IELTS writing

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Review
第十三讲 句子写作
GOALS for TODAY
 简单句

 并列句

 状语从句、名词性从句

 定语从句

 标点符号
简单句
• 要点一

• 如果两个简单句没有因果关系，基本上是两个独立的事情，往往可以简
单地用and相连
• Children are not sensitive to prices
• Parents prefer to satisfy their needs
• Children are not sensitive to prices and parents prefer to satisfy their
needs
简单句
• 要点二

• 如果两个简单句有一定的因果关系，往往可以用状语从句相连
 if和when引导条件状语从句
• If advertising campagins directed at children are regulated,children will
not pester their parents to buy many goods for them.

 since,as,because,so等引导原因或者结果状语从句，表示比较强的因果
关系
• Some children like fast food since they are overwhelmed by fast food
advertisements every day.
简单句

• 要点三

• 如果状语从句怕重复，可以用and(或者;) + 连接词的方式
• 很多连接词也表示因果关系，because of this、as a result of this、
consequently、as a consequence 等
• Some children are addicted to violent video games,and because of
this,they can show aggression and bully their peers at school.
简单句

• 要点四

• 如果一个单句的最后一个单词和第二个单句的第一个单词重复，可以用
定语从句连接
• Children are increasingly temperamental due to their addiction to violent
electronic games.These games are normally promoted by advertising
firms.
• Children are increasingly temperamental due to their addiction to violent
electronic games,which are normally promoted by advertising firms.
简单句

• 要点五

• 如果第二个单句是第一个单句的结果，可以适当使用非限制性定语从句
• Advertisements have given a lot of information about products.This
enables parents to make well-informed buying decisions.
• Advertisements have given a lot of information about products,which
can help parents to make well-informed buying decisions.
并列句

• 并列句使用的三种语境

• 前后两个分句有一定的因果关系
• 前后两个分句并列，相连增加句子的复杂性
• 前后两个分句共用某个部分，可以连接，变得简洁
并列句

• 并列句使用需要注意的三个要点

 要点一：注意事情的先后顺序
• 并列句的前半句一般发生在后半句的事情之前；或者前半句的事情要比
后半句次要.
• Renting a house,instead of buying it,can improve living standards and
reduce the burden on people.
• Renting a house,instead of buying it,can reduce the burden on people
and help them save money to improve living standards.
并列句

• 并列句使用需要注意的三个要点

 要点二：注意第二个分句的动词和主语是否匹配
• By providing community services,students can improve skills and enrich
their experience.
• By providing community services,students can improve skills and
increase their experience.
并列句

• 并列句使用需要注意的三个要点

 要点三：注意两个分句并列成分的清晰，避免语意不清
• 有时候第一个分句出现两个或者更多的动词，而第二个分句就可能产生
歧义
• Domestic firms have to cut prices to overcome competition and invest
heavily in research and development.
• Domestic firms have to cut prices to overcome competition ,and invest
heavily in research and development.
定语从句

定语从句的五个应用

 应用一：放在句首，替换状语从句

• If people decide how to live their lives,they will possibly be happier.

• People who decide how to live their lives will possibly be happier.
定语从句

定语从句的五个应用

 应用二：替换关键名词

• 题目中给出lead a healthy life关键词.

• People who are conscious of health may pay attention to fruit and
vegetables.
定语从句

定语从句的五个应用

 应用三：where 引导的定语从句解释某个地点所发生的事情

• where引导的定语从句，其从句是独立完整的句子

• People may not be able live an active life in large cities where they
have to spend most of their time working.
定语从句

定语从句的五个应用

 应用四：非限制性定语从句表示结果

• Some people may pay attention to fruit and vegetables in their

diets,which can help them keep fit and increase their confidence in work
and social lives.
定语从句

定语从句的五个应用

 应用五：前面一个单句的最后一个词如果和后面一个单句的第一个名词
重复，可以连在一起

• It is important to tighten regulation on some behaviours.Those

behaviours have been proven to be damaging to health.
• It is important to tighten regulation on some behaviours which have
been proven to be damaging to health.
标点符号

使用不同标点的5个差异：

差异一：分号和句号都类似于连词，连接两个独立的句子，而逗号不可以

Companies have to lay off some employees;it can reduce the running
cost.
标点符号

使用不同标点的5个差异：

差异二：逗号如果连接两个独立的句子，中间要有并列连词and或者or,but
等

They may decide to change their jobs,or they may be dismissed.

标点符号

使用不同标点的5个差异：

差异三：使用连接副词moreover,consequently,also,even,however等的时候，
只有前面加了分号或者句号，才可以连接独立的句子

In times of economic recession,companies have to lay off some employees

in order to reduce the running cost;in addition,any people have failed to
upgrade their skills.
标点符号

使用不同标点的5个差异：

差异四：分号和句号前后一定是独立的句子，因此，如果后面只有一个状语从
句，那么这句话就是错误的

Many people lose employment.Because they do not have the knowledge

about the newest generation of software
标点符号

使用不同标点的5个差异：

差异五：逗号决定了限制性定语从句和非限制性定语从句的区别
非限制性定语从句的标志就是从句前面有个逗号，可能修饰前面整句话，也可
能修饰前面的某个动词或名词

They may discover their talents and strengths when working for different
campanies,which can help them achieve petential
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Assignment

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