much too great if freedom were taken away, this is why we as humans have a natural desire
for freedom. For example, in America we enjoy the freedom of speech. However this can lead to
people being moved to violence creating tragedy. The fear created from these situations can
fuel a mistaken want to monitor and control the speech of others, but without every citizen
speaking about what they believe in we would never make any progress and many people
would be stuck in miserable lives, wanting the freedom they can’t have. While there is
consequences, freedom of speech is essential to leading a fulfilling life. Without it there would
be no protests or check on our governmental system. Without this voice from the people the
government would only make decisions to benefit themselves, keeping the citizens at their
mercy. While controlling freedom may seem to be beneficial in stopping those motivated to
violence by hateful words, the fear created will fade and the resulting situation would be much
worse than the original. People ultimately want to be free because the cost of safety without
Societies with safety at the price of freedom is seen and lived out in multiple novels.
The
Giverby Lois Lowry is one society that has completely stripped its people of their freedoms with
the belief it would keep them safe. Memories are oppressed and every aspect of life is
regulated. On the surface their quality of life seems to be great because of the guaranteed
routine of their day to day. However upon closer inspection, people are forced into jobs they
don’t desire and twins are killed just to maintain the order. The people cannot experience the
everyday pleasures like a snow day or the vibrancy of all colors that make life truly great. They
live with false pleasure and cannot comprehend the happiness they are missing out on because
they are safe. Another example is the dystopian society created in George Orwell's 1984. This
book perfectly exemplifies the human need for freedom. Even in the easy life the government
has created Winston knows that his living conditions are not adequate. That there must be more
to living then the hate filled world he lives in. He only finds happiness when he is away from the
watchful eyes of big brother that claim to keep the people safe. Deep within himself Winston
Today we are under more and more surveillance by way of technologie. Our
smartphones contain the basis for most of our lives and everything we do is able to be tracked.
Our searches are used to find out what we want to buy, our posts are not private and can be
used by the owners of the networks, and the camera and microphones are surveyed. These
devices and data can be used to track our movements and predict what we are going to do
next. As these technological advances continue to infringe more on our privacy those with
access to this information will have the opportunity to change the way we think by controlling
what we see online. This collection of data may be done in the name of safety but it will interfere
with our freedoms if it continues. At the beginning of our country we broke away from England
because of the regulation imposed on us. We lived in a society claimed to be kept safe by king,
but broke away because of the human desire for freedom. This desire continues today as we
fight the collection of our private data and continue to protect the free world that was created so
societies and the structure and history of American society prove that no matter how safe a
society claims to be, the internal happiness and unique joy freedom brings cannot be matched
or recreated. It is a part of human nature to desire freedom, even if it is sometimes at the price
of safety.
The original essay used was from my sophomore year in AP English Language. It was a
prompt given to us before we had a 50 minute class period to write the entirety of the paper.
This piece is from earlier in the year and as that year and the next year in AP Literature went on,
I became much better at composing my thoughts in a short period of time. Another large
difference I noticed in my writing ability from then to now is my outside knowledge that I am able
to use. I was able to reference 1984, a book I just read this year. This extended knowledge
helps to add to the strength of the writing. Also I am able to better integrate sources instead of
only summarizing the source, now using more of my own ideas and commentary.