Are you still playing flute?

Are you still playing your flute?

When there is hardly time for our love I am feeling guilty To be longing for your song The melody concealed in the slim hollow of the bamboo Uncovered by the breath of an artist Composed by his fingers Blown by the wind To the depth of my heart.

Are you still playing your flute?

In the village so quiet and deserted Amidst the sick rice fields While here it has become a luxury To spend time watching the rain Gazing at the evening rays Collecting dew drops Or enjoying the fragrance of flowers.

Are you still playing your flute?

The more it disturbs my conscience to be thinking of you in the hazard of you my younger brothers unemployed and desperate my people disunited by politics my friend slaughtered mercilessly this world is too old and bleeding.

Synopsis
Persona who reminisces the time he/she spends when in a village. There are many things that are now luxury to her such as listening to the melody of the flute itself, gazing at the evening rays, collecting dew drops, or enjoying the fragrance of flowers. The village is now unpopulated as many have moved to the city. Now that she has moved on with her life, she wonders whether the flutist is still playing the flute. This is because, there are many challenges in the world today such as the world is dying, the unemployment issue and the people are disunited because of different political views.

Family commitments

Themes
Neglect of ones duties

Priorities in life

THE CONCEPT MAP OF THE POEM

This poem his about a persona who reminisces the time he/she spends when in a village. There are many things that are now luxury to her such as listening to the melody of the flute itself, gazing at the evening rays, collecting dew drops, or enjoying the fragrance of flowers. The village is now unpopulated as many have moved to the city. Now that she has moved on with her life, she wonders whether the flutist is still playing the flute. This is because, there are many challenges in the world today such as the world is dying, the unemployment issue and the people are disunited because of different political views. Rhetorical question Descriptive and questioning Simple style and no rhyme Imagery e.g. blown by the wind, depth of my heart Alliteration e.g. fragrance of flowers Symbol e.g. flute, song Repetition e.g. Are you still playing your flute? Figurative Language Metaphor e.g. The melody concealed in the slime hollow of bamboo Personification e.g. sick rice field 3rd point of view Addressing another person & describing the situation to him

POETIC DEVICES
LANGUAGE AND STYLE OVERVIEW
MOOD, ATMOSPHERE Are you still playing your flute?

PERSONA TONE
Appealing Regretful

THEMES MORAL VALUES

Sombre and regretful Serious atmosphere

Family commitment Priorities in life Neglect of ones duties

We should be aware of our family commitments and carry them out properly. Everyone has priorities in, life and we should know what is important and what is not. Follow a hobby is good but there is a time for work and a time for play.