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Dy thay c Phng, tit 1, 9A
Tit 4:

S dng mt s bin php ngh thut

trong vn bn thuyt minh

A. Mc tiu:
1. V ni dung: HS hiu, s dng mt s bin php ngh thut trong
vn bn thuyt minh lm cho vn bn thuyt minh sinh ng hp dn.
2. V k nng: Rn k nng s dng mt s bin php ngh thut vo
vn bn thuyt minh.
B. Chun b: son k hoch bi dy, bng ph ghi v d v bi tp.
C. Tin trnh bi dy:
B1 . n nh t chc lp: kim tra s s.
B2 . Kim tra bi c:
- Kim tra vic chun b bi nh, kim tra v ghi ca HS.
- Gio vin nhn xt.
B3. Bi mi:
* Gio vin gii thiu: Vn bn thuyt minh l mt vn bn c s dng
kh ph bin trong i sng. cho kiu vn bn ny sinh ng, hp
dn v bt kh khan ngi ta thng s dng mt s bin php ngh
thut. Vy, nhng bin php ngh thut y l g bi hc hm nay s
gip cc em hiu r.
I. Tm hiu vic s dng mt s bin php ngh thut trong
vn bn thuyt minh :
1. n tp vn bn thuyt minh
? Vn bn thuyt minh l g ?

- L kiu vn bn nhm cung cp

tri thc v c im tnh cht,
nguyn nhn ca cc hin tng
v s vt trong t nhin x hi
bng phng thc trnh by, gii
thiu, gii thch.

? c im ch yu ca vn
bn thuyt minh l g?
- Trnh by c im tiu biu
ca s vt, hin tng.
- C nhim v cung cp tri thc
khch quan v s vt, gip con
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ngi hiu s vt ng n.
? Hy cho bit cc phng php
thuyt
- Nu nh ngha, gii thch,
minh thng dng?
nu v d, s liu.
- So snh, i chiu; lit k;
phn loi.
2. Vit vn bn thuyt minh c s dng mt s bin php ngh
thut:
- Hs c vn bn
-" H Long- v nc"
? Vn bn ny thuyt minh c - i tng: H Long v Nc.
im ca i tng no?
c im: S hp dn ca H
? Vn bn c cung cp c tri Long
thc khch quan v i tung - Cung cp cho ngi c nghng
khng ?
hiu bit mi m v v p hp
dn k diu v v nc ca H
?- Vn bn s dng phng Long
php thuyt minh no l ch - Phng php tng tng lin tng.
yu.
Tng tng nhng cuc do chi,
ng hn l cc kh nng do
chi, khu gi nhng cm gic c
th c, dng php nhn ho
? Cc bin php ngh thut t cc o .
y c tc dng g?
- Tc dng: Gii thiu vnh H
Chng c gy hng th v lm Long khng ch l v nc m
ni bt ni dung cn thuyt th gii sng c hn. Cch vit
minh khng ?
nh vy to nn hng th cho ngi
c Bi vit l mt bi th vn
xui mi gi du khch n vi H
Long.
3.Ghi nh:
? Mun cho cn bn thuyt minh - Cc bin php ngh thut: K
c sinh ng hp dn ngi ta chuyn t thut, i thoi theo li
s dng bin php ngh thut n d, nhn ho hoc cc hnh
no?
thc v din ca.
? Cc bin php ngh thut c - Cc bin php ngh thut cn tc dng g?
c s dng thch hp, gp phn
lm ni bt c im ca i tng thuyt minh v gy hng th
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------cho ngi c.
II. Luyn tp:
1. c vn bn: Ngc Hong x ti rui xanh
a. Vn bn c tnh cht thuyt minh. Tnh cht thuyt minh th hin
ch gii thiu loi rui rt c h thng: Nhng tnh cht chung v h,
ging, loi, v cc tp tnh sinh sng, sinh , c im c th, cung
cp cc kin thc chung ng tin cy v loi rui, thc tnh thc gi
gn v sinh, phng bnh, thc dit rui .
- Cc bin php thuyt minh c s dng l:
+ nh ngha: Thuc h cn trng hai cnh, mt li.
+ Phn loi: Cc loi rui.
+ S liu: S vi khun, s lng sinh sn ca mt cp rui.
+ Lit k: Mt li: Chn tit ra cht dnh.
b. Bi thuyt minh c nt c bit: Ging nh mt chuyn ngn, mt
chuyn vui.
- Tc gi s dng Bin php : Nhn ho, i thoi t thut.
c. Cc bin php ngh thut c tc dng gy hng th, cung cp tri
thc.
2. Cc bin php ngh thut: Ly ng nhn hi nh v chim c lm
u mi cu chuyn.

Tit 2, 3, 4
Dy thay c Ngc , lp 6A, 6C
Tit 15-16

tm hiu v cch lm bi vn t s

A/ Kt qu cn t:
- HS nm vng cc k nng tm hiu v cch lm bi vn t s,
cc bc v ni dung tm hiu , lp , lp dn v vit thnh bi
vn.
- Tch hp vi phn Vn v TV hc.
- Luyn tp tm hiu v lm dn trn vn c th.
B/ Tin trnh bi dy:
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I. , tm hiu v cch lm bi vn t s.
1. vn t s:
a. V d:
- 1: yu cu:
? Li vn 1 nu ra + K chuyn-> Kiu bi.
nhng yu cu g?
+ Cu chuyn em thch: ni dung -> ch
+ bng li vn ca em -> hnh thc trnh by.
- 3,4,5,6: khng c t k nhng vn l t
? Nhng 3,4,5,6 s v vn yu cu c vic, c chuyn v
c phi l vn t nhng ngy th u, ngy sinh nht, s i mi
s khng? V sao?
ca qu hng, em ln nh th no.
- Cc t trng tm: cu chuyn em thch,
chuyn ngi bn tt, k nim u th, qu i
? Cn c no c mi, em ln _> cn c xc nh ch ,
th xc nh nhng ni dung ca bi.
iu ?
- Yu cu: Lm ni bt:
+ Cu chuyn lm em thch th
+ Nhng li ni, vic lm chng t ngi bn y
tt.
+ Nhng s vic, tm trng cu em trong ngy
sinh nht.
+ S i mi c th qu em.
+ Nhng biu hin v s ln ln ca em: th
cht, tinh thn.
- Ni dung:
+ Nghing v k vic: 1, 3,4
? Nhng no l + Nghing v k ngi: 2,6
nghing v k vic, + Nghing v tng thut: 3, 4, 5
k ngi, tng thut?
b. Ghi nh
HS c ghi nh.
2. Cch lm bi vn t s:
a. V d: cho 1
? Nhc li nhng yu - Yu cu:
cu ca 1?
+ K mt chuyn m em thch.
+ K bng li vn ca mnh ngha l phi
sng to, khng c sao chp.
-> Tm hiu, xc nh nhng yu cu ca
l khu tm hiu .
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------? thc hin nhng - Chn chuyn:
yu cu , em s + Mt truyn em thch: Bnh chng bnh giy.
chn chuyn no? + Nhn vt: Lang Liu, vua Hng..
Nhn vt chnh l ai? + Lang Liu dng bnh cho vua cha.
Nhng chi tit, s + Ca ngi nt p ca phong tc tp qun ca
vic no em s k?
dn tc.
-> Nhng va tm l khu tm .
? Sau khi tm c - Sp xp:
nhng , em s + M u: gii thiu s vic vua Hng mun
lm th no?
chn ngi ni ngi, nhn vt Lang Liu...
+ Thn bi: din bin s vic: Lang Liu c
thn bo mng, lm ra bnh, l vt ca Lang
Liu c chn...
+ Kt bi: Lang Liu c ni ngi, bnh chng,
bnh giy tr thnh l vt th cng t tin
hng nm.
-> Cng vic sp xp cc theo b cc ba
phn l phn lp dn .
- Vit: bng li vn ca em:
? c c mt bi + Suy ngh, din t bng li vn ca mnh.
vn hon chnh cn + Trch dn: t trong ngoc kp.
phi lm g?
b. Ghi nh.
? Nh vy lm mt bi II. Luyn tp: HS lm dn 2,3 v cc
vn cn phi tin cn li.
hnh nhng bc c
bn no?

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Tit 5, 6, 7
Dy thay c Hng, lp 7B, 7C
Tit 18
t hn vit
A/ Kt qu cn t:
- Gip HS hiu c th no l t HV, cch cu to c bit ca t ghp
HV.
- Tch hp vi phn Vn 2 vn bn va hc.
- Rn luyn k nng s dng, vn dng t ghp HV trong ni v vit.
B/ Tin trnh thc hin:
* Dn vo bi: lp 6 cc em hc v t mn. TV c nhng ngun vay
mn no?

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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I. n v cu to t HV:
- Cc ting: nam. quc, sn, h.
? Cc yu t: nam, quc, sn, + Nam: phng Nam
h c ngha l g?
+ quc: nc
+ sn: ni
+ h: sng.
-> Cc yu t HV.
? Trong cc yu t ny c - Cch dng cc yu t:
ting no c th dng nh mt + Nam: min Nam, pha Nam: n chim
t n t cu, ting bay v phng phng Nam trnh rt.
no khng th?
-> Yu t Nam c th dng c lp nh
mt t n.
+ Quc, sn, h: khng th dng c
? T em rt ra c iu
lp:
g?
. khng th ni yu quc -> ch c th
HS c ghi nh.
ni yu nc.
. Khng th ni leo sn -> ch c th
? Tm ngha ca yu t ni leo ni.
thin trong cc t cho?
-> Phn ln cc yu t HV khng c
dng c lp nh t m ch dng to
t ghp.
2. Ghi nh.
3. Lu :
- Thin - thin th: tri.
- Thin - thin nin k, thin l m: 1
? Nhn xt?
nghn.
? T cn phi lu iu
- Thin - thin : di, di di.
g?
- Thin - thin v: lch, nghing v.
- Thin - thin tiu thuyt, thin phng
s: chng, phn, bi ca mt cun
sch, mt bi vit.
-> Cc yu t ny ng m nhng khc
xa v ngha.
=> Mun hiu c ngha ca cc yu
t HV cn phi xt chng trong mi
quan h vi cc yu t khc v trong
vn cnh c th trnh nhm ln.
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------II. T ghp Hn Vit:
? T ghp l g? Cc t 1. V d:
ny thuc loi t g?
- Cc t: sn h, xm phm, giang san.
-> 2 ting cng c ngha, ngha chung,
ngha khi qut.
? Cc t ny thuc loi t => T ghp ng lp.
g?
- Cc t: i quc, th mn, chin thng, thch
? c im ca cc t m...
?
-> C mt yu t chnh v mt yu t ph
b sung ngha cho ting chnh, ngha c
th, ngha hn nh.
=> T ghp chnh ph.
+ Cc t: i quc, th mn, chin thng: yu
t chnh ng trc, yu t ph ng sau.
+ Cc t: thin th, thch m, ti phm: yu t
ph ng trc, yu t chnh ng sau.
? So snh TGCP thun
- So snh:
Vit v TGCP Hn Vit?
+ Trong TV, v tr chnh - ph c m bo.
HS c ghi nh.
+ Trong t ghp HV c 2 trt t: C-P, P-C.
2. Ghi nh.
III. Luyn tp:
1. Phn bit ngha ca cc yu t HV ng
m:
? Hy phn bit ngha - Hoa 1: ch s vt, c quan sinh sn hu
ca cc t ng m?
tnh ca cy ht kn.
Hoa 2: phn hoa, bng by.
- Phi 1: bay
Phi 2: tri php lut, tri l phi: phi ngha.
Phi 3: v ca vua, thng xp sau hong hu.
- Tham 1: ham mun (tham lam).
Tham 2: d vo: tham gia.
- Gia 1: nh.
? Tm cc t ghp c Gia 2: thm vo: gia v, tham gia.
cha cc yu t HV?
2. Cc t ghp HV c cha cc yu t HV:
- Quc: quc gia, i quc, quc l, quc huy,
quc k, quc hiu...
- sn: sn h, giang sn...
- C: c tr, an c, nh c, c x...
- Bi: thm bi, chin bi, bi vong...
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tm hiu chung v vn biu cm

A/ Kt qu cn t:
- HS hiu c nhu cu biu cm ny sinh l do nhu cu mun biu
hin tnh cm, cm xc ca con ngi.
- Phn bit c biu cm trc tip v biu cm gin tip.
- Bc u nhn din v phn tch cc vn bn biu cm, chun b
vit kiu vn bn ny.
B/ Tin trnh thc hin:

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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I. Nhu cu biu cm v vn biu cm:
1. Nhu cu biu cm ca con ngi:
a. V d:
? Trong tnh hung
* Tnh hung: ngi bn thn ca em chuyn
ny em s lm g?
i ni khc sinh sng. Em rt nh bn.
- Vit th, gi in thoi.
? Em s ni g vi bn?
- By t tnh cm: ni nh mong bn.
* Ca dao:
HS c bi ca dao.
- Bi 1:
? Bi ca dao ni v ai? + Mn hnh nh con cuc ni v con ngi:
v iu g? C phi thn phn thp c b hng, ni nim oan
ni chuyn ca con tri khng ai thu t.
cuc khng?
+ Ng iu: cm thn: thng thay. Gi s lin
? Ng iu ca bi ca tng ti ting ku thng nao lng, v vng.
dao ntn? Ng iu Ng iu cm thn l mt phng tin c
c ngha g?
php biu t cm xc, th hin ni xt thng, s thu hiu, cm thng vi thn phn
bt hnh, oan c ca ngi lao ng xa.
- Bi 2:
+ o ng, ip ng, t ly.
? Bi ny s dng + So snh: thn em nh.
nhng bin php tu t -> Gn vic gi cm vi biu cm, gip nhn
no? Bp so snh c vt tr tnh bc l, by t cm xc: l
ngha g?
nim vui hn nhin, nim t ho, t thc v
v p, sc sng ca con ngi lao ng.
=> Nhu cu biu cm: l nhng i hi
? Qua em hiu khi mong mun c by t, bc l cm xc,
no th con ngi c nhng suy ngh, rung ng ca con ngi
nhu cu bc l cm thnh li vn, li th.
xc?
<=> Vn biu cm l vn bn vit ra nhm
biu t tnh cm, cm xc, s nh gi ca
? T em hiu th con ngi i vi th gii xung quanh v khu
no l vn biu cm?
gi lng ng cm ngi c, ngi nghe.
b. Ghi nh.
2. c im chung ca vn biu cm:
HS c ghi nh.
a. V d:
- on 1:
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------HS c v d.
+ Ni nh tha thit ca ngi vit i vi ngi
? on vn ny ni v bn chuyn vo thnh ph HCM.
iu g? Ca ai ginh + By t trc tip bng cc t ng: thng
cho ai? Th hin qua nh...
nhng t ng no?
+ Tnh cm chn thnh, trong sng.
? l tnh cm ntn?
- on 2:
? on 2 ni v iu + Nghe ting ht ca mt ngi con gi trn
g?
i -> gi nhng suy ngh, nhng tnh cm,
cm xc su sc v qu hng, t nc trong
? l tnh cm g?
tm hn tc gi. Ting ht ngn vang, vang
vng mi, tr thnh ting ht ca qu hng.
-> Tnh yu qu hng, t nc su nng,
thit tha.
+ Thng qua vic by t nhng cm ngh v
ting ht m ni bt cm xc -> cch bc l
? Tnh cm gin tip.
c bc l ntn? C => Cm xc, tnh cm trong vn biu cm
ging cch bc l thng l tnh cm p, thm nhun t tng
on 1?
nhn vn. Tnh cm y c th c bc l
? Nh vy, trong vn mt cch trc tip hoc gin tip.
biu cm thng cha <=> Biu cm: bc l cm xc v mi i tng, bc l nhng ng trong cuc sng xung quanh. Tnh cm
tnh cm ntn?
phi chn thnh, xut pht t mu tht,
? Trong vn biu cm khng ch n thun l vic s dng nhng
c th cp ti thn t. Vn biu cm khc vn t s v miu
nhng ci xu c t v mc ch, phng thc biu t.
khng?
b. Ghi nh.
- C th cp, phn II. Luyn tp:
nh ci xu vi mc 1. a. Thuyt minh v c im ca hoa hi
ch con ngi ng.
nhn din, xa lnh ci b. Bc l nim say m, thch th ca ngi vit
xu, thanh lc tm i vi hoa hi ng, nhng suy ngh, lin thn con ngi. Khi ng min man v v p, phm cht ca n.
n vn l cm xc -> on vn biu cm.
mang gi tr nhn vn. 2. - NQSH: Nim t ho, s khng nh v
ch quyn c lp t ch ca dn tc v
? Trong 2 on vn, ch t cng nh gic cu nc.
on no l vn biu - TGHKS: Kh th, nim t ho, hn hoan trc
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------cm?
chin thng vang di ca t nc v kht
vng xy dng, gi gn, pht trin nn c
lp, ho bnh ca dn tc.
3.4: HS t lm. GV nhn xt kt qu.
? Nhng bi th
III. Tng kt:
hc c phi l vn bn
- Vn bn biu cm khc vn bn miu t, t
biu cm khng? Ni
s, cn nm vng c im ca n khi
dung ca cc vn bn
tin hnh to lp vn bn biu cm khng
?
nhm ln.
- Su tm mt s vn bn biu cm.

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Tit 8,9,10
Dy thay c Ngc
Lp 6A: Bi vit s 3
: Gio vin dy lp ra .

Lp 6C:
Tit 43
luyn ni k chuyn
A/ Kt qu cn t:
- HS tp ni, k chuyn mt cch sng to.
- Tip tc rn k nng k bng ming.
- Tch hp vi phn Vn v TV.
B/ Tin trnh bi dy:

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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------GV kim tra v nhn I. Kim tra s chun b nh ca HS:
xt s chun b nh - HS lp dn bi nh
ca hc sinh.
- Phn cng s chun b theo nhm
t trc:
+ Nhm 1: k v mt chuyn v qu
+ Nhm 2: k v mt chuyn i thm
gia nh lit s
+ Nhm 3: k v mt chuyn i thm
i din cc nhm ln di tch.
trnh by trc lp.
+ Nhm 4: k v mt chuyn ra
GV nu yu cu.
thnh ph.
- Nhn xt s chun b ca HS.
HS nhn xt phn II. Trnh by:
trnh by ca cc i 1. i din cc nhm trnh by ln lt.
din.
- Yu cu: trnh by r rng, lu lot,
phong thi t nhin, nh c, .
- Cc nhm t b sung.
GV nhn xt, tng kt. 2. Nhn xt:
- HS nhn xt phn trnh by:
+ Ni dung: ? thiu ? B sung?
+ Phong thi, din t: lu lot cha? T
tin hay cn rt r..?
- GV nhn xt, rt kinh nghim, tng
kt:
+ S chun b kh chu o song bi
ni ca hc sinh a s cha lu lot, cn
lng cng, cha y , cn nhiu
thiu st.
+ Phong thi trnh by cha t nhin,
cn rt r, ngc ng.
Tit 11, 12, 13: Dy thay c Hng, lp 7C, 7B: Tit 40
luyn ni: vn biu cm v s vt, con ngi
A/ Kt qu cn t:
- Rn k nng ni theo ch biu cm.
- Rn k nng tm , lp dn .
- Rn k nng din t c s dng t ng ngha, tri ngha.
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------B/ Tin trnh thc I. Kim tra s chun b nh ca
hin:
HS:
HS chun b nh theo * bi: cm ngh v mt thy - c
gi hng dn.
gio m em yu qu.
GV kim tra s chun * Gi :
b, nhn xt s chun - M u: knh tha...
b ca HS v cht lng, Gii thiu khi qut: tnh cm, k
tinh thn thi chun nim...
b; t gic, chu o - Ni dung c th:
hay cha...
+ Tc ng c cu: Khng thy
my lm nn. Khng c thy c du
dt t nhng ngy u chp chng
th khng th thnh ngi.
+ Thy c: tn tnh, chu o, n
cn, tm huyt, cao c, ng qu
trng.
i din cc nhm ln -> Bit n, knh trng.
trnh by ni dung + K nim su sc.
chun b.
+ Nh li: bi hi, bit n...
Nhm 1: trnh by II. Thc hnh trn lp:
1.
1. Yu cu:
Nhm 2: trnh by - Trnh by: r rng, sun s, rnh
2.
mch.
Nhm 3: trnh by - Ni dung: y , su sc, rung
3.
ng ngi nghe.
Nhm 4: trnh by 2. Tng kt:
4.
- Mun thnh cng phi bit lp v
HS nhn xt phn trnh by theo trnh t r rng, mch
trnh by ca i din lc.
cc nhm.
- Mun rung ng ngi nghe phi:
GV tng kt li.
+ Cm xc chn thnh.
+ T ng chnh xc, trong sng.
+ Mch lc, lin kt cht ch.
- Luyn ni gip cho cc em bit trnh
by mt vn bn ni r rng, mch lc,
tri chy, tc phong nhanh nhn, ti
tn, t tin.
3. BTVN: Chn mt trong bn vit
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------thnh bi vn hon chnh.
III. Tng kt:
- Rt kinh nghim cho cc bi luyn
ni sau.
? Qua bi luyn ni, em - Chun b bi: Bi ca nh tranh b
rt ra c kinh nghim gi thu ph nt.
g?

Tit 41
bi ca nh tranh b gi thu ph
(Mao c v thu phong s ph ca)
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------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Ph A/ Kt qu cn t:
- HS cm nhn c tm lng nhn o, v tha cao c ca Ph, mt
nh th hin thc v i ca i ng Trung Quc.
- tch hp vi phn TV v TLV.
- Rn k nng cm th th.
B/ Phng tin:
- Gio n, sgk.
- Tp th ng, tp II.
C/ Tin trnh thc hin:
* Bi c: Tm trng v tnh cm ca H Tri Chng th hin trong bi
th Hi hng ngu th?
HS c ch thch sgk. I. Tm hiu chung v vn bn:
? Em bit g v tc gi 1. Tc gi, tc phm:
?
a. Tc gi:
- Nh th ni ting i ng, c
mnh danh l thi s, thnh thi.
- Cuc i gp nhiu hon nn: lm
quan mt thi gian ngn, co quan a
gia nh v vng Ty Nam. Lon AnS n ra-> chy lon lnh nh qua
nhiu ni v cng cc kh. Cui cng
ng mt trn con thuyn trn ng
? Bi th ra i trong chy lon.
hon cnh no?
b. Tc phm:
? Th th?
- Hon cnh ra i: Ngi nh tranh b
gi bo ph nt.
GV hng dn c, c - Th th: c th (ca).
mu.
2. c, ch thch, b cc:
HS c ln lt.
- c: ging nh nhng, trm lng, tha
? Vn bn ny c th thit.
chia lm my phn?
- Ch thch: sgk.
? HS c on 1.
- B cc: 4 on.
? on th ni v iu II. Tm hiu ni dung chi tit:
g?
1. on 1:
? S vic cho ta
- Gi thu: thi cun bay ba lp nh
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------hiu gi bo ntn?
tranh.
? phng thc biu t -> Gi mnh, d di, v tnh, nghit
y l g?
ng.
- Phng thc biu t: miu t (kt
hp t s): t, k bc l cm xc.

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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------? S vic cho ta - Tm trng nh th: bt ng, tic
cm nhn c iu g nui, ngm ngi, chua xt.
v tm trng ca nh -> Ti hin c th, sinh ng sc gi
th?
d di, xy dng nn tnh hung
? T on th cho cu chuyn, qua gip ta cm
ta cm nhn c iu nhn c hon cnh khn kh, kh
g?
cc ca nh th.
2. on 2:
HS c li on 2.
- L tr: cp tranh.
? on th ni v iu - Hnh ng: go tht mi kh,
g?
ming chy.
Hnh ng ca nh - Phng thc biu t: t s (kt hp
th?
biu cm).
? Phng thc biu t -> Hon cnh o le, cay ng, cc
y?
kh ca nh th.
? Cho ta hiu iu g => Tm trng: gin d, ng cay,
v hon cnh ca nh bt lc, bun ti.
th?
<=> Ni cc kh c th hin theo
? Tm trng ca nh cp tng tin: on 1 l ni kh
th?
do thin nhin gy ra, on 2 l
? Nhn xt v ngh ni kh i do con ngi mang li.
thut hai on th?
3. on 3:
- Ma thu dm d, st si.
? on th cho ta hiu - Nh dt - chn mn t lnh, c nt.
iu g?
- Khng ng c.
? Phng thc biu t -> Phng thc biu t: miu t (kt
c s dng y?
hp biu cm).
? Ngh thut ni bt? Bt php t thc, ngh thut tng tin.
? Nhn xt v s cu => Din t y , su sc, r nt
ca cc on th trong ni kh, hon cnh bi t ca nh
bi th ?
th: ni kh cc ln n tt nh,
? Cc bin php nt chng cht. V cng l ni kh
cng phng thc biu chung ca nhiu ngi trong hon cnh
t gip din t iu t nc lon lc lc by gi.
g?
<=> ngha t co, ln n chin
tranh phi ngha, ni chin ni da xo
tht.
? Qua tc gi mun 4. on 4:
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ni iu g?
- S ch: nhiu hn 7 ch
HS c li on 4.
- M c: ngi nh rng mun ngn
? S ch trong cc cu gian, vng vng cho mi k s.
ny ntn?
-> Kt thc bt ng: khng phi l li
? Nh th by t iu on thn hon cnh cay ng, o le
g? C phi l mt li ca mnh m li m c hnh phc cho
on thn hon cnh?
mi ngi.
? Kt thc gi cho - Nguyn: ring mnh cht rt cng
ngi c cm gic g? c.
? Tc gi nguyn c - Phng thc biu t: biu cm trc
iu g?
tip.
? Phng thc biu t => Tm lng nhn o, yu thng
c s dng y?
con ngi, hi
? Cho em hiu c sinh, v tha, qun mnh v mi ngi
iu g?
ca P. Mt

con ngi bn thn mnh i rt, kh

s cng cc
m khng h ngh cho mnh, m c
? T c th cm
u tin, c nguyn u tin l cuc
nhn c tm lng ca sng yn n cho mi ngi ngho kh
P ntn?
khc.
? P mun ni iu
<=> Tm lng cao c ca mt bc
g?
"thnh nhn", mt con ngi sn sng
x thn v ngi khc.
? Qua bi th em hiu - Ln n lon lc, chin tranh phi
c iu g?
ngha.
IV. Tng kt:
1. Ni dung:
- Tm lng yu thng con ngi, tinh
? Nhn xt v ngh
thn nhn o cao thng ca Ph.
thut ca bi th?
- c m cao p hnh phc v bnh
yn cho mi ngi.
- Ln n chin tranh phi ngha.
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2. Ngh thut:
- Hnh nh sinh ng, kt hp nhun
nhuyn cc phng thc biu t.
- C s ph cch linh hot v cu ch,
vn lut.

Tit 14, 15
Dy thay c Hng: Lp 7C: Th 3, tit 1,2
Bi vit s 3: Vn biu cm:
ra: Ngi m em yu qu.
Tit 16: Dy thay c Hng, th 3, tit 4, lp 7B:
Tit 53
ting g tra
- Xun Qunh A/ Kt qu cn t:
- HS cm nhn c v p trong sng, m thm ca nhng k nim
tui th, tnh cm b chu- c s ca tnh yu t nc.
- Hiu qu ca vic s dng ip ng, ip cu ni kt mch cm
xc ca bi th.
- Rn k nng cm nhn th tr tnh.
B/ Phng tin:
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Gio n dy thay
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ SGK, gio n.
- Tp th Xun Qunh, mt s bc nh v Xun Qunh, cun: Xun
Qunh th v i.
C/ Tin trnh thc hin:

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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I. Tm hiu chung v vn bn:
HS c ch thch sgk. 1. Tc gi, tc phm:
? Em bit g v tc gi a. Tc gi:
Xun Qunh?
- Nh th n xut sc ca nn th ca
hin i.
- Thng vit v nhng tnh cm gn
gi, bnh d, thn thuc trong cuc
sng biu l nhng rung cm v kht
? Bi th sng tc trong vng ca tri tim ph n chn thnh,
thi k no?
m thm.
? Th th?
b. Tc phm:
? Nhn xt mt s - Sng tc trong thi k u khng
c im ca th chin chng M.
th ny?
- In trong Hoa dc chin ho (1968).
- Th th: t do, nm ch.
+ Nhp: phong ph, linh hot.
+ Vn: vn chn, vn bng, trc; vn
lin, cch.
GV hng dn c, c + Ngh thut: ip ng.
mu.
+ Ngn ng: gin d, trong sng.
HS c ln lt.
2. c, ch thch, b cc:
Lu mt s ch thch - c: Ging tha thit, su lng, c
sgk.
ch vui ti.
? Bi th ny c th - Ch thch: sgk.
phn chia b cc ntn? - B cc: 3 phn:
+ Kh 1: n tng cm xc c khi gi
t ting g tra.
+ Kh 2-6: K nim tui th a v tHS c li kh 1.
i mt.
? Bi th l li by t + Cn li: m c, c nguyn ca chu.
ca ai?
II. Tm hiu chi tit:
? Trong khng gian, 1. Kh 1:
thi gian no?
- Ngi chin s: trn ng hnh qun
? Ngi k no c s nghe ting g tra.
dng y?
-> Ngi 3: khch quan, t nhin.
? Bin php tu t no - ip: nghe-> ting g tra gi trong
c s dng? Gi cm ngi chin s nhng cm xc xao
xc g?
xuyn, bng khung, bi hi kh t:
? Cho thy ting g tm hn nh nhm, thanh thn gi nh
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-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Tit 17, 18: Dy thay c Hng, th 4 tit 4,5, lp 9B:
Bi: n tp phn Tp lm vn (tip theo) son k hoch bi hc Ng
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