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Completing Business Messages

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Three-Step Writing Process


Planning
Analyze Situation Gather Information Select Medium Get Organized
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Writing

Completing
Revise Produce Proofread Distribute
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Adapt to the Audience

Compose the Message

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Moving Past the First Draft


Content, Organization, Style, and Tone Final Draft

Overall Readability

Clarity and Conciseness

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Revising the Message


Content Organization Style and Tone
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Reviewing for Readability


Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level Score

Flesch Reading Ease Score


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Increasing Skim Value


Sentences
Paragraphs Listed Items Headings
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Editing for Clarity


Sentence Style
Faulty Parallelism Dangling Modifiers Long Noun Sequences
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Editing for Clarity


Camouflaged Verbs
Sentence Structure Awkward References Excess Enthusiasm
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Editing for Conciseness


Wordy Constructions
Long Words or Phrases Redundant Wording It is/There are Starters
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Revising with Technology

Revision Tools

Spell Checker

Grammar Checker
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Thesaurus

Style Checker
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Producing the Message


Multimedia Elements

Design Elements
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Multimedia Elements
Presentation Software Graphics Software

Video Clips and Sound Bites

Hypertext Markup Language

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Designing for Readability


Message Effectiveness

Audience Perceptions
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Design Elements
Consistency
Balance Detail Restraint
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Design Techniques

White Space Margins

Justification
Typefaces

Type Styles
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Using Technology
Templates and Style Sheets Page Setup Column Formatting

Paragraph Formatting

Numbered and Bulleted Lists

Tables and Textboxes

Pictures and Objects

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Format for Business-Letters


Letterhead Stationery Date Salutation
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Inside Address

The Message
Complimentary Close

Signature Block

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Format for Memos


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Headings

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The Message

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Proofreading Your Message


Grammar and Usage Edited Copy Punctuation Design Errors Spelling Errors and Typos Final Report

Missing Material

Overall Format

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Proofreading Advice
Make multiple passes
Use perceptual tricks

Get some distance


Stay focused and vigilant Review hardcopy documents Double-check high-priority items
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Distributing the Message


Cost Concerns Convenience Time Constraints Security and Privacy
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