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Student Handbook

SPC 2600 Introduction to Public Speaking

Department of Communication University of South Florida 2005-2006

Table of Contents
Welcome 3 Information and Policies 4 Criteria for Grading Speeches 8 Blackboard 9 Workshops 10 Study Guide for Final Examination Success Speech
Speech #1 Assignment 14 Sample Outlines 16 Evaluation Form 19 Peer Feedback Sheets 21

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Praise Speech
Speech #2 Assignment 27 Sample Outlines 29 Evaluation Form 33 Peer Feedback Sheets 35

Informative Speech
Speech #3 Assignment 41 Sample Outlines 43 Evaluation Form 47 Peer Feedback Sheets 49

Paired Debate
Speech #4 Assignment 55 Sample Outlines 57 Evaluation Form 61 Peer Feedback Sheets 63

Motivational Speech
Speech #5 Assignment 69 Sample Outlines 71 Evaluation Form 77 Peer Feedback Sheets 79 3

Welcome to
Weve Got a Reputation
Welcome to SPC 2600! This course has earned a reputation across USF: its fun, interesting, and youll learn a great deal. When USF alumni were surveyed and asked to name the course most important to their academic development, what course did they name most often? SPC 2600 Introduction to Public Speaking. Many things must be going through your mind as you contemplate giving speeches in this class. We hope youre looking forward to learning how to speak comfortably and competently in front of an audience, but we also understand if youre concerned, anxious, even nervous. This Handbook was designed to help.

Introduction to Public Speaking

detailed assignment instructions, and explicit grading criteria for activities required in the class. Most importantly, it is a handbook. There is lots to do here.

Were really glad youre here.

Whats Inside
The Handbook is arranged chronologically in the order you will be using the materials. Inside youll find: detailed speech assignments sample speech outlines evaluation forms for each speech peer response sheets for feedback checklists for the Day of the Speech and much more. Look through all of these materials and youll have a great idea of what is expected throughout the course.

Dont Forget
Make sure to bring this Handbook to class regularly. And always bring it during the scheduled rounds of speeches. Best of luck this semester.

How to Use this Handbook


This Handbook was designed to make your semester in SPC 2600 easier. It was compiled by the staff of SPC 2600 to provide you with a comprehensive course overview,

Staff of SPC 2600


Department of Communication University of South Florida 2005-06

Information
Public Speaking Matters
Although many students believe that they will never be "public speakers" in the traditional sense, experience shows that almost all individuals perform that role as part of their employment (the presentation of ideas and arguments in business conferences and meetings), academic requirements (presentations in class), and social activity (speaking up at the PTA, a county ordinance meeting, or church committee). This course is designed to help you develop communication skills that contribute to academic, vocational, personal, and social success in a wide variety of contexts. This course satisfies three credits of the general education core for social sciences.

and Policies for SPC 2600

Its all here. Read this carefully.

class discussions, practice speeches, and group exercises throughout the course.

Objectives of the Course

Fundamental to the course is the idea that presentation skills are a means of empowerment. The course prepares individuals to participate in an increasingly interactive and verbal society and to be productive members of the workforce. encourages the development of critical thinking skills required in a society that constantly demands people make choices and defend them. enables students to articulate choices and to contribute in an effective and ethical way to the workplace and society.

Course Description
The course will introduce a range of strategies found in contemporary and historically important speeches by men and women of various nationalities and cultures. Inclusion of diversity is instrumental to help students find voices similar to their own and to learn effective communication strategies from those voices. In addition, the diverse examples provide a foundation for a discussion of how gender/race/class influence the way we speak, listen, and hear public messages. Finally, because students learn best by "doing," they will be actively involved in 5

Required Textbooks
German, Kathleen & Gronbeck, Bruce. Principles of Public Speaking. 15th ed. Addison Wesley Longman, Inc., 2003. A Student Handbook for Public Speaking. Grays Custom Publishing, 2004-2005.

Weight of Assignments
Success Speech Praise Speech Informative Speech Paired Debate 5% 10% 10% 15%

Motivational Speech Written Work Ungraded Assignments Quizzes (total) Final Examination

15% 10% 5% 15% 15%

will develop a central idea (thesis) and develop it with two different kinds of support material in an appropriate and discernible organizational structure.

Five Speeches
Students will present five speeches this semester. Each speech focuses on incremental steps in development of speaking skills. Early presentations introduce a few basic skills for student mastery. Subsequent speeches build upon those skills as assignments become increasingly complex and students become more sophisticated speakers and audience members.

#4 Paired Debate
The next speech is a 4-6 minute persuasive presentation. Students will be placed in pairs with each student taking one side of a controversial issue or situation. Together the students should choose the topic, narrow the focus, and determine the parameters of the debate. The speeches will focus on the development of logical proofs for clear thesis statements (central claims). Each student is required to develop and to use a visual aid to support his/her arguments.

#1 Success Speech
The first speech is a 2-3 minute presentation that explains some important success in your life. The speech provides students with the opportunity to develop and support a clear thesis and to begin working on a conversational delivery style using a brief outline.

#5 Motivational Speech
The final speech is a 4-6 minute motivational speech that includes three kinds of support materials, including a personal experience story, and an action step that persuades the audience to take some action. As the culmination of the course, students will demonstrate all the principles of effective public speaking learned throughout the semester.

#2 Praise Speech
The second speech is a 2-4 minute speech that praises a public figure. Students will conduct library research on this individual, create an arguable thesis statement, and support this thesis with evidence. Students will concentrate on fulfilling the criteria of an effective introduction.

On Speech Days
Speech days are exciting times in class, but theres also much to doas speakers and as audience members. Please consider the following procedures on speech days.

#3 Informative Speech
In this speech, students develop a 3-5 minute presentation in which they share information about some phenomenon of personal interest to them. This might include a skill they have learned through a hobby, an organization they are affiliated with, or consumer information important to them. Students 6

Time Limits on Speeches


Because of the nature of the course and the limited time available, students will be asked to prepare their presentations carefully to adhere to the time limits indicated on each assignment. Instructors will keep time and ask you to finish quickly should you go over time allotted.

Videotaping
Student speeches will be videotaped throughout the semester to provide a record of progress. Each student must purchase a new " video tape for use on VHS equipment. Only new tapes purchased exclusively for this course will be used for taping speeches. Students are responsible for bringing the tape to class on the days assigned for speeches. Please take care during the semester not to tape over previous speeches and not to record anything else on this tape, to better preserve the semester's record of speech improvement and progress.

announce them ahead of time.

Final Examination
The final examination is a Common final-meaning all sections of SPC 2600 take the same multiple-choice final examination at the same time. The schedule for the Common final for SPC 2600 appears in the Final Exam Schedule Matrix of the Schedule of Classes. Because this is a common final, it has priority over other noncommon finals scheduled at this time. The final will not be scheduled in your regular classroom. Your instructor will inform you of the place for the final examination. Should you have another common course final scheduled at the same period, the course with the higher number should be taken at the scheduled time. Should your other common final be a higher number than SPC 2600, you will take the final for SPC 2600 at the University's make-up time, also listed in the Final Exam Schedule Matrix in the Schedule of Classes.

Peer Feedback

Listening skills are critical to successful communication. SPC 2600 provides students with guidelines for improving their communication skills. As a means to promote better listening and provide feedback to improve his/her peers' public speaking skills, each student will provide a brief written response each day that speeches are given when he/she is not scheduled to speak. This peer feedback will be done during class time. These responses are required, but not graded.

Workshops
Your instructor may ask you to participate in workshops throughout the semester. These are opportunities to develop and to practice skills in composing thesis statements, arranging support material, introductions and conclusions, and delivery skills in smaller groups.

Written Work
Throughout the semester, your instructor may require you to turn in written work papers, outlines, library research references, reflective papers on your individual goals and progress throughout the class. These are opportunities to develop and to polish written communication skills that complement the oral skills emphasized in the speeches.

Ungraded Assignments
Class exercises, brief ungraded writing tasks, and informal speaking assignments comprise an important part of the learning in SPC 2600. Students are expected to attend class regularly and participate actively in class. All required but ungraded speaking and 7

Quizzes
Quizzes over assigned reading material are to be expected. Instructors may or may not

written assignments and class exercises will be counted toward the total participation grade in the course. Students will earn a percentage grade equal to the percentage of ungraded assignments they complete in a satisfactory manner.

students should notify the instructor before missing class due to a religious observance or holiday. Students will not be penalized by completing missed work.

Make-Up Policies
Because of scheduling difficulties for inclass assignments, make-ups of quizzes, speeches, and papers will only be possible in the case of documented medical absences. Check with your instructor on specific makeup policies and procedures.

Accommodations for Student Disabilities


Students with special needs should be registered with Student Disability Services, SVC 1133 (974-4309). The instructor is pleased to make any accommodations necessary to facilitate success in this class.

Religious Holidays and Observances


In accordance with University policies,

Additional Notes from Instructor

Criteria
A C speech

for Grading Speeches


conforms to the kind of speech assigned (informative, persuasive, etc.) meets time requirements (day of speech, length of speech) meets specific requirements of assignment (a visual aid, kinds of support, etc.) is original is appropriate to the audience has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion has a clear, one-sentence statement of purpose reflects adequate research and use of support materials is free of errors in grammar, pronunciation, and word usage is delivered extemporaneously from notes brief enough to promote conversational delivery

What grade will you make?

the subject through selecting appropriate, relevant, and interesting support materials creates and sustains attention with vivid, clear, and interesting use of language extends the knowledge and understanding of the audience demonstrates poise and confidence in vocal and physical delivery

An "A" speech conforms to all of the above, as well as


demonstrates imagination and creativity in topic selection develops strong bonds of identification among speaker, audience, and topic adapts support materials to the experiential world of audience genuinely contributes to the knowledge and beliefs of audience demonstrates an artful and memorable use of language creates a style of delivery that is energetic, enjoyable, and compelling

A B speech conforms to all of the above and also


deals with a challenging topic fulfills all requirements of introductions and conclusions exhibits proficient use of transitions, signposts, and connectives utilizes an organizational pattern that is discernible, appropriate, and enlightening to the purpose of the speech demonstrates a command of research on

D and F speeches do not meet the requirements above

for "C," and they may also be

unrehearsed, unprepared, unsupported

opinions fabricated or deliberately distorted evidence plagiarized

Blackboard
and How to Get There
Whats Blackboard?
Every course at USF has a website called Blackboard. If your instructor chooses to use this for your class, then youll need to know how to navigate the site.

Always start at https://my.usf. edu

Forwarding mail from USF email account


Every student at USF has a USF email account. If you have another email account (through aol, msn, roadrunner, etc.), please forward your USF mail to the account you use. Heres how to do it:

Go to https://my.usf.ed u
Log in with your NetID and password. If youre a first-time user, follow the prompts to activate your account. It is possible to customize your personal my USF page. When youre up and running, each time you log on to my.usf.edu, youll be at your Home Page. From here, you can go to all the courses youre taking by clicking on the Courses Tab at the top of the screen, including SPC 2600. You can customize your Home Page, and you can choose from a variety of content modules (for examples, bookmarks, calculator, horoscope) and colors. Just find the Content button on the upper right-hand side of your home page. Youll be amazed at the options!

Go to https://una.acomp.usf.edu/
The page says Welcome to NetID Account Information. Sign in with your NetID and password. The next page to pop up is UNA University network access. Welcome to UNA. Under Accounts, youll see NetID, chuma, and mail. Click mail. Here you will see a number of options. Click on Edit mail account options. The second option on this new page is Change your forwarding address. Simply fill in the name of the email account you actually use and click the button that says Forward mail to this account. Congratulations! Now when your instructor needs to reach you and uses Blackboard to email you, youll actually get the message because youve forwarded it to your most frequently used account.

Workshops
Try em, Youll Like em
Whats a Workshop?
Websters Dictionary defines workshop as 1) a room or building where work is done, 2) a group of people who meet for a period of intensive study, work, etc. in some field. In this class, well use a variety of workshop settings and strategies to help improve your communication competenciesyour comfort, confidence, and creativity before an audience. The workshops throughout the semester are opportunities for you to practice, to experiment, and to try things on for size with no grading pressure. Youll be given one-on-one feedback by your instructor, and youll be given guidance from your peers on whats working well and what you might try to do to improve.
Fun, helpful, and ungraded!

Content workshops involve small groups during class, again with specific content objectives as the focus. Developing introductions, arranging supporting material, and honing thesis statements are typical focuses of content-based workshops. Guidelines for constructive feedback will provide ways to encourage talk about skillbased competencies and creativity within the group. As always, the instructor will be a resource for guidance, feedback, and improvement. Evaluative workshops will feature a specific item from the assigned speech. The visual aid, a story, the action-step are typical items to be evaluated. The principles, for example, of effective visual aids will be applied to the specific visual aid a student brings to workshop.

Goals & Kinds of Workshops


Your instructor will give you specific things to work on to prepare for each workshop setting, and youll leave the session with specific instructions for improvement. Workshops will always be conducted during class, but their size, content, and duration will vary. Delivery workshops involve a very small group of students. Each student will present an assigned portion of the speech, receive specific feedback from the instructor, and provide feedback on classmates speeches. Students are required to attend only their specific workshop time and date.

Workshops Rules
Follow these rules to make your workshop experiences in this class successful.

1. Be prepared!
For workshops to be successful, you should always come prepared to work.

2. Bring all your speech materials.


The instructor may ask to see your outline, notes and supporting material, your specific thesis sentence, etc.

3. Show me! Dont tell

me! in Delivery Workshops


When called on to begin, the first words out of your mouth must be the first sentences of your speech. This rule is to prevent hemming-and-hawing-delaying-tactics. For example, these are really bad workshop starts: I plan to stand over here and not at the lectern. Just do it! Dont tell us about it! Im not sure which attention-getter to use. Ive thought about this quotation or this statistic. Youre using delaying tactics! Start with one, and in workshop, well discuss whether or not this is an effective attention-getter. I havent really worked on this. Then youre not prepared, are you? How can you workshop if youre not prepared?

feedback. And she/he will stop you at the precise moment you need to work on something.

5. Be ready to experiment, especially in Content Workshops.


The instructor may ask you to quickly brainstorm other strategies, or to workout loudon language that is more concise, clear, or memorable. Workshop is license to try things differently! Be ready to do that!

6. It will be over soon!


In one-on-one workshops, you will be the focus of attention for a short amount of time. It will be intense, interactive, and fun, but not long.

4. The instructor will stop youfrequently.


Dont worry about this! The whole idea of workshop is to provide constructive, pointed

7. Be supportive of your classmates during their five minutes.


Youre an important audience member for your peerslisten and be ready with comments, ideas, and applause.

Study Guide
for the Final Examination
Format
The final examination in SPC 2600 is a 75item multiple choice test covering chapters 1-14 (not 15).

Keep track all semester of whats on the final exam.

Time and Place


All daytime sections of SPC 2600 take the exam on the same day and time announced in the Final Exam Matrix. Your instructor will announce the time, date, and room number. Remember: You wont take the final exam in your regular classroom. Nighttime sections will take the exam in their regular classrooms, on the evening the class regularly meets, during final exam week. Make sure to bring a #2 pencil. A scantron sheet will be provided for you.

Know the barriers to good listening Know how listeners are deliberately misguided Know the differences among different listening purposes: appreciative, discriminative, empathic, comprehensive and critical Know the questions for listening for comprehension

Chapter Four
Define culture Understand the seven sounded word principles (integrative, redundant, traditionalist, concrete, agonistically toned, participatory, situational) Define multiculturalism Know how speakers can negotiate difference and related definitions

What to Study
Chapter One
Define public speaking as an interactive process Understand skyhook principle Distinguish between ethics and ethos

Chapter Five
Apply audience demographic analysis (i.e., age, gender, education, group membership, cultural and ethnic background) Apply hostile audience strategies Apply audience segmentation strategies Understand the concepts of audience beliefs, attitudes, and values Know how audience analysis helps develop speaking goals

Chapter Two
Know the differences among subject, specific purpose, general purpose, and central idea Know the 6 ways to develop confident delivery

Chapter Six
Understand the differences between primary

Chapter Three

and secondary sources Know how to evaluate sources Know the types of supporting materials Know 5 functions of supporting materials Define plagiarism Know guidelines for choosing supporting materials Know the 4 tips for using statistics as support

when they are appropriate Evaluate pacing, pauses, and rate in a speech

Chapter Eleven
Know the functions of visual aids Understand general strategies for selecting and using visual aids

Chapter Seven
Understand organizational patterns for speeches Know memory and organizational skills Distinguish between types of outlines

Chapter Twelve
Know the functions of informative speaking Understand the essential qualities of informative speaking (clarity, associating new ideas with familiar ones, clustering, visualizations, motivation) Know the 5 tips for developing informative speeches

Chapter Eight
Know the factors of attention (activity, reality, vital, proximity, familiarity, novelty) Know the elements of an introduction Know the elements of a conclusion

Chapter Thirteen
Know the elements of speaker credibility Define motive cluster Recognize examples of motive clusters (affilitation, achievement, and power) Know the steps and order of Monroes Motivated Sequence

Chapter Nine
Know the qualities of clear oral style Understand the principles of gender-neutral language use Know the types of imagery (visual, auditory, gustatory, olfactory) Know the types of definitions (etymological, contextual, exemplar, stipulative) Recognize images, metaphors, and definitions

Chapter Fourteen
Know the types of claims (fact, value, policy) Know the types of reasoning (from examples, from generalization, from sign, from parallel cases, from cause) Know the questions to test each kind of reasoning Recognize fallacies Know the 5 tips for developing argumentative cases

Chapter Ten
Understand the dimensions of nonverbal communication Know the different methods of speech delivery (memorized, manuscript, impromptu, extemporaneous) and

Success Speech
Speech #1 Assignment
Thinking about this Assignment
Most of us treasure our symbols of success: photographs, trophies, diplomas, announcements, certificates, letters of acceptance. We usually keep these items in special places as reminders of hard-won victories and special moments in our lives. This speech assignment invites you to introduce yourself to your classmates using one of these symbols of your success. In sharing your success, you are also telling the audience about yourself: whats important to you, what obstacles youve overcome, what is your vision of the future. This speech, then, has two purposes: 1) to inform the audience about you, and 2) to share a success youve had in your life. You should begin work on this speech by thinking about turning points in your life. How is this turning point represented? A photograph? A sample of wall paper? Next, move outside yourself to ask, What does the audience need to know to understand this symbol? How can I organize this talk to best share this information with them?
Time limit: 2-3 minutes

interaction with the audience

Steps to Building a Success Speech


1. Select your success!
Choose your moment and its representation. Make sure that the symbol is small enough to hold in your hands while you speak. Dont bring in your car or your mom, but a good photograph of your car or your mom would work well.

2. Begin gathering your information.


What are you holding? Is there a story behind this symbol? What does this symbol represent? What does the audience need to know to understand why this is a success for you?

3. Organize the information.


Start by piquing the audiences curiosity. What are you holding? Is it obvious (a trophy) or does it need explanation? (In this envelope is the most important letter Ive ever gotten.) If you tell a story, make sure the details flow clearly, usually in chronological order. After your explanation, draw a conclusion relating this symbol of success to your past, your future, or your present-day values and attitudes.

Objectives of this Assignment


to introduce yourself to the audience with a symbol of your success to deliver this speech from a brief outline that encourages eye contact and

4. Compose the speech.


Out loud, begin talking through your speech, thinking beginning, middle, and end (i.e., introduction, body, conclusion). Outline in writing as you go. When you find bumpy places, try saying it different ways. Find language thats comfortable to you. Say it again. Jot down just a few words to jog your memory. At the end of this session, you should have a good speaking outline for your speech.

Additional Notes from Instructor

5. Rehearse!
Rehearse while holding the object. Refer to your notes, dont read your notes! Time your speech. Perform your speech again, and again.

6. Prepare an outline.
Prepare an outline of the speech to turn into the instructor on the day of your speech. Some instructors may want the outline you worked from during your speech; others may want a "clean" copy.

Checklist on
Speech Day

Any questions? Write them here.

Bring my videotape Bring this Student Handbook Bring my symbol Bring outline/notecards for speech Review evaluation form for Success Speech. Have I fulfilled all the requirements of the assignment? Review the criteria for Evaluating Speeches. What kind of grade can I expect? Other:

Sentence Outline
Success Speech
How high can you climb?

Speech Title: I Found Success with a T-Shirt General Purpose: Specific Purpose: Thesis: To inform To inform my classmates about my success of graduating from the Mid-Atlantic School of Rock Climbing. Last summer I participated in the Skyward Challenge, a seven-day rock climbing event that made me more confident.

I.

Introduction
A. This is a t-shirt. You all probably have many, many t-shirts tucked away in your drawers: some are plain, some have writing on them. Maybe you picked up some of your t-shirts on vacation, or maybe you just bought them at your favorite store in the mall. You keep the ones that you like the best on top of your clothing rotation. (attention-getter & common ground) My t-shirt, however, represents a success. It seems that my entire life or as long as I can remember I have always been afraid of heights and a little unsure of my abilities, but through rock climbing, that all seemed to change and in a big way. This t-shirt came from the Mid-Atlantic School of Rock Climbing, the summer camp where I learned and performed good techniques of rock climbing and repelling. This t-shirt represents how a fear became a strength. (credibility) Rock Climbing became a way for me to realize I can achieve anything I really put my mind to. (thesis) D. Im going to tell you the story of how participating in rock climbing made me a stronger, more focused, and more confident person. (preview)

B.

C.

II. Body

A.

Story: I want to start out by telling you all about my first climb. 1. learning the equipment 2. getting up on the rock face 3. successful first climb with my instructor Inner strength: Next, I want to talk about how nervous I was to repel off the side of a mountain. Becoming focused: After the first few times of climbing, I realized that I had to focus my energy on finding the right hand and foot holds to make a successful climb. Feeling Confident: After the 7 Day event, I reached my goal, and Ive become more confident and self-assured after conquering the mountain.

B. C.

D.

III. Conclusion
A. There are a lot of ways to test yourself and to improve, and last summer I found a way to do just that. Rock climbing gave me a way to focus my energies and become more confident. (review) Rock climbing really was a way to demonstrate that I can rely on myself. (restate thesis) My t-shirt may just be a regular old t-shirt to everyone else, but to me it represents how I can reach new heights with hard work. I know there are many more mountains to climb in life and with this success under my belt, I feel like I can do anything. (clincher)

B. C.

Speaking Outline
Success Speech
1 Introduction Your T-Shirtsplain, vacation, on top of pile My T-Shirtmy success Thesis: Rock climbing became a way for me to realize anything I put my mind to. Preview: 1) stronger 2) more focused 3) more confident Body A. Story First Rock Climb 1) equipment 2) getting up 3) success with instructor B. Inner Strength--nervous C. Becoming focusedright holds D. Feeling Confident--goal

Just key words prompt the speech.

2 Conclusion 1. Review: strength, focused, confidence 2. Thesis: demonstrate self-reliance. Rock climbingmade me realize I can do anything I put my mind to. 3. Clincher: many more mountains to climb in life, I can do anything.

Evaluation Form
Success Speech
Introduction Needs work
Gained attention? Established speakers credibility? Common ground with audience? Previewed body of speech? One-sentence statement of thesis?

Name______________________________________ __ Symbol of Success_____________________________ Very Good Average

Body
Main points clear? Organizational pattern clear? Transitions helpful? Support material cited?

Conclusion
Prepared audience for ending? Reviewed main points? Reinforced thesis? Vivid clincher?

Delivery
Maintained strong eye contact? Use of brief notes/outline? Exuded poise and confidence? Extemporaneous style?

Overall Evaluation
Topic challenging? Specific purpose well chosen? Message adapted to audience? Held interest of audience?

Requirements of Assignment
Interesting Symbol? Brief outline?

Additional Comments/Grade:

Name

Topic

Grade

Excellent

Good

Needs work

Fair

Missing

SUGGESTIONS

INTRODUCTION
Attention Getter Audience Motivation Established Credibility Clear/Appropriate Thesis Preview of Main Points

______ Work on a more effective attention-getter ______ Specifically relate the topic to your audience ______ Explicitly state your credibility ______ Explicitly state what you are going to talk about (1st, 2nd, 3rd)

BODY
Organizational Structure Transitions Clear Main Points Held Audience Interest

______ Work on clearer organization pattern ______ Include transitions and signposts

______ Incorporate more thorough research (more or varied sources) ______ Cite your research sources ______ Use a wider variety of verbal support (Include at least one story) ______ Include visual support aids _____ Follow the guidelines for visual support in Ch. ____

CONTENT
Challenging Topic Verbal Support Visual Support Quality of Research Quality of Outline

______ Follow outline samples in the Textbook Ch. ____ or Handbook ______ Include a bibliography

CONCLUSION
Review Reinforced Thesis Vivid Clincher

______ Summarize main points ______ End with impact

DELIVERY
Use of Notes Eye Contact Voice & Language Gestures

______ Avoid reading your notes; use key words only ______ Increase eye contact ______ Increase volume ______ Use vocal variety ______ Show your enthusiasm!

OTHER
Interesting symbol

______ Incorporate more gestures/ movement ______ Think about your selfpresentation ______ Watch disfluencies

Peer Feedback #1
Success Speech
Speakers Name_____________________________ Observers Name_____________________________

Use this form to give feedback to your classmates. Be positive, be constructive, be helpful! What was the most outstanding aspect of the speech?

Name one thing that could be improved.

What do you remember most about the speech?

Peer Feedback #2
Success Speech
Speakers Name_____________________________ Observers Name_____________________________

Use this form to give feedback to your classmates. Be positive, be constructive, be helpful! What was the most outstanding aspect of the speech?

Name one thing that could be improved.

What do you remember most about the speech?

Peer Feedback #3
Success Speech
Speakers Name_____________________________ Observers Name_____________________________

Use this form to give feedback to your classmates. Be positive, be constructive, be helpful! What was the most outstanding aspect of the speech?

Name one thing that could be improved.

What do you remember most about the speech?

Praise Speech
Speech #2 Assignment
Thinking About This Assignment
Contemporary US culture evidences many formal speeches that praise an individual award ceremonies, testimonials, eulogies, and dedications. More informal praise speeches include introductions you make between friends (Youve got to meet Kiva! Shes so cool!) and the letters of recommendation written by former teachers and employers. In both these praise contexts, the speaker does three things: 1) makes a claim about this persons importance, value, talents, or abilities, 2) supports this claim with relevant and illustrative examples, and 3) invites the audience to agree with the claim. You should begin work on this Praise Speech by thinking about a public figure important to you. How and why does this individual impact you? Next, move outside yourself to ask, How is this person important in a larger context? Why should my audience care? What can I say that will make this audience agree with my perceptions and feelings toward this individual? This speechs rhetorical purpose then is both informative and persuasive: the information you present should increase the audiences knowledge about this individual and persuade the audience to agree that this individual is indeed praiseworthy.
Time limit: 2-4 minutes.

Objectives of This Assignment


to conduct library research to compose a speech with a clear, onesentence thesis statement to support this thesis with two or three main points

Steps to Building a Praise Speech


1. Select a public figure.
Choose a public figure (living or dead) who is important to you and important in a larger, public context. In other words, dont pick Aunt Jane or your high school coach. Pick someone you can find a substantial amount of information about in your research. Here are some contexts to help you brainstorm: role models of excellence (sports figures, CEOs, entertainers) visionary thinkers (scientists, activists, writers, artists) agents of change (political leaders, historical figures) inspirational hero(in)es

2. Conduct research on this public figure.


Gather information from a variety of sources (books, magazines, biographies, autobiographies, web sites, almanacs,

encyclopedias, etc.) Work for a balance between common knowledge to little known facts. For example, most of us know that Oprah Winfrey started as a television news-anchor, but did you know that she is the subject of two university courses?

write out the speech word for word! Practice until you can deliver the entire speech in a conversational style, using the brief notes to jog your memory. Time your speech. Do not go over 4 minutes.

7. Prepare an outline
Prepare an outline of the speech to turn in to the instructor on the day of your speech. Some instructors may want the outline you worked from during your speech; others may want a "clean" copy. See the next pages for two sample outlines of a Praise Speech. Dont forget to include the bibliography for your research sources.

3. Develop a clear, arguable one-sentence thesis statement.


The thesis should be arguablethat is, someone could argue just the opposite of what you claim. If my thesis statement is Oprah Winfrey builds lives a person at a time, then someone might argue that she does not build livesonly her own. If someone cant argue against your thesis, then you havent worked hard enough on it. Follow the guidelines for developing your thesis statement from Chapters 1 and 8.

4. Develop two or three points that support the thesis.


In other words, prove your thesis with facts! Facts in public speaking include stories, testimony, examples, statistics, etc. Heres where all your research pays off.

Questions? Write them here.

5. Compose the speech.


Develop an attention-getting introduction that introduces the person, states your onesentence thesis, and previews your points. Cover each point of your speech with appropriate examples, illustrations, facts and stories from your research. Conclude the speech with a review of your main points, a restatement of your thesis, and end with a vivid "clincher.

Checklist on
Speech Day

6. Rehearse the speech.


Work with your outline/note cards. Do not

Bring my videotape Bring this Student Handbook Bring outline/notecards for speech Review evaluation form for Praise Speech. Have I fulfilled all the requirements of the assignment?

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Sentence Outline
Praise Speech
Whos your s/hero?

Speech Title: Building Better Lives Public Figure: General Purpose: Specific Purpose: Thesis: Oprah Winfrey To inform + To persuade = To praise To praise Oprah Winfrey to my classmates as an agent of change in our lives. Oprah Winfrey builds lives a person at a time.

I.

Introduction:
A. In 1976, a frightened 20 year-old African American woman co-anchored the six oclock news, unsuccessfully trying to conceal her bald head, the result of a botched perm. She had been told that her hair was too thick, her nose too wide, and her chin too big. (attention getter). Today, you and I and 26 million other viewers in 160 countries know her as a one-word, one-woman industryOprah. Her influence and contributions to the betterment of society are so significant that she is even the subject of two university courses. Everyone here has heard about The Oprah Winfrey Show, right? But do you all know how Oprah has helped to change the way we look at television personalities as not just stars? (credibility & common ground). Oprah Winfrey builds and transforms lives a person at a time. (thesis) I will cover two areas: 1. Winfreys entrepreneurship: she builds businesses that transform peoples lives. 2. Winfreys philanthropy: she builds charities that build new lives. (preview)

B.

C. D.

Transition: I would like to begin by telling you a little bit about how Oprah betters society by building and transforming lives.

II.

Body:
A. Winfreys entrepreneurship features social and individual transformation, and I have been transformed by her work. 1. film Beloved: Harpo Inc. (Oprah spelled backwards): media and other projects of social importance. 2. The Oprah Winfrey show: $100,000 every Monday to person who improves other lives; Oprahs book club 3. O Magazine focuses on self-actualization B. Oprahs philanthropic work: we all wish we had the money or power to help those less fortunate. 1. Oprahs Angel Network: $3.5 million raised for college scholarships. Story of one recipient. 2. Donated millions to institutions of higher education. 3. Initiated National Child Protection Act: data bank of child abusers 4. Family for Better Lives Foundation: $3 million

Transition: For all of these reasons I would like to finish up by asking you all to remember how Oprah has achieved so much and bettered the lives of so many.

III.

Conclusion:
A. B. C. I have provided examples of Oprahs work, her businesses and her charities, that prove she is worthy of our praise and my admiration. (review) I think its clear that Oprah Winfrey builds and transforms lives a person at a time. (restate thesis) So, when you graduate and begin to achieve success out there, keep in mind the words of Oprah: I realize that I didnt get here by myself. I understand that. I have a responsibility, not only as a black woman, but as a human being to do good work. (clincher)

Bibliography

Gale Group. (1997). Black history month, Biography oprah winfrey. Retrieved May 28, 2002, from http://www.galegroup.com/free_resources/bhm/bio/winfrey_o.htm Mask, T. (1999, May 20). Now call her professor. Chicago Daily Herald. New U. of I. Class is all about Oprah. (2001, February 7). Chicago Sun Times. Oprah Winfrey; Harpo. (2002, January 14). Business Week, 3765, 50-58. Sellers, P. (2002, April 1). The business of being Oprah. Fortune, 145, 50. Tillotson, K. (2001, June 17). Women venture to receive $100,000 on Oprah Monday. Star Tribune. The way we live now: The study of O. (2001, June 17). New York Times.

Speaking Outline
Praise Speech
1 Introduction 1976, 20-years old, Bald Head, Botched Perm. Hair, Nose, Chin 26 million in 160 countries. influence & significance--2 university courses Oprah Winfrey Showchanged way we look stars Thesis: OW builds and transforms lives. Preview: 1) entrepreneurship 2) philanthropy Transition: How O betters society Body A. Entrepreneurship 1. Beloved & Harpo Prod 2. Show $100,000 Mondays Book Club 3. O Magazineself actualization B. Philanthropy 1. Angel Network: $3.5 million 2. Millions to higher ed 3. National Child Protection Act 4. Family for Better Lives Foundation: $3. million

Write out direct quotations and numbers.

Transition: For all these reasons, ask you to remember how Oprah achieves and betters Conclusion A. Review: businesses and charities B. Thesis: builds and transforms lives C. Clincher: When you graduate, Orpahs words: I realize that I didnt get here by myself. I understand that. I have a responsibility, not only as a black woman, but as a human being to do good work.

Evaluation Form
Praise Speech
Introduction Needs work
Gained attention? Established speakers credibility? Common ground with audience? Previewed body of speech? One-sentence statement of thesis?

Speakers Name_________________________________

Public Figure____________________________________

Very Good

Average

Body
Main points clear? Organizational pattern clear? Transitions helpful? Support material?

Conclusion
Prepared audience for ending? Reviewed main points? Reinforced thesis? Vivid clincher?

Delivery
Maintained strong eye contact? Use of brief notes/outline? Exuded poise and confidence? Extemporaneous style?

Overall Evaluation
Topic challenging? Specific purpose well chosen? Message adapted to audience? Held interest of audience?

Requirements of Assignment
Sufficient research? Praise-worthy choice and claims? Identifiable thesis?

Additional Comments/Grade:

Name
Excellent Good Needs work Fair

Topic
Missing

Grade
SUGGESTIONS

INTRODUCTION
Attention Getter Audience Motivation Established Credibility Clear/Appropriate Thesis Preview of Main Points

______ Work on a more effective attention-getter ______ Specifically relate the topic to your audience ______ Explicitly state your credibility ______ Explicitly state what you are going to talk about (1st, 2nd, 3rd)

BODY
Organizational Structure Transitions Clear Main Points Held Audience Interest

______ Work on clearer organization pattern ______ Include transitions and signposts

______ Incorporate more thorough research (more or varied sources) ______ Cite your research sources ______ Use a wider variety of verbal support (Include at least one story) ______ Include visual support aids _____ Follow the guidelines for visual support in Ch. ____

CONTENT
Challenging Topic Verbal Support Visual Support Quality of Research Quality of Outline

______ Follow outline samples in the Textbook Ch. ____ or Handbook ______ Include a bibliography

CONCLUSION
Review Reinforced Thesis Vivid Clincher

______ Summarize main points ______ End with impact

DELIVERY
Use of Notes Eye Contact Voice & Language Gestures

______ Avoid reading your notes; use key words only ______ Increase eye contact ______ Increase volume ______ Use vocal variety ______ Show your enthusiasm!

OTHER
Praiseworthy choice and claims

______ Incorporate more gestures/ movement ______ Think about your selfpresentation

______ Watch disfluencies Identifiable thesis

Peer Feedback #1
Praise Speech
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________

1. In your opinion, what was the thesis statement for this speech?

2. What was the most interesting part of the speech?

3. What elements of delivery were well developed?

4. What one suggestion for improvement can you make?

Peer Feedback #2
Praise Speech

Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________

1. In your opinion, what was the thesis statement for this speech?

2. What was the most interesting part of the speech?

3. What elements of delivery were well developed?

4. What one suggestion for improvement can you make?

Peer Feedback #3
Praise Speech
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________

1. In your opinion, what was the thesis statement for this speech?

2. What was the most interesting part of the speech?

3. What elements of delivery were well developed?

4. What one suggestion for improvement can you make?

Informative Speech
Speech #3 Assignment
Thinking About This Assignment
In contemporary US culture, we are often audiences for informative speaking: we watch cooking demonstrations on the Food Network, attend orientation sessions for new students or new employees, participate in classes and workshops, even find ourselves in tour groups. In each of these contexts, the speaker presents information we need to know to be better cooks, students, employees, or tourists. Informative speakers succeed when they are excited about the content, know it well, and make the subject important and beneficial to the audience. As with the Praise Speech, you should begin work on this speech by asking yourself, what am I interested in? Involved with? What do I know a great deal about? Then, move outside yourself to ask, What can I say or do that will share my excitement and my knowledge with my audience? How and why should the audience be interested in this? This speechs rhetorical purpose is first an informative one. But you must also persuade the audience, through the content and its performance, that you are worth listening to and learning from.
Time limit: 3-5 minutes

to utilize at least two different kinds of support material to organize the speech with an appropriate and discernible structure

Steps to Building an Informative Speech


1. Choose a subject area based on one of the following categories.
Something you do. This may be a hobby, a talent, or a special skill. Examples: taxidermy, web site building, hip hop music, scuba diving, reading Tarot cards, Paint Ball Jungle Games, etc. A cause you support or organization you belong to. Examples: Big Brothers/Big Sisters; Greenpeace; Habitat for Humanity. Consumer information that is important to you. Examples: irradiated food, no-animal testing cosmetics; vegetarianism; getting the most from your doctor. How-to demonstrations. This category deserves a special warning: do not choose to demonstrate how to do something that everyone knows how to do (make a pizza, tie your shoes, make a long distance phone call, etc.) There are interesting informative speeches that teach the steps of a process even if the audience will never engage in it. For example, how to make a mummy in ancient Egypt was an elaborate and interesting process.

Objectives of This Assignment


to conduct library research to support a clear, one-sentence thesis

Remember, the goal of this assignment is not to talk about why youre interested in this topic, but to develop an interesting, informative speech for your audience using your interest as a beginning.

5. Include at least two different kinds of support materials from two different sources.
This is a 2x2 development of support. In other words, your two sources cannot both be from the internet, or both from magazine articles. Review Chapter 7 for the kinds of support. For example, the pre-med student may use a 1) case study from a biology textbook, and 2) statistics provided by the American Medical Association for her speech. This is 2 different kinds of support from 2 different media (2x2).

2. Conduct research on this topic.


You should consult a wide variety of sources: print newspapers, magazines, journals, internet web sites, pamphlets, organizational materials, etc. You may not rely solely on your experience to provide the content of the speech. Gather statistics, stories, examples, illustrations, case studies, etc.

3. Adapt the topic and information to the audience.


Ask the question, Why should the audience be interested in this? Although topic selection starts with you, your thesis statement should reflect the speechs benefits to the audience. For example, a premed student might inform the audience about How to Get More from your Doctor's Visit." You should review Chapter 5 for Audience Analysis.

6. Prepare your outline. Rehearse!

Requirements of this assignment.


Is your organizational pattern clear? Do you have two different kinds of support?

Checklist on
Speech Day

4. Select a specific organizational pattern for the speech.


Review Chapter 8 for the kinds of organization. Arrange your information and ideas within the pattern you have chosen. The "paint ball" student may develop her speech topically: 1) the equipment needed to play, 2) the rules of the game, 3) the satisfaction and exercise of playing.

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Questions? Write them here.

Sentence Outline
Informative Speech
Speech Title: Syncope or Not Syncope: That is the Question General Purpose: Specific Purpose: To inform To inform my classmates about the common faint
The coolest head prevails.

Thesis: Im going to help you be the coolest head around when someone faints.

I.

Introduction
A. Has anyone ever fainted or seen anyone that has? Does anyone know what causes the common faint, what it is called or what to do if some one faints? Syncope is a sudden loss of consciousness due to lack of sufficient oxygenated blood to the brain. (attention-getter & common ground) Syncope (pronounced sing-koh-pee) is a scary thing. It accounts for 1. 1.5 million visits a year to the doctor 2. 160,000 hospitalizations; and 3. 3% of all trips to the emergency room I know this medical condition well, and you, or someone you know, probably does too. The more simple term? Fainting. The common faint 1. happens to people under 45 years old 2. 3. no other medical conditions (diabetes, heart condition, current illness or pregnancy) unconscious for no more than 60 seconds; completely recovered in 15 minutes

B.

C.

4. D. E.

Even if its common, its still scary. And Ive learned the hard way that most people dont know what to do when I faint. (credibility)

Today Im going to share information that will make you the coolest head around when someone faints. (thesis) Ill cover three areas: causes of the common faint, symptoms, and first aid treatment. (preview)

Transition: First I would like to start off by talking a little bit about the causes of fainting.

II.

Body
A. Causes of fainting 1. 2. Story of my fainting at West Palm Beachs City Walk fulfilled two of the three most common causes of fainting three most common causes a. standing for a long time b. hot, humid, crowded setting c. lack of recent food or water

Transition: The people around me assumed I was dead, dying, and worse. They didnt keep cool heads or know what to look for. B. Symptoms: Sometimes a person will just keel over, but more often there are signs of an oncoming episode of syncope 1. unsteadiness, dizziness 2. face becomes pale and perspiration appears 3. skin becomes cold and clammy 4. pulse feels weak and erratic 5. nausea

Transition: The words I feel like Im going to faint should get you in first-aid mode! C. 1. First-Aid before/during/after Before fainting: a. Head between knees accomplishes the first thing the person needs to restore adequate supply of blood to brain by putting brain lower than the heart. Too late? b. Help person to the ground! Dead weight dropping can cause lots of bruises and cuts. During/When person is unconscious: Think 3 Ls: Legs, Listen, Loosen. a. Position person on back, elevate legs above heart. b. Listen for breathing sounds. (If person is not breathing, start CPR

2.

3.

and call 911! this is serious!) But stay calm, this is a common faint. Okay? Shes breathing! c. Loosen belts, collars, or other constrictive clothing. After/As person regains consciousness: Think Dont. a. Dont slap or shout (that can be scarier than the faint itself). Instead, reassure her that shes safe, she just fainted. b. Dont let person get up right away. (Staying prone for 15 minutes is recommended by most medical personnel.) c. Dont give any food, but sips of water are okay.

Transition: Remember, most people are fully recovered from common faints in 15 minutes. Your friend will be okay! Ive learned the hard way (and have the bruises to prove it) that most people dont know what to do when someone faints.

III.

Conclusion
A. Ive shared common causes, symptoms, and first aid treatment for fainting. Remember Legs, Listen, and Loosen. (review) B. Syncope is a medical condition that can signal serious, even life-threatening, problems. But Ive given you information today to help you have the coolest head in the house during a common faint. (thesis) Our bodies are very, very smart! and we should listen to them. Think of fainting as natures way of saying, I cant fight gravity any longer. I cant get blood to your brain unless you lie down. You are going to lie down. Right now. There. Thats better. (clincher)

C.

Bibliography
Fainting and Fever. Retrieved June 1, 2002, from www.mayoclinic.com First Aid: Fainting. (1998). World Book Medical Encyclopedia. Witting, Michael, M.D. (2002). Fainting. AAEM Emergency Medical and Family Health Guide.

Speaking Outline
Informative Speech
1 Introduction Fainted? Causes? What to do? Syncope definition . Scary: 1.5 million doctor visits year Body 160,000 hospitalizations First point: 3 Common Causes (My 3% of ER trips Story) 2
Always number your cards.

standing Common faint hot, humid, crowded under 45 years lack food/water no other med cond 60 seconds; 15 min Transition: assumed dead, dying, didnt Third point: First aid Learned hard way what to keep cool heads do. Beforehead below heart During3Ls Thesis: Youll be coolest head when Second point: Symptoms someone faints unsteadiness, dizziness legs listen pale and perspiration Preview: loosen skin cold, clammy 1) causes AfterDont pulse weak, erratic 2) symptoms slap, shout nausea 3) first-aid let them up Transition: wordsfirst aid mode no food, water okay Transition: friend okay Conclusion Review: causes, symptoms, treatment (3Ls) Thesis: coolest head during common faint Clincher: Natures way of saying cant fight gravity any longer.

Evaluation Form
Informative Speech
Speakers Name_________________________________ Topic________________________________________

Introduction Needs work


Gained attention? Established speakers credibility? Common ground with audience? Previewed body of speech? One-sentence statement of thesis?

Very Good

Average

Body
Main points clear? Organizational pattern clear? Transitions helpful? Support material?

Conclusion
Prepared audience for ending? Reviewed main points? Reinforced thesis? Vivid clincher?

Delivery
Maintained strong eye contact? Use of brief notes? Exuded poise and confidence? Extemporaneous style?

Overall Evaluation
Topic challenging? Specific purpose well chosen? Message adapted to audience? Held interest of audience?

Requirements of Assignment
Organizational pattern? 2 x 2 sources?

Additional Comments/Grade:

Name
Excellent Good Needs work Fair

Topic
Missing

Grade
SUGGESTIONS

INTRODUCTION
Attention Getter Audience Motivation Established Credibility Clear/Appropriate Thesis Preview of Main Points

______ Work on a more effective attention-getter ______ Specifically relate the topic to your audience ______ Explicitly state your credibility ______ Explicitly state what you are going to talk about (1st, 2nd, 3rd)

BODY
Organizational Structure Transitions Clear Main Points Held Audience Interest

______ Work on clearer organization pattern ______ Include transitions and signposts

______ Incorporate more thorough research (more or varied sources) ______ Cite your research sources ______ Use a wider variety of verbal support (Include at least one story) ______ Include visual support aids _____ Follow the guidelines for visual support in Ch. ____

CONTENT
Challenging Topic Verbal Support Visual Support Quality of Research Quality of Outline

______ Follow outline samples in the Textbook Ch. ____ or Handbook ______ Include a bibliography

CONCLUSION
Review Reinforced Thesis Vivid Clincher

______ Summarize main points ______ End with impact

DELIVERY
Use of Notes Eye Contact Voice & Language Gestures

______ Avoid reading your notes; use key words only ______ Increase eye contact ______ Increase volume ______ Use vocal variety ______ Show your enthusiasm!

OTHER
Organizational pattern

______ Incorporate more gestures/ movement ______ Think about your selfpresentation

______ Watch disfluencies 2 x 2 Sources

Peer Feedback #1
Informative Speech
1.
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________

Name one new thing you learned in this speech.

2.

Check the organizational pattern used:


___ Chronological ___ Topical ___ Problem Solving ___ Spatial ___ Familiarity-Acceptance ___ Question-Answer ___Causal ___Inquiry ___Elimination

Did it work? Why or why not?

3.

What type of support materials did the speaker use?


___ Contrast ___ Statistics ___ Examples ___ Testimony ___ Comparisons ___ Quotations

Which one was most memorable? Why?

4.

What one suggestion for improvement can you make?

Peer Feedback #2
Informative Speech
1.
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________

Name one new thing you learned in this speech.

2.

Check the organizational pattern used:


___ Chronological ___ Topical ___ Problem Solving ___ Spatial ___ Familiarity-Acceptance ___ Question-Answer ___Causal ___Inquiry ___Elimination

Did it work? Why or why not?

3.

What type of support materials did the speaker use?


___ Contrast ___ Statistics ___ Examples ___ Testimony ___ Comparisons ___ Quotations

Which one was most memorable? Why?

4.

What one suggestion for improvement can you make?

Peer Feedback #3
Informative Speech
1.
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________

Name one new thing you learned in this speech.

2.

Check the organizational pattern used:


___ Chronological ___ Topical ___ Problem Solving ___ Spatial ___ Familiarity-Acceptance ___ Question-Answer ___Causal ___Inquiry ___Elimination

Did it work? Why or why not?

3.

What type of support materials did the speaker use?


___ Contrast ___ Statistics ___ Examples ___ Testimony ___ Comparisons ___ Quotations

Which one was most memorable? Why?

4.

What one suggestion for improvement can you make?

Paired Debate
Speech #4 Assignment
Thinking About This Assignment
Debates happen all around us. Every four years, Presidential candidates engage in very formal, structured debates on specific questions presented by journalists. Every year, state legislators engage in floor debate arguing for or against legislation. Every day, trial lawyers debate who did it and why. In each of these contexts, the sides are clearly drawn, support is presented for each side, and the audience is invited to agree with one party while rejecting the claims of the other. As with all the speeches in this class, start by thinking about what excites you, makes you mad, makes you glad. But this speech differs from previous speeches because youll have to do this thinking with a partner. Together youll agree on a topic, narrow it, share research, and develop a thesis. Then youll compose a speech and deliver itknowing that the next person to speak will disagree with everything youve said! Thats a debate.
Time limit: 4-6 minutes.

Steps to Building a Debate


1. Choose a topic.
You and your partner should identify a controversial topic or issue on which there are at least two clear and oppositional positions. One student might argue that "School uniforms will save the public school system;" her partner might argue that "School uniforms will destroy the public school system."

2. Research your topic.


You should collect information until you feel you have a firm grasp of the issues on both sides. Review Chapter 6 & 7 on research strategies.

3. With your partner, develop a thesis.


This thesis should be debatable with evidence that both that partners can argue with evidence from their side. Be sure to limit the terms and scope of the argument. "Marijuana should be legalized is probably too broad a topic; but "marijuana should be legalized for medical use" is a nicely limited topic, with plentiful evidence on both sides.

Objectives of This Assignment


to apply the principles of reasoning and argumentation in public speaking to demonstrate all the requirements of introductions and conclusions to develop and to utilize an appropriate visual aid in your speech

4. Organize your speech.


What organizational pattern best fits this topic and your purpose?

Create a vivid introduction that establishes your credibility as a speaker on this topic, and work for a conclusion that wraps up your argument well. Review chapter 9 on Introductions and Conclusions. The speech must be clearly organized to utilize effective transitions, summaries, and previews to communicate the structure of the speech to the audience.

performance.

Questions? Write them here.

5. Develop a visual aid.


Each student must prepare a visual aid that relates to at least one argument in the debate (chart, graph, illustration, photograph, etc.). Review Chapter 12 for help preparing your aid.

6. Prepare the outline. 7. Rehearse!

Checklist on
Speech Day

Requirements of This Assignment


Debates must present clear opposing theses and support them with evidence. Each speech must include at least two different kinds of support material in the presentation. Each speaker must create an interesting visual aid to accompany the speech.

Bring my videotape Bring this Student Handbook Bring my Visual Aid Bring outline/notecards for speech Review evaluation form for Paired Debate. Have I fulfilled all the requirements of the assignment? Review the criteria for Evaluating Speeches. What kind of grade can I expect? Other:

Grading
This assignment weighs 15% of your final grade in this course. Because the debaters must work together to decide on their topic, create their theses, and limit the issues to be covered, the 15 points available in this assignment are divided: 5 points of the grade will be based on the quality and coherence of the debate. 10 points of the grade will be based on each individual student's

Sentence Outline
Paired Debate
Whats your work worth?

Speech Title: The Minimum Wage Crisis General Purpose: Specific Purpose: Thesis: To persuade To persuade my audience that an increase in the minimum wage is not only feasible but also necessary. The Minimum Wage Increase Act of 2001 should be passed.

I.

Introduction
A. Imagine you are working full time. After a year's worth of full-time work, that means 40 hours a week, 52 weeks a year, you have an annual income of $10,700 derived from the $5.15 an hour minimum wage. (attention) As a college student, I have been fortunate enough to study families who rely on the minimum wage, and, as a self-supporting student I work for the minimum wage. (credibility) The minimum wage, which is aimed at low-skilled jobs, determines how much money you, as a college student, will earn. A fair raise would benefit selfsupporting college students as well as many hard-pressed families. (common ground) The Minimum Wage Increase Act of 2001 should be passed. (thesis)

B.

C.

D.

E. I will cover three points: A minimum wage increase will create jobs, cut poverty through the social value of work, and restore buying power. (preview) Transition: I would like to begin by discussing minimum wage and employment.

II.

Body
A. First (signpost) a minimum wage increase will create jobs. 1. Contrary to the right-wing rhetoric, the minimum wage is not a "job killer." According to Theda Skocpol in The Missing Middle, published in 2000, the minimum wage actually helps create jobs. A fair minimum wage increase would put more money into the pockets of those most likely to spend it, lower-income workers. Poor workers are the most likely group to spend the money and invest it in our economy, thereby actually creating more jobs. That is what has happened since the last minimum wage increase in 1996, when millions of jobs were created. The Minimum Wage Increase Act of 2001 would put more money into the pockets of workers and create jobs by raising the minimum wage to $6.65 an hour over an 18 month period.

2. 3.

4.

B.

Second (signpost), a minimum wage increase would cut poverty through the social value of work. 1. In the past, many have tried to fight poverty through programs that encourage work. a. b. 2. For example, welfare programs that do not have work requirements have been used to fight poverty. These programs have been rightly criticized as lacking in social value.

But passage of the Minimum Wage Increase Act of 2001 would fight poverty by the social value of work. a. b. Currently a full time worker earning the minimum wage and with 2 children would fall 30% below the federal poverty line. According to Jeff Faux in The Next Agenda, published in 2001, a raise in the minimum wage would lift millions of working families out of poverty. But it would cut poverty not through an emphasis on welfare, which finds no social support, but through work requirements.

C.

Third (signpost) passage of the Minimum Wage Increase Act of 2001 would help

to restore buying power of the minimum wage worker. 1. 2. When inflation increases and the minimum wage stays the same, the buying power of the minimum wage is reduced. As this graph from The State of Working America, published by the Economic Policy Institute in 1999 illustrates, due to inflation, over the past 30 years, the minimum wage has seen a 35% cut in buying power. That means that the average minimum wage worker today has $4,000 less in buying power than his counterpart of 30 years ago. This means that the minimum wage employee has $4,000 less in buying power for essentials such as food, health insurance, education, child care and personal savings. 4. A raise in the minimum wage would begin to remedy this dramatic loss in buying power for working families. Transition: All of these issues combined shows how your stance on minimum wage greatly affects our society.

3.

III.

Conclusion
A. In conclusion, I have explained how passage of the Minimum Wage Increase Act of 2001 would create jobs, cut poverty through an emphasis on work, and begin to restore buying power for the minimum wage worker. (Restate main points) The Minimum Wage Increase Act of 2001 should be passed. (Restate thesis) I encourage you to contact your elected representatives and encourage them to uplift working families and support the Minimum Wage Increase Act of 2001. (Call to Action) I am reminded of the words of President Franklin Roosevelt: "The moral test of our progress lies not in how much we give to those who already have too much, but in how much dignity we give to those who have too little." Those who labor and toil for a mere $5.15 an hour have too little and deserve dignity and justice. (Clincher)

B. C.

D.

Bibliography

Economic Policy Institute. The State of Working America. New York: I.L.R. Press, 1999. Faux, Jeff. The Next Agenda. New York: Westview, 2001. Skocpol, Theda. The Missing Middle. New York: Norton, 2000. The staff of 2600 thanks Stephanie Viera, a SPC 2600 student from the Fall of 2001, for allowing us to reprint her outline here. Here are speaking notecards for her speech. 1 Introduction 40 hrs/52 weeks/$10,700/$5.15 min wage Self-supporting 2

2nd Needstudents & families point: cut poverty thru social value of work 3 old MWA 2001 should be passed.welfare programs current: min wage, 2 children, 30% Conclusion below poverty line 3 points: Review: passing Min Wage Increase Act 1) create jobs of lift Jeff Fax, The Next Agenda (2001):2001 will 2) cut poverty 1) create jobs out of poverty + work requirements 3) restore buying power 2) cut poverty, emphasis on work st 3) 3rd point: restore buying power restore buying power 1 : create jobs inflation not job killer/ Theda Skocpol The + min wage=red. buying power Thesis: Missing Middle (2000) Graph: State of Working America (1999Min Wage In Act should be passed. Economic Pol Inst) money in pockets of low-income SHOW VISUAL Action: Contact Rep encourage to uplift --will spend money>create jobs working families & support Min Wage In --1996 increase>millions new jobs Act. over --$6.65 an hour over 18 monthspast 35 years 35% cut buying power Clincher: $4,000 less (for food, insur, educ, child Pres. Franklin Roosevelt: The moral test of our progress lies not in how care, savings) much we give to those who already have too much but in how much dignity we give to those who have too little. $5.15 an hourtoo little, deserve dignity & justice.

Evaluation Form
Paired Debate
Introduction Needs work
Gained attention? Established speakers credibility? Audience adaptation? Previewed body of speech? One-sentence statement of thesis?

Speakers Name_________________________________ Subject/For or Against_____________________________

Very Good

Average

Body
Main points clear? Organizational pattern clear? Transitions helpful? Support material?

Conclusion
Prepared audience for ending? Reviewed main points? Reinforced thesis? Vivid clincher?

Delivery
Maintained strong eye contact? Use of brief notes? Exuded poise and confidence? Extemporaneous style?

Overall Evaluation
Held interest of audience? Topic challenging? Specific purpose well chosen? Message adapted to audience? Held interest of audience?

Requirements of Assignment
2 kinds of support material? Visual Aid? Effective introduction and conclusion?

Additional Comments/Grade:

Name
Excellent Good

Topic
Needs work Fair Missing

Grade
SUGGESTIONS

INTRODUCTION
Attention Getter Audience Motivation Established Credibility Clear/Appropriate Thesis Preview of Main Points

______ Work on a more effective attention-getter ______ Specifically relate the topic to your audience ______ Explicitly state your credibility ______ Explicitly state what you are going to talk about (1st, 2nd, 3rd)

BODY
Organizational Structure Transitions Clear Main Points Held Audience Interest

______ Work on clearer organization pattern ______ Include transitions and signposts

______ Incorporate more thorough research (more or varied sources) ______ Cite your research sources ______ Use a wider variety of verbal support (Include at least one story) ______ Include visual support aids _____ Follow the guidelines for visual support in Ch. ____

CONTENT
Challenging Topic Verbal Support Visual Support Quality of Research Quality of Outline

______ Follow outline samples in the Textbook Ch. ____ or Handbook ______ Include a bibliography

CONCLUSION
Review Reinforced Thesis Vivid Clincher

______ Summarize main points ______ End with impact

DELIVERY
Use of Notes Eye Contact Voice & Language Gestures

______ Avoid reading your notes; use key words only ______ Increase eye contact ______ Increase volume ______ Use vocal variety ______ Show your enthusiasm!

OTHER
Kinds/Quality Support Material

______ Incorporate more gestures/ movement ______ Think about your selfpresentation

______ Watch disfluencies Visual Aid

Peer Feedback #1
Paired Debate
1.
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________ Name one new thing you learned in this speech.

2.

What type of support materials did the speaker use?


___ Contrast ___ Statistics ___ Examples ___ Testimony ___ Comparisons ___ Quotations

Which one was most memorable? Why?

3.

What was the most persuasive thing you heard?

4.

Which side won the debate? Why?

Peer Feedback #2
Paired Debate
1.
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________

Name one new thing you learned in this speech.

2.

What type of support materials did the speaker use?


___ Contrast ___ Statistics ___ Examples ___ Testimony ___ Comparisons ___ Quotations

Which one was most memorable? Why?

3.

What was the most persuasive thing you heard?

4.

Which side won the debate? Why?

Peer Feedback #3
Paired Debate
1.
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________ Name one new thing you learned in this speech.

2.

What type of support materials did the speaker use?


___ Contrast ___ Statistics ___ Examples ___ Testimony ___ Comparisons ___ Quotations

Which one was most memorable? Why?

3.

What was the most persuasive thing you heard?

4.

Which side won the debate? Why?

Motivational Speech
Speech #5 Assignment
Thinking About This Assignment
We have heard motivational speeches all our lives: from coaches in locker rooms, from teachers in the classroom, from clergy in the pulpit. In each context, the speaker usually does three things: 1) makes the problem clear, 2) gives us examples and stories of the problem, and 3) asks us to do something at the end. This something to do is usually very specific: win the game, make an A, love our neighbor. This action step is crucial to motivational speaking. What do you want the audience to do as a result of hearing your speech? A second crucial element in most motivational speeches is narrative: motivational speakers tell lots of stories-stories of failure, stories of success, if things go on this way . . . stories, and Watch out! This could happen to you! stories. These stories illustrate, and make real, the problem and the solution. Like every speech in this class, this speech assignment should start with you. What makes you really mad? Whats a problem that needs fixing? What can we change if well just do it? This line of thinking is already in the problem/solution vein. But what if the audience doesnt agree that theres a problem? Ah! Thats your job convince them there is problem, and show them the step(s) they can take to fix it.

Time limit: 4-6 minutes.

Objectives of This Assignment


to incorporate support materials and a personal experience story to lead to an action step to demonstrate all the principles of effective public speaking learned throughout the semester

Steps to Building a Motivational Speech


1. Whats the problem!?
Work hard on this one by asking yourself if you can make this problem important to the audience, relevant to the audience, and solve-able by the audience.

2. Conduct library research.


Your speech must include at least three of the following kinds of support: statistics expert testimony lay testimony quotations examples stories you collect from published sources a personal experience story

3. Whats your action step?


This speech must conclude with an action

step, something you ask your audience to do. Your action step should be specific, important, with the potential to lead to real change. Call your legislator, or write a letter are terrible action stepspeople rarely do that. So be specific in what you want the audience to do and make the action reasonable to accomplish. Action steps are always dependent upon the persuasive appeals that came before, but one particularly effective speech involved organ donations. In Texas, all drivers licenses contain a signature line that indicates a person wishes to be an organ donor. At the beginning of the speech, the speaker asked the audience to put their drivers licenses (picture side up) in front of them on the desks. She then established the breadth of the problem with lack of donors (waiting lists, needless deaths when cures are available, statistics, testimony, etc.). In the conclusion, the speaker summarized the points of the speech, restated her thesis, and then ended with her Action Step. She invited everyone to turn their drivers licenses over and sign, agreeing right then and thereto take the action she suggested and become organ donors.

Questions? Write them here.

Checklist on
Speech Day

4. Outline your speech. 5. Rehearse!

Bring my videotape Bring this Student Handbook Bring outline/notecards for speech Review evaluation form for Motivational Speech. Have I fulfilled all the requirements of the assignment? Review the criteria for Evaluating Speeches. What kind of grade can I expect? Other:

Requirements of This Assignment


the speech must feature at least three kinds of persuasive support the conclusion must include an action step

Sentence Outline
Motivational Speech
Speech Title: The Truth About False Teeth. Topic: General Purpose: Specific Purpose: Thesis: Good Oral Hygiene To Persuade

Dont just sit there. Do something!

I want my audience to get a dental examination on a regular basis and to know the importance of preventative dental treatment. Early detection of dental problems significantly increases your chances of keeping all your teeth your entire life, and in the long run costs you less economically and emotionally. I want everyone to go to the dentist for a checkup on a regular basis

Action Step:

I. Introduction
A. (I will have in fake gross teeth in my mouth and I will smile really big) I want everyone to smile at the person sitting next to you. It probably feels good to know your smile does not look like the one I am wearing now (I will take my fake teeth out). (attention getter) On the Tooth Fairys official web site, she states, if you are not true to your teeth they will be false to you. Considering that almost half of my mothers seven brothers and sisters had false teeth before they were forty years old, the consequences of poor oral hygiene is something that I have witnessed personally. (credibility) These painful consequences are something that all of our smiles may suffer from. (common ground) It is important for everyone to receive a dental checkup every 6 months because early detection of dental problems significantly increases your chances of keeping all your teeth your entire life, and in the long run costs you less economically and emotionally. (thesis)

B.

C. D.

E. F.

I want each and every single one of you to visit a dentist for a regular checkup as soon as possible. (action step) I will cover three truthful points: the truthful story of my moms false teeth, the truthful importance of prevention in dental care, and the truthful affordability of dental care. (preview)

Transition: I would like to begin by talking about what might happen if you do not have good dental hygiene.

II.

Body
A. The truthful story of why my mother got her false teeth, and the problems she still suffers from as a consequence of them. 1. When my mother was only 24 years old she got a complete set of false teeth. 2. As a child, her family could not afford to go to the dentist or doctor. a. As an adult she only visited the dentist for emergency treatment. b. Her current dentist recently told her that if she went to the dentist regularly as a child, the maintenance and preventative care she could have received would have prevented her from getting false teeth in the first place. 3. Her original false teeth bottoms did not fit properly and gave her horrible blisters, and instead of going back to the dentist chose not to wear her bottom teeth regularly for over 10 years. a. She could only eat soft foods. b. She talked different. c. She was in constant pain. d. She never smiled. 4. Eventually the pain became unbearable and she went back to the dentist, and he fit her for new teeth. a. She looked and felt a lot better. b. She would never again deprive herself from eating hard foods like peanuts. c. She smiled a lot more. 5. Most recently, from a regular check-up it was detected that the bone in my mothers lower jaw is very worn down and weak from years of not constantly wearing her lower teeth. a. Her dentist designed some new bottom teeth that are lighter and put less pressure on her bone. b. I have yet to see them but my brother says she looks 10 years younger because they lift her face up.

Transition: Now that you have heard about personal experience with dental hygiene, I want to talk about how you can avoid what happened to my mother.

B.

The truthful importance of dental prevention and the need to go to the dentist for regular dental examinations. 1. According to 2002 information published by Colgate, among the top ten things you can do to keep a tooth for life is get regular dental checkups amongst brushing and flossing daily. 2. According to practicing dentist and clinic instructor at the University of Pacific School of Dentistry Dr. Kimberly A. Loos, Luckily, dentistry has changed quite a bit in the last several years. Many dentists now stress preventative care, which is usually much easier and less painful than emergency care. a. In the above example with my mother, her current dentist informed her that the bone deterioration she is suffering from in her lower jaw could have been prevented if she would have gone back to the dentist as soon as she felt discomfort with her first set of dentures. b. Example of a middle age woman who is suffering horrible consequences from periodontal disease, but with early detection could have been prevented. i. She has already lost one front tooth almost equivalent to 1 of a tooth. ii. She has another front tooth that needs to be pulled. iii. Her bottom teeth are spread far apart and need dental treatment. iv. She says regarding her condition, I am practically a hermit since it happened, and in a severe depression which is worsening. 3. According to a 2002 report from the American Dental Association, it is estimated that individuals who have had the privilege to go to the dentist on a regular basis for checkups since childhood need 68% less major dental treatments such as dentures, root canals, and crowns than those you have not. a. Three out of my mothers seven brothers and sisters had a complete set of false teeth by the time they were 40. b. Three of the other seven have a partial set of false teeth.

Transition: Even though it may be expensive to have regular dental exams, I am going to tell you how it will really pay off in the long run. C. The truthful affordability of dental care in terms of the money it will save you in the long run, and the how inexpensive dental care is. 1. Paying for preventative care costs a lot less than paying for emergency treatments. a. (Put transparency up with various prices of treatments typed in piggy bank icons. REVEAL ICONS AS I VERBALLY SAY PRICES) according to the Insurance Company.com the average price for dentures in this little piggy in Florida is $1216.00.

b. c. d. e.

This little piggy will cost you $689.00 for a root canal. This little piggy will cost you $450.00 to treat gingivitis. This little piggy will cost you $302.00 for a post and a crown. However, this little piggy for a regular examination will only cost you $35.00 and that is before insurance.

2. Since we are all USF students we can look into getting dental discounts through USF, or you can get a discount program on-line for a similar price such as the Insurance Company.com. a. According to the USF Student Health Service Web Site, student members are offered the Benefits Plan of America or BPA. i. $129.00 a year total saves you 80% off dental work, 60% off vision care, and 50% of chiropractic care. ii. similar programs such as The Insurance Company.com offered on-line for small monthly premiums of $9.00 b. With the USF Benefits Plan of America (put another transparency up with little piggybanks and prices) this little piggy that cost you $ 35.00 for a Periodic Oral Evaluation will only cost you $7.00. c. This little piggy that cost $19.00 for an x-ray will cost you 3.80. d. The price you pay for the benefits plan, 2 yearly examinations with 2 x-rays is only 42 cents a day. i. Less than $3.00 a week. ii. It may be enough to feed a starving child, but it is less than the cost of a value meal at Mc Donalds. iii. Less than the cost of a large iced chai at star bucks. e. To get the Benefits Plan, log onto health services at USF website and follow the directions. Transition: After hearing all of this information I have provided, I just have one request.

III.
basis.

Action Step:
A. B. C.

I want everyone to go to the dentist for a checkup on a regular

If you do not have dental insurance, you need to get it and visit a dentist. If you have dental insurance and are not going, make an appointment to go to the dentist as soon as possible. If you already are going to the dentist regularly, keep up the good work.

Transition: I want to finish up by leaving you all with these thoughts.

IV. Conclusion

A.

I covered three truthful points: the truthful story of my moms false teeth, the truthful importance of prevention in dental care, and the truthful affordability of dental care. (review) It is important for everyone to receive a dental checkup every 6 months because early detection of dental problems significantly increases your chances of keeping all your teeth your entire life, and in the long run cost you less economically and emotionally. (restate thesis) I want each and every single one of you to visit a dentist for a regular checkup as soon as possible. (action step) Once again I want everyone to smile at the person sitting next to you. (I will put a picture on the overhead of my mother smiling without any teeth in). Now I would like you to look at what my mothers toothless smile looks like. Never take for granted the luxury of having a truthful, tooth-ful smile. My mother really wants you to go to the dentist because if you are true to your teeth, they will never be false to you. (clincher)

B.

C. D.

Bibliography
American Dental Association (2002). Information and Facts about Oral Hygiene. Colgate-Palmolive Company (2002). Colgate Family Guide to Oral Care. Loos, K.A. How to Find a Good Dentist (2002). Parents Guide to Adolescent Teeth Care The Insurance Company Retrieved on June 1, 2002 from www.insurancecompany.com The Tooth Fairy (2002). Retrieved on June 1, 2002 from www.toothfairy.org University of South Florida Student Health Services (2001). Retrieved on June 2, 2002 from www.web.shs.usf.edu

Speaking Outline
Motivational Speech
1
Introduction Smile next to you. Tooth fairy website: If you are not true to your teeth, they will be false to you. My aunts/uncles Painful consequences Thesis: Dental check-up 6 monthsearly detection, prevention costs less 2nd point: dental prevention A. 2002 Colgate keep a tooth for lifeget regular checkups, brush & floss daily

Use your visuals as talking notes, too.

3 Preview Trans: reg. checks expensive? pay off in long run. 1. true story 2. prevention 3rd 3. affordabilitypoint: affordable dental care. A. Less than ER treatments (InsuranceCompany.com) 1st point: Moms story SHOW ICONS ON OVERHEADUSE THEM 24 yrs oldfalse teeth AS no early care NOTES FOR THIS SECTION bad fitting false teeth/pain/new teeth B. USF dental lower jaw deterioration discounts (Student Health Service web site) 1. story, how to avoid Trans: moms$129 saves 80% dental work, 60% vision, 50% chiropractic 2. InsuranceCompany.com $9 month 3. USF Benefits Plan of America (ICONs AS NOTES)
Trans: After all this, one request. Action: Reg. dental check-ups. Dental insur? Get it. Make appoint. Going to dentist? Keep up good work.

B. Dr. Kimberly A. Loos (U of Pacific Dentistry School): Luckily denistry has changed quite a b it in the last several years. Many dentists now stress preventative care, which is usually much easier and less painful than emergency care. (like moms pain) C. Woman w/ periodontal disease lost one tooth another tooth pulled bottom teeth spread she says: I am practically a hermit since it happened, and in a severe depression which is worsening. Review D. Reg. childhood check-ups 68% less major 1) moms story dental treatments (ADA 2002) 2) prevention 3) affordability Thesis: Checkup 6 monthsearly detective, prevention costs less Action: Get checked Clincher: Smile next to you again. New pic of Mom. Luxury of truthful, tooth-ful smile. My mother really wants you to go to the dentist because if you are true to your teeth, they will never be false to you.

Evaluation Form
Motivational Speech
Introduction Needs work
Gained attention? Established speakers credibility? Common ground with audience? Previewed body of speech? One-sentence statement of thesis?

Speakers Name_________________________________ Action Step _____________________________________

Very Good

Average

Body
Main points clear? Organizational pattern clear? Transitions helpful? Support material?

Conclusion
Prepared audience for ending? Reviewed main points? Reinforced thesis? Vivid clincher?

Delivery
Maintained strong eye contact? Use of brief notes? Exuded poise and confidence? Extemporaneous style?

Overall Evaluation
Topic challenging? Specific purpose well chosen? Message adapted to audience? Held interest of audience?

Requirements of Assignment
3 kinds of support? Action step?

Additional Comments/Grade:

Name
Excellent Good Needs work Fair

Topic
Missing

Grade
SUGGESTIONS

INTRODUCTION
Attention Getter Audience Motivation Established Credibility Clear/Appropriate Thesis Preview of Main Points

______ Work on a more effective attention-getter ______ Specifically relate the topic to your audience ______ Explicitly state your credibility ______ Explicitly state what you are going to talk about (1st, 2nd, 3rd)

BODY
Organizational Structure Transitions Clear Main Points Held Audience Interest

______ Work on clearer organization pattern ______ Include transitions and signposts

______ Incorporate more thorough research (more or varied sources) ______ Cite your research sources ______ Use a wider variety of verbal support (Include at least one story) ______ Include visual support aids _____ Follow the guidelines for visual support in Ch. ____

CONTENT
Challenging Topic Verbal Support Visual Support Quality of Research Quality of Outline

______ Follow outline samples in the Textbook Ch. ____ or Handbook ______ Include a bibliography

CONCLUSION
Review Reinforced Thesis Vivid Clincher

______ Summarize main points ______ End with impact

DELIVERY
Use of Notes Eye Contact Voice & Language Gestures

______ Avoid reading your notes; use key words only ______ Increase eye contact ______ Increase volume ______ Use vocal variety ______ Show your enthusiasm!

OTHER
3 Kinds of Support

______ Incorporate more gestures/ movement ______ Think about your self-

presentation ______ Watch disfluencies Action Step

Peer Feedback #1
Motivational Speech
1.
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________

What was the action step of this speech?

2.

Were you persuaded to take this step? Why or why not?

3.

How has this speaker most improved over the semester?

Peer Feedback #2
Motivational Speech
1.
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________

What was the action step of this speech?

2.

Were you persuaded to take this step? Why or why not?

3.

How has this speaker most improved over the semester?

Peer Feedback #3
Motivational Speech
1.
Speaker's Name_________________________________ Observer's Name________________________________

What was the action step of this speech?

2.

Were you persuaded to take this step? Why or why not?

3.

How has this speaker most improved over the semester?

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